Umeedon Ko Torh Jate Hain

by majid on February 06, 2010, 11:30:55 PM
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          Kuch Derr Saath  Chalke , Phir  Chhorh  Jaate Hain
          Haan Log Yun Hi Apni Raahein  , Morh  Jaate Hain.
          
          Pahle  Dikhate  Hain  Kahin  Khwaab  Haseen , Aur
          Phir  Khud Hi Sari  Umeedon  Ko , Torh  Jaate Hain.

          Yun To Sambhal Lete Hain  Hum Khud  Ko , Magar
          Kuch  Lamhe Phir Bhi  Dil  Ko , Jhanjhor Jaate Hain.
          
          Kya Karega Ruk K, Ab Yahan Tera Koi Nahi Shihab
          Chalo Aaj Hum Bhi Is Bazm Ko, Chhorh Jaate Hain.!

                      
                            ~Shihab~

 
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«Reply #1 on: February 06, 2010, 11:34:55 PM »
Best lines from ur poem:

Pahle Dikhate Hain Kahin Khwaab Haseen ,Aur
Phir Khud Hi Sari Umeedon Ko Torh Jate Hain.
 
Yun To Sambhal Lete Hain Hum Khud Ko Magar
Kuch Lamhe Phir B Dil Ko Jhanjhor Jate Hain


Good creation shihab.. magar funny lines... Funy section mau jayada achi lagegi... yaha dard main nahi ///
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«Reply #2 on: February 07, 2010, 03:03:07 PM »
very nice creation shahib ji. icon_thumleft

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«Reply #3 on: February 07, 2010, 07:05:02 PM »
Bahut Bahut Khoob Majid Bhai.. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

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«Reply #4 on: February 07, 2010, 09:53:41 PM »
Nice Shihab Bhai
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«Reply #5 on: February 08, 2010, 02:43:11 PM »
Very touching and great creation Shihab ji.
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«Reply #6 on: February 08, 2010, 02:58:13 PM »
Wah wah Shihab kitni achhi poem likhi hai aapne. Ye lines bahut achhi lagin.
 
Kya Krega Ruk K Ab Yahan Tera Koi Nhi Shihab
Chalo Aj Hum Bhi Is Bazm Ko Chhorh Jate Hain.!
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«Reply #7 on: February 08, 2010, 03:53:24 PM »
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«Reply #8 on: February 27, 2010, 04:33:19 PM »
Wah Wah Ketli Sadgi Thi Dil No Dard Lakhyon Chhe
Bahuj Saras Rachna Chhe Bhai....
Ane Fikar Not Mari Jaan Hun Aatli Aasani Thi
Ane Aatli Jaldi Tane Nahi Chhodis ...
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«Reply #9 on: March 01, 2010, 04:30:04 PM »
Waah Waah Shihab.. Bahoot Bahoot Khoob Likha hai... Kuch Ankahe Sach ko bakoobi Lafzo mea phiroya hai... Bahoot Khoob !
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«Reply #10 on: September 12, 2010, 05:33:57 AM »
Kuch Derr Saath Chalke  Phir Chhorh Jaate Hain
Haan Log Yun Hi Apni Raahen  Morh Jaate Hain.
 
Pahle Dikhate Hain Kahin  Khwaab  Haseen ,Aur
Phir Khud Hi Sari Umeedon  Ko Torh Jaate Hain.
 
Yun To Sambhal Lete Hain Hum Khud Ko Magar
Kuch  Lamhe Phir B Dil Ko, Jhanjhor Jaate Hain.
 
Kya Krega Ruk K Ab Yahan Tera Koi Nhi Shihab
Chalo Aj Hum Bhi Is Bazm Ko Chhorh Jate Hain.!

                ~Shihab~

 

Bahut khoob Shihab Ji
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«Reply #11 on: March 06, 2011, 11:41:38 PM »
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«Reply #12 on: March 07, 2011, 12:09:30 AM »
bht khubsurat peshkash h shihab ji....
mastam mast likhe ho aap ...
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«Reply #13 on: March 07, 2011, 12:32:29 AM »
           Kuch Derr Saath Chalke  Phir Chhorh Jaate Hain
          Haan Log Yun Hi Apni Raahen  Morh Jaate Hain.
 
          Pahle Dikhate Hain Kahin  Khwaab  Haseen ,Aur
          Phir Khud Hi Sari Umeedon , Ko Torh Jaate Hain.
 
          Yun To Sambhal Lete Hain Hum Khud Ko Magar
          Kuch  Lamhe Phir B Dil Ko , Jhanjhor Jaate Hain.
 
          Kya Krega Ruk K Ab Yahan Tera Koi Nhi Shihab
          Chalo Aj Hum Bhi Is Bazm Ko Chhorh Jate Hain.!

                     
                            ~Shihab~

 
bahot khoob shihab ji.......

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«Reply #14 on: March 07, 2011, 08:57:05 PM »
           Kuch Derr Saath  Chalke , Phir  Chhorh  Jaate Hain
          Haan Log Yun Hi Apni Raahein  , Morh  Jaate Hain.
           
          Pahle  Dikhate  Hain  Kahin  Khwaab  Haseen , Aur
          Phir  Khud Hi Sari  Umeedon  Ko , Torh  Jaate Hain.

          Yun To Sambhal Lete Hain  Hum Khud  Ko , Magar
          Kuch  Lamhe Phir Bhi  Dil  Ko , Jhanjhor Jaate Hain.
           
          Kya Karega Ruk K, Ab Yahan Tera Koi Nahi Shihab
          Chalo Aaj Hum Bhi Is Bazm Ko, Chhorh Jaate Hain.!

                     
                            ~Shihab~

 

Waah ji waah shihab ji behetareen peshkash..
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