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« on: February 06, 2010, 11:30:55 PM »
Kuch Der Saath Chalke Phir Chhorh Jate Hain
Haan Log Yun Hi Apni Raahein Morh Jate Hain.
 
Pahle Dikhate Hain Kahin Khwaab Haseen ,Aur
Phir Khud Hi Sari Umeedon Ko Torh Jate Hain.
 
Yun To Sambhal Lete Hain Hum Khud Ko Mgar
Kuch Lamhe Phir B Dil Ko Jhanjhor Jaate Hain.
 
Kya Krega Ruk K Ab Yahan Tera Koi Nhi Shihab
Chalo Aj Hum Bhi Is Bazm Ko Chhorh Jate Hain.!

                ~Shihab~
 
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« Reply #1 on: February 06, 2010, 11:34:55 PM »
Best lines from ur poem:

Pahle Dikhate Hain Kahin Khwaab Haseen ,Aur
Phir Khud Hi Sari Umeedon Ko Torh Jate Hain.
 
Yun To Sambhal Lete Hain Hum Khud Ko Magar
Kuch Lamhe Phir B Dil Ko Jhanjhor Jate Hain


Good creation shihab.. magar funny lines... Funy section mau jayada achi lagegi... yaha dard main nahi ///
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« Reply #2 on: February 07, 2010, 03:03:07 PM »
very nice creation shahib ji. icon_thumleft

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« Reply #3 on: February 07, 2010, 05:54:44 PM »
behad acha kalaam likha hai Shihab bhai  Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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« Reply #4 on: February 07, 2010, 07:05:02 PM »
Bahut Bahut Khoob Majid Bhai.. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Aakhiri Sher Edit kar dijiye,Aue Behtar Hoga Thumbs UP
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« Reply #5 on: February 07, 2010, 09:53:41 PM »
Nice Shihab Bhai
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« Reply #6 on: February 08, 2010, 02:43:11 PM »
Very touching and great creation Shihab ji.
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« Reply #7 on: February 08, 2010, 02:58:13 PM »
Wah wah Shihab kitni achhi poem likhi hai aapne. Ye lines bahut achhi lagin.
 
Kya Krega Ruk K Ab Yahan Tera Koi Nhi Shihab
Chalo Aj Hum Bhi Is Bazm Ko Chhorh Jate Hain.!
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« Reply #8 on: February 08, 2010, 03:53:24 PM »
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« Reply #9 on: February 10, 2010, 12:37:42 AM »
Quote from: Pooja on February 06, 2010, 11:34:55 PM
Best lines from ur poem:

Pahle Dikhate Hain Kahin Khwaab Haseen ,Aur
Phir Khud Hi Sari Umeedon Ko Torh Jate Hain.
 
Yun To Sambhal Lete Hain Hum Khud Ko Magar
Kuch Lamhe Phir B Dil Ko Jhanjhor Jate Hain


Good creation shihab.. magar funny lines... Funy section mau jayada achi lagegi... yaha dard main nahi ///

Bahut Bahut Shukariya Pooja Ji Pasand Karne K Liye
Aur Do Line Mein Funny Men Kahan Post Karta..
Bas Issi Se Jurhi Lagi So Kar Diya..Khair
Maafi Chahta Hun Aage Dhayan Rahega....

Shukariya Apna Waqt Dene K Liye...


Khush Rahiye...


~Shihab~
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« Reply #10 on: February 10, 2010, 12:39:18 AM »
Quote from: thinkhattk on February 07, 2010, 03:03:07 PM
very nice creation shahib ji. icon_thumleft

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Bahut Bahut Shukariya Pasand Farmane K Liye Aur Waqt Dene K Liye....


Khush Rahiye...


~Shihab~
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« Reply #11 on: February 10, 2010, 12:42:11 AM »
Quote from: @kaash on February 07, 2010, 05:54:44 PM
behad acha kalaam likha hai Shihab bhai  Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Bahut Bahut Shukariya Kaash Bhai
Pasand Farmane Aur Waqt Dene K Liye


Khush Rahiye...


~Shihab~
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« Reply #12 on: February 10, 2010, 12:45:33 AM »
Quote from: khwaish on February 07, 2010, 07:05:02 PM
Bahut Bahut Khoob Majid Bhai.. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Aakhiri Sher Edit kar dijiye,Aue Behtar Hoga Thumbs UP

Zahe Naseeb Ki Aapko Pasand Aaya.
Bahut Bahut Shukariya Khwaish Bhai
Parand Farmane Aur Waqt Dene K Liye
Aapka Tahe Dil Se Mamnun Hoon...

Aur Aap Kahen Aur Hum Na Karen
Aisa Kabhi Ho Sakta Hai Kya...
Lijiye Bhai Edit Kar Diya....

Umeed Karta Hun Aage Bhi Yun Hi
Saath Dete Rahenge Aap....

Khair

Khush Rahiye


~Shiahb~
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« Reply #13 on: February 10, 2010, 12:46:44 AM »
Quote from: Rishi Agarwal on February 07, 2010, 09:53:41 PM
Nice Shihab Bhai

Thanks Rishi Bhai...



Khush Rahiye...


~Shihab~
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« Reply #14 on: February 10, 2010, 12:49:12 AM »
Quote from: madhuwesh on February 08, 2010, 02:43:11 PM
Very touching and great creation Shihab ji.

Thanks For Appreciation Madhuwesh Ji



Khush Rahiye...


~Shihab~
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