vo pal........................(ambu)

by ambalika sharma on August 27, 2013, 07:29:43 PM
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Aankhein band ki to yaad aaya vo pal,
jab zindagi mein kabhi pyar ki barsat hui thi,
kya tha vo sama,kya tha vo kal,
jab hamari or unki pehli mulaquat hui thi.
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Sharm se jhuk gayi thi aankhein,
aissi kuch baat hamare saath hui thi,
Hum ab akele nhi the,kisi ne saath chalne ka vaada kiya tha,
Tham si gayi thi saansein,us waqt aisi kuch saugat hui thi,
kya tha vo sama, kya tha vo pal,
jab hamari or unki pehli mulaqat hui thi.

Fir roj hone lagi vo pyar bhari baatein,
roj hone lagi vo dilkash mulakatein,
jee utthe the hum,pehli baar is dil me yaadon ki baarat hui thi.

Sapane sajae te humne jindagi unke saath bitane ke,
kar aaye the vaade dil se unke ho jane ke,
par shayad unko ye manjoor na tha,
isme hamara bhi koi kasoor na tha,
hum na the unke kaabil,shayad yahi khata humse hui thi,
chor gaye hame bheed me tanha,
aankhon se hamari ansuon ki barsat hui thi.

Toot gaya dil,toot gaye sapne,
chor gaye hamare hisse vo gam sabhi apne,
fir bhi dil se yahi fariyaad humne ki thi,
"Mil jae tumhe vo  pyar,vo yaad ae sajan,
jiski talaash tumne mujhme ki thi".

Aankhein khuli to yaad aaya,vo pal,vo wqt to peeche choot gaya,
fir socha,jindagi nayi hai,naya hai savera,
jaroor hamari jindagi mein bhi koi aaega,
jo mujhme apna pyar paega.
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«Reply #1 on: August 27, 2013, 07:40:30 PM »
Aankhein khuli to yaad aaya,vo pal,vo wqt to peeche choot gaya,
fir socha,jindagi nayi hai,naya hai savera,
jaroor hamari jindagi mein bhi koi aaega,
jo mujhme apna pyar paega.  really??

ek sher arz kia hai
jo log the kabhi tumhare
aaj kisi aur ke kyu hain
jo chot khayi thi tumne dil par kabhi
uske nishaan aaj kisi aur ke dil par kyu hain
  Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause bahoot khoob likha hai
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«Reply #2 on: August 27, 2013, 07:46:22 PM »
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अती सुंदर
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«Reply #3 on: August 27, 2013, 07:49:26 PM »
 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
waaaaaaah.. bahut bahut khoob... dheron daad..
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«Reply #4 on: August 27, 2013, 09:12:43 PM »
bahot achey - dheron daan, waah waah Applause Clapping Smiley Applause
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«Reply #5 on: August 27, 2013, 09:36:16 PM »
thank u everyone for reading my poem
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«Reply #6 on: August 27, 2013, 10:10:33 PM »
bahut hi achhi rachna ambalika ji, milan aur vichhoh ki dil mein seedhi utar jane vali is rachna ke liye bahuat bahut badhai, shubh kaamnaon sahit
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«Reply #7 on: August 27, 2013, 10:26:46 PM »
 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #8 on: August 27, 2013, 11:49:48 PM »
bahut khoob
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«Reply #9 on: August 27, 2013, 11:56:01 PM »
Bahaut khoob Ambalika ji .... Kaafee soz o shiddat hai ehsaasaat mein ... Daad!
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«Reply #10 on: August 28, 2013, 09:59:47 AM »
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«Reply #11 on: August 28, 2013, 01:45:43 PM »
Bahut Khub  Ambalika Ji Applause

Aise Kahaan Ghamgeen The
Hum Bhi To Kabhi Rangeen The.

Shad o Aabaad Rahiye

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«Reply #12 on: August 28, 2013, 01:47:58 PM »
bahut khoob
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«Reply #13 on: August 28, 2013, 02:29:30 PM »
bahut khoob
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«Reply #14 on: August 28, 2013, 02:30:32 PM »
thank u
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