Waada

by angel4u on August 03, 2006, 05:18:18 AM
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angel4u
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Tha Ek Zariya HaMare ZakhMo Ko Ojhal Karne Ke Liye
Meri Aankhonse Behte Tere GaM Jise Log Aansu Kehte The
Sochte Hai Kyon HuM Tere ZakhMoko Yun Mitane Pe Tule Hue Hai
Yehi To Ek Hathiyar Hai HaMein Andar Se Chhalni Karne Ke Liye

Ek Wada Aaj Kiya Dilse Ke Ab Na Bahega Ek Qatra Bhi Aankhonse
SaMet Rakhenge Aansuonko Ek Dard Ka Toofani Sailaab Banayenge
Isi Sailaab Me HuM Apne ZakhMonki Bebas Aag Bhadkayenge
Usi Aag Se Apne Dil Ke Har Ek Tukde Ke Har Ek Zarre Ko Jalayenge
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Rajbir
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«Reply #1 on: August 03, 2006, 08:40:38 AM »
Angel

Itna dard ! Ufff !

Rajbir
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vikas2210
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«Reply #2 on: August 03, 2006, 10:34:13 AM »
Angel very nice. bahut accha laga phad ke.  kitna kareeb mere dil ke......  woooowwwwwwww
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angel4u
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«Reply #3 on: August 04, 2006, 07:36:10 AM »
THanks Bhaiyyaa,

well dard ka to insaan kuch nai kar sakta bas usko lafzonme dhaal kar thoda halka kar sakta hai..

thanks Vikas achha laga sunke ke aapko achha laga Usual Smile
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Shikha12
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«Reply #4 on: August 04, 2006, 09:51:38 AM »
Nice one Angel....Bahut pyaara likha hai....[/b]
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wannau_mfreind
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«Reply #5 on: August 04, 2006, 10:52:12 AM »
mai tujhe is bazaar ka dastur nahi samjha sakta,
jo ek bar becha gaya ho woh kharidar nahi ho sakta
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Aryaan
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«Reply #6 on: August 04, 2006, 03:56:04 PM »
Bohat khoob Angel.. kya baat hai!
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Aryaan
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«Reply #7 on: August 04, 2006, 04:06:54 PM »
Yun bhi tere tasawur se hum ne kiye giley
Waadon ko tere yaad kar ke muskura diye

WaQt ke badalte chehron ko takti rahi umeed
Aankhon mein intezaar ke roshan rahe diye

Tu raasta bhatak bhatak gaya dil maanta nahi
Keh tujhe hifz they jo raaste wohi nahi miley

Hawaaon ke haath jhoti koyi tasalli hi bhej de
Be-jaan waadon ki shaakh pe koyi tau gul khiley

Mujh se Qata-e-talluQ pe mana liya tujhe
Tere dil ko meri jaan kaise yeh hausle huwe
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rocky_raj
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«Reply #8 on: August 05, 2006, 08:11:42 AM »
nice post angel jiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii

simply out classsssssss haiiiiiiii
no words to praise uuuuuuuuu

and wannau jiiiiiiiii kya bechana hai aur kya kharidna hai aapkoooooooo

and idhar apko bazaar kahan mila bhaiiiiiiii heehheeheheh
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vikas2210
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«Reply #9 on: August 05, 2006, 08:44:51 AM »
nice one wannau ji

aur Aaryan ji kaya bat hai bahut khoob...... as usual....
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Aryaan
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«Reply #10 on: August 05, 2006, 03:23:07 PM »
Bohat shukriya Vikas...
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angel4u
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«Reply #11 on: August 06, 2006, 04:53:51 AM »
Thanks Shikha, Majid and Aryaan Usual Smile
Aryaan bahut umda likha hai aapne, ab kya kahun aapki tarif me main...
Aapne kuch nai likha majid.......................

Uske Ek Waade Pe Yun Aitbaar Kar Baithe Hai
Apni Zindagi Ko Jaise Kafan Odhaye Baithe Hai

Ek HuM Hai Jo Saawan Ko Bhi Aag Lagaye Baithe Hai
Ek Wo Hai Jo Us Aagse Apne Gharki ShaMMa Jalaye Baithe Hai...
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Thanks vikas and rocks. Usual Smile

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Ek adhuri si manzil ka raasta to dikha diya kisine
par aj usi raaste pe mujhe tanha chhod gaya koi

Wada kiya tha jisne ke tere saye ke sath chalenge
aaj mera saya hi mujhse chura gaya koi...
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raz patel
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«Reply #12 on: August 06, 2006, 08:36:06 AM »
ohhhhhh  jana  ye  kya kiya  tune  aakho  ko  kajal  ki  tarh  chura liya  hai  tum  neeeeeee
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SADIQA JAWED
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«Reply #13 on: August 06, 2006, 01:05:21 PM »
wah ! ANGEL4U ..... great yar !

Un ka ya apna Tamasha Dekho !
Jo dikhata Hai zamana Dekho

Baraf Ho jata Hai Sadion ka Lahoo
Ik Tehra hoa lamha dekho !
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angel4u
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«Reply #14 on: August 06, 2006, 03:34:33 PM »
Thanks Sadiqa ji...

Dhadkane thak gayi dhadakte dhadakte,
Saansein thak gayi mujhme aate aate,
aye kabar apni panahonme utarne de ye bojh,
ke rooh thak gayi mere jism me baste baste...
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