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Main ye soch kar usske dar se utha tha Keh woh rok le gi, manaa le gi mujh ko
Hawaaon mein lehraata aata tha daaman Keh daaman pakar kar bithaa le gi mujh ko
Qadam aise andaaz se uth rahe they Keh aawaaz de kar bulaa le gi mujh ko
Magar uus ne rokaa na uss ne manaaya na daaman hi pakraa na mujh ko bithayaa na aawaaz hi di na waapas bulaaya
Main aahista aahista barhtaa hi aaya Yahan tak ke uss se juda ho gaya main..
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«Reply #1 on: May 12, 2005, 08:27:58 PM » |
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wowwww Aryaan .......very nice....................
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«Reply #2 on: May 12, 2005, 08:52:17 PM » |
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hmmmmmm nice aryan good job man bahut accha likha hai !!!
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«Reply #3 on: May 13, 2005, 04:39:37 AM » |
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Thanks Jalpari & thelostworld.................
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«Reply #4 on: May 14, 2005, 02:51:58 AM » |
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didaar ko tere tasbir bhi nahi mile aisi meri takdeer bhi nahi chale shair ko kahi door tanahai main aap ko kabhi manjoor bhi nahi
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«Reply #5 on: May 14, 2005, 09:28:53 PM » |
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didaar ko tere tasbir bhi nahi mile aisi meri takdeer bhi nahi chale shair ko kahi door tanahai main aap ko kabhi manjoor bhi nahi Nice one Naveed....
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«Reply #6 on: May 14, 2005, 11:52:59 PM » |
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bohat khoob aryaan and naveed............!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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«Reply #7 on: May 15, 2005, 01:46:02 AM » |
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Thanks a lot Nidhi............................
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«Reply #8 on: May 15, 2005, 03:03:00 AM » |
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Thanx aryaan & Nidhi.
JAB MOHOBBAT JAWAN HOTI HAI HAR ADA IK ZUBAN HOTI HAI TUM JAHAN PYAAR SE KADAM RAKH DO WOH ZAMEEN ASMAAN HOTI HAI
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«Reply #9 on: May 15, 2005, 07:31:22 PM » |
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Main ye soch kar usske dar se utha tha Keh woh rok le gi, manaa le gi mujh ko
Hawaaon mein lehraata aata tha daaman Keh daaman pakar kar bithaa le gi mujh ko
Qadam aise andaaz se uth rahe they Keh aawaaz de kar bulaa le gi mujh ko
Magar uus ne rokaa na uss ne manaaya na daaman hi pakraa na mujh ko bithayaa na aawaaz hi di na waapas bulaaya
Main aahista aahista barhtaa hi aaya Yahan tak ke uss se juda ho gaya main.. nice aryaan ji!!! :D
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«Reply #10 on: May 15, 2005, 07:55:27 PM » |
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Main ye soch kar usske dar se utha tha Keh woh rok le gi, manaa le gi mujh ko
Hawaaon mein lehraata aata tha daaman Keh daaman pakar kar bithaa le gi mujh ko
Qadam aise andaaz se uth rahe they Keh aawaaz de kar bulaa le gi mujh ko
Magar uus ne rokaa na uss ne manaaya na daaman hi pakraa na mujh ko bithayaa na aawaaz hi di na waapas bulaaya
Main aahista aahista barhtaa hi aaya Yahan tak ke uss se juda ho gaya main.. nice aryaan ji!!! :D Shukriya Meena.......
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«Reply #11 on: June 26, 2005, 07:07:01 PM » |
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Main ye soch kar usske dar se utha tha Keh woh rok le gi, manaa le gi mujh ko
Hawaaon mein lehraata aata tha daaman Keh daaman pakar kar bithaa le gi mujh ko
Qadam aise andaaz se uth rahe they Keh aawaaz de kar bulaa le gi mujh ko
Magar uus ne rokaa na uss ne manaaya na daaman hi pakraa na mujh ko bithayaa na aawaaz hi di na waapas bulaaya
Main aahista aahista barhtaa hi aaya Yahan tak ke uss se juda ho gaya main.. Really gr8
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«Reply #12 on: June 26, 2005, 08:22:52 PM » |
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Really gr8
Thanks Rohit.....
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«Reply #13 on: June 26, 2005, 08:28:20 PM » |
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Main ye soch kar usske dar se utha tha Keh woh rok le gi, manaa le gi mujh ko
Hawaaon mein lehraata aata tha daaman Keh daaman pakar kar bithaa le gi mujh ko
Qadam aise andaaz se uth rahe they Keh aawaaz de kar bulaa le gi mujh ko
Magar uus ne rokaa na uss ne manaaya na daaman hi pakraa na mujh ko bithayaa na aawaaz hi di na waapas bulaaya
Main aahista aahista barhtaa hi aaya Yahan tak ke uss se juda ho gaya main.. very nice Aryaan...what a co-incidence I was singing this since morning......
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«Reply #14 on: June 26, 2005, 08:32:07 PM » |
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acha likha aryan ji............................................... ...
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