vachan saath chalne ka .............MKV

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Meree zindgee meN andheraa na hotaa
Jo muh mujhse tumne pheraa na hotaa

Bhar jaate ghaao shayad barsoN ke mere
Agar jakhmoN ko yuuN  ukeraa na hotaa

Chala jaata duniyaa mai chod kar key
Jo laachaar apnoN ka gheraa na hotaa

Hata deta daaloN ko dar pe jhukee haiN
gar chidiyoN ka inpe basera na hotaa

Laga detaa mai aag paanee meN shayad
Vachan saath chalney ka meraa na hotaa

Luta hai ‘Mukesh’ muhabbat kee khaatir
Kaash tum jaisa koee luteraa na hotaa
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«Reply #1 on: June 25, 2012, 10:33:24 AM »
 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause bahut  bahut he khoob dheron daad
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«Reply #2 on: June 25, 2012, 10:36:09 AM »
Bade  dard  bhare  ash'aar  kahe  hain  Mukesh  ji . Bahut  achhi ghazal hai . Dhron  Daad .
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«Reply #3 on: June 25, 2012, 11:12:47 AM »
beautiful
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«Reply #4 on: June 25, 2012, 11:18:38 AM »
Meree zindgee meN andheraa na hotaa
Jo muh mujhse tumne pheraa na hotaa

Bhar jaate ghaao shayad barsoN ke mere
Agar jakhmoN ko yuuN  ukeraa na hotaa

Chala jaata duniyaa mai chod kar key
Jo laachaar apnoN ka gheraa na hotaa

Hata deta daaloN ko dar pe jhukee haiN
gar chidiyoN ka inpe basera na hotaa

Laga detaa mai aag paanee meN shayad
Vachan saath chalney ka meraa na hotaa

Luta hai ‘Mukesh’ muhabbat kee khaatir
Kaash tum jaisa koee luteraa na hotaa


Waah Waah Waah.....

Kya Kehne Mukeshji...Umda Peshkash...

Bahut Bahut Khooob  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #5 on: June 25, 2012, 01:15:47 PM »
great sir
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«Reply #6 on: June 25, 2012, 01:22:22 PM »
Meree zindgee meN andheraa na hotaa
Jo muh mujhse tumne pheraa na hotaa

Bhar jaate ghaao shayad barsoN ke mere
Agar jakhmoN ko yuuN  ukeraa na hotaa

Chala jaata duniyaa mai chod kar key
Jo laachaar apnoN ka gheraa na hotaa

Hata deta daaloN ko dar pe jhukee haiN
gar chidiyoN ka inpe basera na hotaa

Laga detaa mai aag paanee meN shayad
Vachan saath chalney ka meraa na hotaa

Luta hai ‘Mukesh’ muhabbat kee khaatir
Kaash tum jaisa koee luteraa na hotaa


 Applause Applause Applause bahut ache bahut ache jee

किसी की यादों की रोशनी में, कभी अँधेरे नहीं होते
कहता बहुत है दिल मगर, लफ्ज़ चंद बयाँ नहीं होते

जिंदगी जीना सीखा देती है मगर,दर्द के किस्से कम नहीं होते.
जैसे सपनों के आशियाने दिलों के बसेरे नहीं होते....!!
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«Reply #7 on: June 25, 2012, 02:02:15 PM »
Waah waah bhut pyaaree see gazal.
Duwaa karta hooN jo dard aapkee poetry me hai wo aapkee life me na hoo.
Aapka bhai masoom
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«Reply #8 on: June 25, 2012, 03:04:33 PM »
i am fan of ur writng specily likeone......ye bhut achi lines hai...
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«Reply #9 on: June 25, 2012, 04:58:01 PM »
very nyc,,,  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #10 on: June 25, 2012, 05:11:19 PM »
mkv ji aapko koi shikayat hai kya humse jo aapne hamare comment hata diya...... par hum phir se kar rahe hai agar aapko koi shikayat ho to pm mein bata dijiye hum koshish kareinge humse jo galti hui wo dobara nahi karenge........


aapki yeh rachna  bahut umda hai aur bahut hi besqeemti ......isliye dobara tareef kiye bina nahi reh sak.....

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«Reply #11 on: June 25, 2012, 05:23:46 PM »
BAHUT KHOOB  Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #12 on: June 25, 2012, 07:15:32 PM »
Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause  bahut bahut khoob likha hai aapne Mukesh ji... bahut khoobsurat peshkash....!!!
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«Reply #13 on: June 26, 2012, 03:27:05 AM »
wah bahut khub mukeshji

 Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #14 on: June 26, 2012, 06:07:52 AM »
Hata deta daalo ko dar pe jhukee hai.. Applause
bahut acche..
sab god kee creation hai..Applause
kya ghajal hai?? Applause

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