Uss Ke Dar Se....

by Aryaan on May 12, 2005, 08:06:37 AM
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Aryaan
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Main ye soch kar usske dar se utha tha
Keh woh rok le gi, manaa le gi mujh ko

Hawaaon mein lehraata aata tha  daaman
Keh daaman pakar kar bithaa le gi mujh ko

Qadam aise andaaz  se uth rahe  they
Keh aawaaz de kar bulaa le gi mujh ko

Magar uus ne rokaa
na uss ne manaaya
na daaman hi pakraa
na mujh ko bithayaa
na aawaaz hi di
na waapas bulaaya


Main  aahista  aahista  barhtaa  hi  aaya
Yahan tak ke uss se juda ho gaya main..
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jalpari
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«Reply #1 on: May 12, 2005, 08:27:58 PM »
wowwww Aryaan .......very nice....................
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thelostworld
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«Reply #2 on: May 12, 2005, 08:52:17 PM »
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hmmmmmm nice aryan good job man bahut accha likha hai !!!
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Aryaan
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«Reply #3 on: May 13, 2005, 04:39:37 AM »
Thanks Jalpari & thelostworld.................
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fakharenaveed
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«Reply #4 on: May 14, 2005, 02:51:58 AM »
didaar ko tere tasbir bhi nahi
mile aisi meri takdeer bhi nahi
chale shair ko kahi door tanahai main
aap ko kabhi manjoor bhi nahi
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Aryaan
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«Reply #5 on: May 14, 2005, 09:28:53 PM »
Quote from: "fakharenaveed"
didaar ko tere tasbir bhi nahi
mile aisi meri takdeer bhi nahi
chale shair ko kahi door tanahai main
aap ko kabhi manjoor bhi nahi

Nice one Naveed....
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«Reply #6 on: May 14, 2005, 11:52:59 PM »
bohat khoob aryaan and naveed............!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Aryaan
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«Reply #7 on: May 15, 2005, 01:46:02 AM »
Thanks a lot Nidhi............................
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fakharenaveed
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«Reply #8 on: May 15, 2005, 03:03:00 AM »
Thanx aryaan & Nidhi.


JAB
MOHOBBAT
JAWAN
HOTI
HAI
HAR
ADA IK ZUBAN HOTI HAI
TUM
JAHAN
PYAAR
SE
KADAM
RAKH
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WOH ZAMEEN ASMAAN HOTI HAI
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Meena
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«Reply #9 on: May 15, 2005, 07:31:22 PM »
Quote from: "Aryaan"
Main ye soch kar usske dar se utha tha
Keh woh rok le gi, manaa le gi mujh ko

Hawaaon mein lehraata aata tha  daaman
Keh daaman pakar kar bithaa le gi mujh ko

Qadam aise andaaz  se uth rahe  they
Keh aawaaz de kar bulaa le gi mujh ko

Magar uus ne rokaa
na uss ne manaaya
na daaman hi pakraa
na mujh ko bithayaa
na aawaaz hi di
na waapas bulaaya


Main  aahista  aahista  barhtaa  hi  aaya
Yahan tak ke uss se juda ho gaya main..


nice aryaan ji!!!

 :D
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Aryaan
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«Reply #10 on: May 15, 2005, 07:55:27 PM »
Quote from: "Meena"
Quote from: "Aryaan"
Main ye soch kar usske dar se utha tha
Keh woh rok le gi, manaa le gi mujh ko

Hawaaon mein lehraata aata tha  daaman
Keh daaman pakar kar bithaa le gi mujh ko

Qadam aise andaaz  se uth rahe  they
Keh aawaaz de kar bulaa le gi mujh ko

Magar uus ne rokaa
na uss ne manaaya
na daaman hi pakraa
na mujh ko bithayaa
na aawaaz hi di
na waapas bulaaya


Main  aahista  aahista  barhtaa  hi  aaya
Yahan tak ke uss se juda ho gaya main..


nice aryaan ji!!!

 :D

Shukriya Meena.......
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rohit30002
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«Reply #11 on: June 26, 2005, 07:07:01 PM »
Quote from: "Aryaan"
Main ye soch kar usske dar se utha tha
Keh woh rok le gi, manaa le gi mujh ko

Hawaaon mein lehraata aata tha  daaman
Keh daaman pakar kar bithaa le gi mujh ko

Qadam aise andaaz  se uth rahe  they
Keh aawaaz de kar bulaa le gi mujh ko

Magar uus ne rokaa
na uss ne manaaya
na daaman hi pakraa
na mujh ko bithayaa
na aawaaz hi di
na waapas bulaaya


Main  aahista  aahista  barhtaa  hi  aaya
Yahan tak ke uss se juda ho gaya main..



Really gr8
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Aryaan
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«Reply #12 on: June 26, 2005, 08:22:52 PM »
Quote from: "rohit30002"

Really gr8

Thanks Rohit.....
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nikki
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«Reply #13 on: June 26, 2005, 08:28:20 PM »
Quote from: "Aryaan"
Main ye soch kar usske dar se utha tha
Keh woh rok le gi, manaa le gi mujh ko

Hawaaon mein lehraata aata tha  daaman
Keh daaman pakar kar bithaa le gi mujh ko

Qadam aise andaaz  se uth rahe  they
Keh aawaaz de kar bulaa le gi mujh ko

Magar uus ne rokaa
na uss ne manaaya
na daaman hi pakraa
na mujh ko bithayaa
na aawaaz hi di
na waapas bulaaya


Main  aahista  aahista  barhtaa  hi  aaya
Yahan tak ke uss se juda ho gaya main..


very nice Aryaan...what a co-incidence I was singing this since morning......
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amit_is_always_cool
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«Reply #14 on: June 26, 2005, 08:32:07 PM »
acha likha aryan ji............................................... ...
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