::Umeedein....::

by nidhi_yadein on March 26, 2007, 04:58:56 PM
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"Pyaar ki raahon pe bin soche chalte chale gaye,
 ek ummeed k sahare tujhe chaahte chale gaye,

 log mujhe dekh kar hanste rahe,kya kya kehte rahe,
 pyaar pe vishwas tha mujhe,sab sehte ham rahe,
 
 talaashti rahi ye nazrein ki kahin to tum dikh jao ab,
 ek parchaayi bhi nahi dikhi,gumsum si dishayein sab,

 akele hi aayi thi,akele hi lautna padega ab mujhe,
 ankho me nahi wo chamak,nam hain aaj bohat ye,

 mashoor tum huye aur badnaam ham hote chale gaye,
 fir bhi sanam ham tumse bepanah mohabbat karte rahe,

 aansuon ki kami nahi thi,aur lafz jaise kuch keh na sake,
 kuch yun ham toote,ki fir uthkar khade bhi ho na sake,

 dil jaise dhadakna bhool gaya,ankhein pathra si gayin,
 zindagi ki raahein jaise ek hi pal me simatt si gayin,

 kuch zyada hi umeedein shayad main tumse laga baithi,
 jeene ko jo mere paas ab ek bhi umeed na thi bachi,

 pathra chuki thi aankhein,zinda laash ban gayi main,
 ye thi meri dastaan,ishq me kuch yun barbaad hui main."
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«Reply #1 on: March 26, 2007, 05:09:42 PM »
Marvellous Nidhi.....bohot hi achcha hai....!!!! Usual Smile
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«Reply #2 on: March 26, 2007, 05:14:29 PM »
Thanx TalaT Usual Smile .
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«Reply #3 on: March 26, 2007, 05:17:06 PM »
xcellebt nidhi...........


aaj aacha laga tumhe yahan dekh ker..
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«Reply #4 on: March 26, 2007, 05:20:57 PM »
Thanx Ankur,mujhe bhi acha laga khud ko yahan dekh kar :D .
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«Reply #5 on: March 26, 2007, 05:48:52 PM »
Bahut badhiya nidhi jii.....!!!!!!!!
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«Reply #6 on: March 26, 2007, 06:03:01 PM »
Mind blowing one Nidhi ...
Really liked it ...
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«Reply #7 on: March 26, 2007, 06:09:57 PM »
Shuru jo hua daur dard-e-shehnaai ka,
To jhuk gaya sar mohabbat-e-bewafaai ka,
Hum chahte the ki unhe khushi de jaaye hum,
Par khatm hi na hua wo waqt buraai ka ...
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«Reply #8 on: March 26, 2007, 09:47:22 PM »
bahoot khoob Nidhi and JHL JI!!
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«Reply #9 on: March 27, 2007, 10:11:07 AM »
bahut bechen hai dil mera tere dard se
bheegi hai aankhen meri tere is dard se
kyun tu is dard main mitti chali ja rahi hai
ye teri zindgi hai ise kaise jiye ja rahi hai
maana kii mohabbat k khel main tujhe haar mili hai
magar jindgi k har panne par ek nayi ibarat mili hai
tu is ibarat kii sachchai ko apni zindgi main ootaar le
meri dosti kii khatir meri 'nidhi' ko thoda pyaar de


love u my dear frnd

na tootne de kabhi apni ummeedo ko
kii bikharte toh sirf bujdil hai
chatton se hone chahiye hosle tere
saath tere jo hum hai[/b]
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«Reply #10 on: March 27, 2007, 11:35:16 AM »
Nidhi

Aaj tumhara poorana hunar nazar aaya =D>

JHL and Salil

Aap ne achcha saath diya Nidhi ka !
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salil2002
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«Reply #11 on: March 27, 2007, 04:03:53 PM »
thnks bro
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sanya310
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«Reply #12 on: March 27, 2007, 07:29:36 PM »
amazing write nidhi! boht dino baad tumhari shayri padhne ko mili Usual Smile
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Aryaan
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«Reply #13 on: March 27, 2007, 09:52:39 PM »
Excellent Nidhi..  Good Ones JHL & Salil...
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«Reply #14 on: March 28, 2007, 04:14:44 AM »
Quote from: "nidhi_yadein"
"Pyaar ki raahon pe bin soche chalte chale gaye,
 ek ummeed k sahare tujhe chaahte chale gaye,

 log mujhe dekh kar hanste rahe,kya kya kehte rahe,
 pyaar pe vishwas tha mujhe,sab sehte ham rahe,
 
 talaashti rahi ye nazrein ki kahin to tum dikh jao ab,
 ek parchaayi bhi nahi dikhi,gumsum si dishayein sab,

 akele hi aayi thi,akele hi lautna padega ab mujhe,
 ankho me nahi wo chamak,nam hain aaj bohat ye,

 mashoor tum huye aur badnaam ham hote chale gaye,
 fir bhi sanam ham tumse bepanah mohabbat karte rahe,

 aansuon ki kami nahi thi,aur lafz jaise kuch keh na sake,
 kuch yun ham toote,ki fir uthkar khade bhi ho na sake,

 dil jaise dhadakna bhool gaya,ankhein pathra si gayin,
 zindagi ki raahein jaise ek hi pal me simatt si gayin,

 kuch zyada hi umeedein shayad main tumse laga baithi,
 jeene ko jo mere paas ab ek bhi umeed na thi bachi,

 pathra chuki thi aankhein,zinda laash ban gayi main,
 ye thi meri dastaan,ishq me kuch yun barbaad hui main."



It's touchy nidhi.....
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