*** Ulzaan***

by neelgold on May 18, 2010, 12:51:49 AM
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Dalthi hui shaam ke saye , is trah sata gaye muze
Jindgi ke kuch sawal is trah ulza gaye muze

Kyon kamosh reh gaye main saab kuch jaan ke
Dil main gutan reh gaye baki bache hue armaan ke

Saza ke mehfil bethe rehe hum bus tere naam ki
Voh haar ek gadi tarpha gaye hume jo uss sham ki

Nahi ana tha to koi acha bahana hi bana lete
Use hum saach maan ke seene se to laga lete

Tadpti tadp ke reh gayi haar sans yaad main
kyonki
Fir se mila gulab vohi aaj kissi purani kitab main

Yadion pe cha gaye fir se voh ganghor ghatye
Abb bi muze preshan kar jati hai ,
meri hi voh khamosh adaian

***Neel***
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«Reply #1 on: May 18, 2010, 12:58:45 AM »
Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Neel Back With A Bang

aate hi dhamaka... bahut achcha likha hai aapne Neel ji... bahut khoob...!!!

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«Reply #2 on: May 18, 2010, 01:04:00 AM »
Aree itna WC thnx ji ..

yh chod to chuke the issliye itne din aaye nahi bt tum le hi aaye vapis ... fir yaha aah ke read karo to yeh ho hi nahi sakta ki aap kuch likhne ke liye inspire na ho .....
U guys alwyz insiprd me

THNXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXX

Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Neel Back With A Bang

aate hi dhamaka... bahut achcha likha hai aapne Neel ji... bahut khoob...!!!

 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause


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«Reply #3 on: May 18, 2010, 01:12:45 AM »
U r welcome sarkaar... !!! Usual Smile

Aree itna WC thnx ji ..

yh chod to chuke the issliye itne din aaye nahi bt tum le hi aaye vapis ... fir yaha aah ke read karo to yeh ho hi nahi sakta ki aap kuch likhne ke liye inspire na ho .....
U guys alwyz insiprd me

THNXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXX

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«Reply #4 on: May 18, 2010, 04:13:01 AM »
Bahut Khubsurt Likha Hai Neel Ji,,,,Bahut Khoob....
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«Reply #5 on: May 18, 2010, 04:44:42 AM »
Wah kya adaaye hai aapke likhne ka Neel ji,marvelous and heart touching creation,bahut acha likhti hai aap, Hats off to you! icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #6 on: May 18, 2010, 05:08:44 AM »
Bahut hi umda likha hai aap ne Neel Ji

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«Reply #7 on: May 18, 2010, 01:18:08 PM »
Wah wah wah !!! kya baat hai Neel-di...
ati sunder bhav...dard aur shikaayat... Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Par sada khush rehne wali aur sab ko hassane wali neel-di.......  icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower
khud kis Ulzaan mai pad gayee..... icon_scratch icon_scratch icon_scratch icon_scratch
Zindagi tou khud ek Ulzaan hai.....
jo har roj kuchh naya drama dikhati hai.... Is it SO! Is it SO! Is it SO! Is it SO! Is it SO! Is it SO! Is it SO! Is it SO! Is it SO!

Leejeeye chand line aapki Ulzaan ko suljha ne k liye....

Jindagi ek prashn ban kar khadee ho gayee
Main jawaab dhundte-2 khud mai kho gayee

Aur Maine Na jaane kitne panne jeevan k palat diye
Kitne he khushnuma lamhe they tou kuchh oodasi liye

Sochti rahi poori shaam kya ye sabb maine jiye
Kuchh unke saath to kuchh akele he jaayaa kiye


Dalthi hui shaam ke saye , is trah sata gaye muze
Jindgi ke kuch sawal is trah ulza gaye muze

Kyon kamosh reh gaye main saab kuch jaan ke
Dil main gutan reh gaye baki bache hue armaan ke

Saza ke mehfil bethe rehe hum bus tere naam ki
Voh haar ek gadi tarpha gaye hume jo uss sham ki

Nahi ana tha to koi acha bahana hi bana lete
Use hum saach maan ke seene se to laga lete

Tadpti tadp ke reh gayi haar sans yaad main
kyonki
Fir se mila gulab vohi aaj kissi purani kitab main

Yadion pe cha gaye fir se voh ganghor ghatye
Abb bi muze preshan kar jati hai ,
meri hi voh khamosh adaian

***Neel***
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«Reply #8 on: May 18, 2010, 01:21:41 PM »
gud one neel.. Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #9 on: May 18, 2010, 06:16:18 PM »
bahut bahut khoob likha hai aapne Koyal ji... bahut hi pyaare lines likhe hain aapne...!!!


Jindagi ek prashn ban kar khadee ho gayee
Main jawaab dhundte-2 khud mai kho gayee

Aur Maine Na jaane kitne panne jeevan k palat diye
Kitne he khushnuma lamhe they tou kuchh oodasi liye

Sochti rahi poori shaam kya ye sabb maine jiye
Kuchh unke saath to kuchh akele he jaayaa kiye


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«Reply #10 on: May 19, 2010, 07:07:57 AM »
BAHUT KHOOB LIKHA HAI NEEL JI. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #11 on: May 19, 2010, 07:45:43 AM »
Bahut khoob Koyal sis,lovely lines. icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #12 on: May 19, 2010, 08:25:06 AM »
Hriday se shukriya aapka Kapil-ji......

bahut bahut khoob likha hai aapne Koyal ji... bahut hi pyaare lines likhe hain aapne...!!!

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«Reply #13 on: May 19, 2010, 08:35:27 AM »
Thank you Madhu-di for your continued support....

Sochti hu suljha duoo ho koi bhi ulzaan
Kahin bhi kisiki bhi sunlo sab dost-jan


Bahut khoob Koyal sis,lovely lines. icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #14 on: May 19, 2010, 12:35:14 PM »
Wah wah Neel ji kamaal ki poem likhi hai aapne. Dil ke jazbaat bahot saleeqe se pesh kiya hain aapne.
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