...~~waqt~~...

by HumTum on July 10, 2005, 05:59:33 PM
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«Reply #30 on: July 20, 2005, 04:25:33 PM »
waah waah nidhi ji kya khoob likha hai !!!


pyaar ki es najook rah mai humne bhi bahut dhokhe khaye hai
khushiya sab de di yaaro ko hazar gam es dil mai samaye hai
ab gam ki en kaali raton mai tanhaaiya hamare sath hai
dil tor diya us bewfa ne mera maine pyaar mai ye tohfe paye hai!!
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«Reply #31 on: July 22, 2005, 10:53:41 PM »
Hi Humtum,
          I just saw the ghazal you have posted here. I remembered having seen this ghazal before somewhere and looked it up, apparently this ghazal was posted at http://www.ebazm.com/discus/messages/647/2834.html?1061039832
and the date there reads August 04. I have copied the post here. Please clarify if this is your ghazal or Anant Kaur's or whether you are both actualy the same person. Please do reply.

Posted on Monday, August 04, 2003 - 12:46 pm:      
Dosto!
Bohat din ke baad idhar aana hua hai. Aayee tou hooN par khaali haath nahiN, apne saath apni eik nayee ghazal bhi laayee hooN taki aap sab se uska taaruf karva sakooN aur aapki rai jaan sakooN. Umeed hai aap na-umeed nahiN kareiNgay aur dil khol kar tabsara kareiNgay

HasratoN ke shahar meiN ab neeNd bhi aati nahiN
Uf chubhan toote hue khaaboN ki bhi jaati nahiN

Kuch bhi pehle sa raha na aaNkh ke ik tarf se
Vaqt ki ye chaal hatgiz hi humeiN bhaati nahiN
aaNkh ke ik tarf se (blink of eye)

Daayre kaste hi jaate haiN Ghum-e-dauraaN ke ab
ZiNdagi taar-e-nafas se toot kyoN jaati nahiN

Dard ki aagosh meiN be khauf haiN hum is qadar
Saamne hai maut lekin jaan ghabraati nahiN

Thak gaye haiN ziNdagi ki is musalsal jaNg meiN
Faisle qismat hamaare haq meiN kyoN laati nahiN

AaNkh purnam ho gayee kyoN aaj teri ae ‘Anant’
KyoN tujhe tarz-e-adaa koi bhi behlaati nahiN


Anant Kaur
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HumTum
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«Reply #32 on: July 23, 2005, 05:51:31 PM »
Quote from: "plagiarism"
Hi Humtum,
          I just saw the ghazal you have posted here. I remembered having seen this ghazal before somewhere and looked it up, apparently this ghazal was posted at http://www.ebazm.com/discus/messages/647/2834.html?1061039832
and the date there reads August 04. I have copied the post here. Please clarify if this is your ghazal or Anant Kaur's or whether you are both actualy the same person. Please do reply.

Posted on Monday, August 04, 2003 - 12:46 pm:      
Dosto!
Bohat din ke baad idhar aana hua hai. Aayee tou hooN par khaali haath nahiN, apne saath apni eik nayee ghazal bhi laayee hooN taki aap sab se uska taaruf karva sakooN aur aapki rai jaan sakooN. Umeed hai aap na-umeed nahiN kareiNgay aur dil khol kar tabsara kareiNgay

HasratoN ke shahar meiN ab neeNd bhi aati nahiN
Uf chubhan toote hue khaaboN ki bhi jaati nahiN

Kuch bhi pehle sa raha na aaNkh ke ik tarf se
Vaqt ki ye chaal hatgiz hi humeiN bhaati nahiN
aaNkh ke ik tarf se (blink of eye)

Daayre kaste hi jaate haiN Ghum-e-dauraaN ke ab
ZiNdagi taar-e-nafas se toot kyoN jaati nahiN

Dard ki aagosh meiN be khauf haiN hum is qadar
Saamne hai maut lekin jaan ghabraati nahiN

Thak gaye haiN ziNdagi ki is musalsal jaNg meiN
Faisle qismat hamaare haq meiN kyoN laati nahiN

AaNkh purnam ho gayee kyoN aaj teri ae ‘Anant’
KyoN tujhe tarz-e-adaa koi bhi behlaati nahiN


Anant Kaur



Again dear same answer !!! but one thing i really appricate .. u r quiet good web searcher :thumb:
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