%%%WAKIF HAI HUM%%%

by baadal102 on May 06, 2008, 09:39:09 PM
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Cha.he tum kaho na kaho,
Tare har gum se wakif hai hum,
Lab tumhare khamosh sahi,
Tare dil ke har awaaz se wakif hai hum,

Apna cha.he na samjho,
Tare har dhadkan se wakif hai hum,
Udasi kitni hai dil mai tumhare,
Iss baat se anjaan nahi hai hum,

Dil ke armaan cha.he na kaho humse,
Tari surat se wakif hai hum,
Saanse na lo humare aage lakin,
Tare saanso ki mahak se anjaan nahi hai hum......




Baadal
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punam
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«Reply #1 on: May 06, 2008, 09:57:12 PM »
Bahot khoob baadal ji..bahot acha likha aap ne..
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syednaami
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«Reply #2 on: May 06, 2008, 10:26:06 PM »
Socho na ab tum beeti baaten, -
Mere dil men to malaal ab bhi hai, -
Honton se tanzia muskaan na de, -
Mere Qalb men to armaan ab bhi hai. -

Dekho na ab iss shaatir nazar se, -
Mere seene men dafan pyar ab bhi hai, -
Udaasi ke shikan chehre pe na laa, -
Mere man men woh maahroo aks ab bhi hai. -

Konso na ab apne maazi ko, -
Mere muhabbat men aitimaad ab bhi hai, -
Waqt ke guzarne ka intazaar na kar, -
Mere dard men teri chaah ka hisaar ab bhi hai. -

(Syed Naami)

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Janaab baadal Saahib, jawab to saheeh nahin likh paaya par jo aaya dil men likha hai. Nazar karta hun mehfil-khaas men.
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aftab001
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«Reply #3 on: May 06, 2008, 10:58:21 PM »
Konso na ab apne maazi ko, -
Mere muhabbat men aitimaad ab bhi hai, -
Waqt ke guzarne ka intazaar na kar, -
Mere dard men teri chaah ka hisaar ab bhi hai. -
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syednaami
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«Reply #4 on: May 06, 2008, 11:13:57 PM »
Aftaab miyan kuchh farmaiye zara aap bhi. Shukriya aamad ka.
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Pooja
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«Reply #5 on: May 07, 2008, 12:19:23 AM »
Baadal jee and Sami jee dono ne he bahoot khoob likha!!! wah!!
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Pooja
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«Reply #6 on: May 07, 2008, 01:26:03 AM »
Quote from: baadal102 on May 06, 2008, 09:39:09 PM
Cha.he tum kaho na kaho,
Tare har gum se wakif hai hum,
Lab tumhare khamosh sahi,
Tare dil ke har awaaz se wakif hai hum,

Apna cha.he na samjho,
Tare har dhadkan se wakif hai hum,
Udasi kitni hai dil mai tumhare,
Iss baat se anjaan nahi hai hum,

Dil ke armaan cha.he na kaho humse,
Tari surat se wakif hai hum,
Saanse na lo humare aage lakin,
Tare saanso ki mahak se anjaan nahi hai hum......

Baadal

Baadal ji bahoot hi achi kavita ki rachna ki hai apne!!! thora sa waqat laga ki kaha se apki kavita ko pakad kar main jawab likhna shuru karu.. meri najar main apne bahoot he apne app main sampuran kavita likhi hai, ki mujhe koi chor darwaza nahi mila jahan se main apna jawab shuru kar sakati..
Ek koshish ki hai... shayad pasand ayye:

Ankhon ke ansoo ka arth galat na samjh lena
Khamosh lubo ka arth galat na samjh lena
Zindagi chal rahi hai Tej hawa ke sath sath
Badali Fiza ko, badalti chahat na samjh lena

Apne hai sabhi, her kisi se kuch na kuch paya hai
Is apnepan ko kahin kuch aor na samjh lena
Dhadak jaata hai yah dil to, her ek ahat se
Dil ki is dhadkan ko, dil ki lagi na samjh lena

Her armaan takra jaata hai khud ke hi armaano se
Surat per aaye zajbaato ko kuch aor na samjh lena
Saansein kabhi aai kabhi ruk gai, badalte haalto main
Halaato main attaki saanson ko, zindagi na samjh lena!!
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baadal102
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«Reply #7 on: May 07, 2008, 04:40:13 PM »
aap sabhi ka thanx
or saami ji N pooja ji
kya baat hai bahut hi aacha jawab diya hai
mai saayad itna aacha na likh paue lakin mere post mai
aap ne reply de ke mere lines ko bhi acha bana diya hai





Baadal
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syednaami
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«Reply #8 on: May 07, 2008, 04:41:08 PM »
Pooja ji, You are superb in matchable response, you have completed our poems after your entry here. Bravo!!
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syednaami
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«Reply #9 on: May 07, 2008, 04:43:33 PM »
Quote from: baadal102 on May 07, 2008, 04:40:13 PM
aap sabhi ka thanx
or saami ji N pooja ji
..........
Baadal

Thanks a lot Baadal Saahib, aapne himmat afzai ki hamari.
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honeyrose
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«Reply #10 on: May 07, 2008, 04:52:01 PM »
Sab dostho ney bohat acha likha hai.. Applause
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baadal102
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«Reply #11 on: May 07, 2008, 10:11:10 PM »
thanx a lot syednaami ji N honey ji

choti se koshis ki hai pooja ji aap ka
reply dene ki aap jitne aache to nahi
hai lines fir bhi asha karta hu aache lagenge

Fizao ke badalne se chahat badalti nahi,
Ruke kisi mor pe to wo manzil banti nahi,
Zindgee ka kaam hai chalte rehna,
Hum use roke to bhi wo rukti nahi,

Saath milta hai jinka bhi jeewan mai,
Haath pakad ker koi saath chalta nahi,
Ashko ka matlab hum galat kya lenge,
Ashq kisi ke koi ponch paaya nahi,

Ek dil ke dhadkan hi hoti hai samjhane ko,
Use bhi koi samajh paaya nahi,
Wakif hai tere hum har saaye se,
Lakin use bhi hum tumhe samjha paaye nahi........



Baadal
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Pooja
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«Reply #12 on: May 07, 2008, 10:16:38 PM »
wow too good Baadal ji!!! bahoot bahoot acha likha hai apne!! jawab Friday ko likhne ki koshish karugi!!!
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baadal102
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«Reply #13 on: May 07, 2008, 10:17:36 PM »
thanx pooja ji
waiting 4 ur reply




Baadal
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