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Kabhi Tum Chaahat Se Bulaa Lo
Udaas Bahut HooN Paas Bithaa Lo...
Mujhse Door Rehke Royee Bahut Ho
Chalo Ab Aankh Me Kaajal Lagaa Lo...
Acchaa Nahi Lagtaa Khafaa Rehna
Roothaa Hoon Aake Zara Manaa Lo...
Dar Lagta Hai Jaati BahaaroN Se
Kahin Tum Haath Naa ChhuDaa Lo...
Zamaane Ka Chehraa Gar Buraa Hai
Toh Apne Saamne Se Aaina Hataa Lo...
Jab Jeenaa-Marnaa Hai Saath Tum Ko
Le Ke "Naresh" Se Sindoor Lagaa Lo...
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«Reply #1 on: August 29, 2010, 07:47:54 PM » |
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Achhi nazm hai aapki....naresh ji.......  Zamaane Ka Chehraa Gar Buraa Hai Toh Apne Saamne Se Aaina Hataa Lo... Par is sher mai aap kya kehna chahte hain nahi samajh aaya........? Kabhi Tum Chaahat Se Bulaa Lo
Udaas Bahut HooN Paas Bithaa Lo...
Mujhse Door Rehke Royee Bahut Ho
Chalo Ab Aankh Me Kaajal Lagaa Lo...
Acchaa Nahi Lagtaa Khafaa Rehna
Roothaa Hoon Aake Zara Manaa Lo...
Dar Lagta Hai Jaati BahaaroN Se
Kahin Tum Haath Naa ChhuDaa Lo...
Zamaane Ka Chehraa Gar Buraa Hai
Toh Apne Saamne Se Aaina Hataa Lo...
Jab Jeenaa-Marnaa Hai Saath Tum Ko
Le Ke "Naresh" Se Sindoor Lagaa Lo...
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«Reply #2 on: August 29, 2010, 11:04:29 PM » |
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Naresh Jee aadaab!
Aapki nayi koshish acchi lagi hume.....
Sabhi ashaar sidhe se lafzoN meiN gehrai liye hai....
Chaliye aapke asharoN per aate hai... Kabhi Tum Chaahat Se Bulaa Lo
Udaas Bahut HooN Paas Bithaa Lo...
Kia baat hai masoom sa matla kah diya aapne
Mujhse Door Rehke Royee Bahut Ho
Chalo Ab Aankh Me Kaajal Lagaa Lo...
Naresh Jee eh sher kuch ajeeb sa laga hume, ek nazar meiN kajal ka rabta banta hai ek nazar meiN nahi banta nazar aa raha hai... Khair bante hua ko pakad lete hai.
Acchaa Nahi Lagtaa Khafaa Rehna
Roothaa Hoon Aake Zara Manaa Lo...
Bahut sadaa sa hai per behad asardaar.. Daar janab.. Dil ke kareeb raha ..
Dar Lagta Hai Jaati BahaaroN Se
Kahin Tum Haath Naa ChhuDaa Lo...
Bahut umdaa ek dum perfect sher hua hai yeh... Dil se daad...
Zamaane Ka Chehraa Gar Buraa Hai
Toh Apne Saamne Se Aaina Hataa Lo...
Kia baat hai janab..... aapka anubhav hai jo aapne sach aise khoob lafzoN meiN bayaaN kiya bahut umdaa.... Dil se daad
Jab Jeenaa-Marnaa Hai Saath Tum Ko
Le Ke "Naresh" Se Sindoor Lagaa Lo...
hhhmmmm Achcha kaha hai ....
Naresh Jee aapki yeh creation achchi rahi.... Daad janab.....
Likhate rahiye......
Khush rahiye....
Khuda Hafez ......
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«Reply #3 on: August 29, 2010, 11:39:35 PM » |
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bahut bahut khoob likha hai aapne Naresh ji... bahut achcha laga padh ke.... !!!
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«Reply #4 on: August 29, 2010, 11:47:46 PM » |
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Bahaut bahaut khoob Naresh jee.!
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«Reply #5 on: August 31, 2010, 07:12:54 AM » |
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Kabhi Tum Chaahat Se Bulaa Lo
Udaas Bahut HooN Paas Bithaa Lo...
Mujhse Door Rehke Royee Bahut Ho
Chalo Ab Aankh Me Kaajal Lagaa Lo...
Acchaa Nahi Lagtaa Khafaa Rehna
Roothaa Hoon Aake Zara Manaa Lo...
Dar Lagta Hai Jaati BahaaroN Se
Kahin Tum Haath Naa ChhuDaa Lo...
Zamaane Ka Chehraa Gar Buraa Hai
Toh Apne Saamne Se Aaina Hataa Lo...
Jab Jeenaa-Marnaa Hai Saath Tum Ko
Le Ke "Naresh" Se Sindoor Lagaa Lo...
Good one Naresh Ji |
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«Reply #6 on: August 31, 2010, 07:19:47 PM » |
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NARESH JEE BAHUT UMDAH PESHKASH HAI AAPKEE.......BEHAD SAADAA OR MASOOMIYAT SE BHAREE HUI...AAP KEE OR SE PRVEZ JEE KO 2END SHER KE BAARE ME KUCH KAHNA CHAAHOONGEE.....ISE ANYATHA NA LEN......
IS SHAIR ME RABT BANTA DIKHAYEE DETAA HAI MUJHE .....YE MERI RAI HAI.......OR MERAA ANUBHAV BHEE.....RONE KE BAAD, AANKHON KEE SOOJAN KO KAJAL LAGA KAR KAFI HAD TAK CHUPAANE KEE KOSHISH KEE JATEE HAI...OR YE SOONI AANKHON KO PHIR SE SAJAANE SE MUTALLIQ BHEE HAI.....SHINGAAR KHUSHEE KA DHYOTAK (IDENTIFICATION) BHEE HAI....BADTAR HAALAAT SE BEHTAREE KI OR LE JANE KA BHAV BHEE....
YE SIRF MERA NAZARIYA HAI OR MAI IS PAR AAP KEE RAI BHEE JAN-NA CHAAHOONGEE.
MAMTA BAJPAI
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«Reply #7 on: September 01, 2010, 12:07:56 AM » |
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Kabhi Tum Chaahat Se Bulaa Lo
Udaas Bahut HooN Paas Bithaa Lo...
Mujhse Door Rehke Royee Bahut Ho
Chalo Ab Aankh Me Kaajal Lagaa Lo...
Acchaa Nahi Lagtaa Khafaa Rehna
Roothaa Hoon Aake Zara Manaa Lo...
Dar Lagta Hai Jaati BahaaroN Se
Kahin Tum Haath Naa ChhuDaa Lo...
Zamaane Ka Chehraa Gar Buraa Hai
Toh Apne Saamne Se Aaina Hataa Lo...
Jab Jeenaa-Marnaa Hai Saath Tum Ko
Le Ke "Naresh" Se Sindoor Lagaa Lo...
BAHUT KHOOB ANSHMALI SAHAB KYA ZINDADIL ESRAAR HAI...IS KALAAM MEIN....DAAD HAZIR HAI JANAB |
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«Reply #8 on: September 01, 2010, 02:23:06 AM » |
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NARESH JEE BAHUT UMDAH PESHKASH HAI AAPKEE.......BEHAD SAADAA OR MASOOMIYAT SE BHAREE HUI...AAP KEE OR SE PRVEZ JEE KO 2END SHER KE BAARE ME KUCH KAHNA CHAAHOONGEE.....ISE ANYATHA NA LEN......
IS SHAIR ME RABT BANTA DIKHAYEE DETAA HAI MUJHE .....YE MERI RAI HAI.......OR MERAA ANUBHAV BHEE.....RONE KE BAAD, AANKHON KEE SOOJAN KO KAJAL LAGA KAR KAFI HAD TAK CHUPAANE KEE KOSHISH KEE JATEE HAI...OR YE SOONI AANKHON KO PHIR SE SAJAANE SE MUTALLIQ BHEE HAI.....SHINGAAR KHUSHEE KA DHYOTAK (IDENTIFICATION) BHEE HAI....BADTAR HAALAAT SE BEHTAREE KI OR LE JANE KA BHAV BHEE....
YE SIRF MERA NAZARIYA HAI OR MAI IS PAR AAP KEE RAI BHEE JAN-NA CHAAHOONGEE.
MAMTA BAJPAI
Jee Mamtaa Jee aapki baat aur rai ekdum durust hai..... Aur aapne jaise samjhaya hum achche se samjh gaye..... Us waqt humare zahen meiN aisi rabt nahi ban payi thi isliye i kahe hum.......
Humare zahen meiN aisi rabt bani ke.....
Rone se kajal bah gaya hai isliye shayar shaab kah rahe hai, bahut roi ho chalo ab kajal laga lo...
Khair rabta to bana hai.... Us waqt na banne ki surat samne thi humare abi woh surat yaad nahi aa rahi hai...  |
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«Reply #9 on: September 02, 2010, 10:15:14 PM » |
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Achhi nazm hai aapki....naresh ji....... Zamaane Ka Chehraa Gar Buraa Hai Toh Apne Saamne Se Aaina Hataa Lo... Par is sher mai aap kya kehna chahte hain nahi samajh aaya........? koyal Ji aapki pasandegi aur daad ka bahut bahut shukriya... aur rahi sher ki baat hai... agar tumhe zamaane ki koi baat pasand nahi hai... toh apna dhiyaan waha se hataa lo....aisa maine kehne ki koshish ki hai.....khush rahen... apna khayal rakheN... duaaon ke saath.... |
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«Reply #10 on: September 03, 2010, 04:06:17 PM » |
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Thanks for explaining....Nareshji Mujhe "Aaina"(mirror) shabd ne confuse kiya....aam touur par hum aaina apni shakl dekhne ko estemaal karte hain....esliye ajeeb laga...aap soch kar dekhiye.....apna chera nahi dekhne se kya hoga ? Zamaane ka chehra agar buraa hai
Tou apni nazar kahin aur ghuma lo ye jayada sahi rahega... koyal Ji aapki pasandegi aur daad ka bahut bahut shukriya... aur rahi sher ki baat hai... agar tumhe zamaane ki koi baat pasand nahi hai... toh apna dhiyaan waha se hataa lo....aisa maine kehne ki koshish ki hai.....khush rahen...
apna khayal rakheN...
duaaon ke saath....
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«Reply #11 on: September 04, 2010, 09:29:46 AM » |
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Naresh Jee aadaab!
Aapki nayi koshish acchi lagi hume.....
Sabhi ashaar sidhe se lafzoN meiN gehrai liye hai....
Chaliye aapke asharoN per aate hai...
Naresh Jee aapki yeh creation achchi rahi.... Daad janab.....
Likhate rahiye......
Khush rahiye....
Khuda Hafez ......
Sameer Ji .... Aapki purkhuloos taareef aur khaas daad ka bahut bahut shukriya..... aise hi huasla badhaate rahen aur apna saath nibhaate rahe ...aage bhii .....khush rahen... duaaon ke saath... |
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«Reply #12 on: September 05, 2010, 02:55:55 PM » |
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bahut bahut khoob likha hai aapne Naresh ji... bahut achcha laga padh ke.... !!!
Aapki pasandegi aur khaas daad ka bahut bahtu shukriya ... Klaskar Ji ...aise hi hausla badhaate rahen aage bhii... khush rahen... duaaon ke saath.... |
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«Reply #13 on: September 05, 2010, 03:03:52 PM » |
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god one Anshumali ji!!
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«Reply #14 on: September 06, 2010, 08:58:39 AM » |
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Kabhi Tum Chaahat Se Bulaa Lo
Udaas Bahut HooN Paas Bithaa Lo...
Mujhse Door Rehke Royee Bahut Ho
Chalo Ab Aankh Me Kaajal Lagaa Lo...
Acchaa Nahi Lagtaa Khafaa Rehna
Roothaa Hoon Aake Zara Manaa Lo...
Dar Lagta Hai Jaati BahaaroN Se
Kahin Tum Haath Naa ChhuDaa Lo...
Zamaane Ka Chehraa Gar Buraa Hai
Toh Apne Saamne Se Aaina Hataa Lo...
Jab Jeenaa-Marnaa Hai Saath Tum Ko
Le Ke "Naresh" Se Sindoor Lagaa Lo...
Ji ... Very Nice ... Very Sweet ... Very Touching... dil se daad |
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