wo humko ye saza deta hai.......REHAN MUBARAK ""TANHAA""

by haan on November 05, 2010, 03:58:27 PM
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WO HUMKO YE SAZA DETA HAI !
JAB MILTA HAI RULA DETA HAI !!
MAIN MAANTA HOON TU MERA NAHIN  !
BAR BAR KAYUN JATA DETA HAI !!
TU MAJBOOR HAI HALAAT KE HAATHON !
JO NAZREN ABB CHURA LETA HAI !!
KAYUN AATE HO BAATON ME USKI !
MERA MUKHALIF TUMHE BAHKA DETA HAI !!
YE KAUN KHWAABON KI DEHLEEZ PE !
RAAT PICHHLE PAHER SADA DETA HAI !!
TU NAHIN TO KAUN HAI WO !
JO SOOTE SE JAGA DETA HAI !!
DHOOND LETE HAIN YE GHUM HUMKO !
KAUN INKO MERA PATAA DETA HAI !!
ROOZ JALATA HOON UMMEEDON KE CHIRAGH !
JHONKA HAWA KA BUJHA DETA HAI !!
DAANISTA KAB HUI KOI KHATA HUMSE !
JO KHUDA HUMKO YE SAZA DETA HAI !!
REHAN MUBARAK "TANHAA"
MIAN USTAAD SHAYRON SE DARKHWAST KARTA HOON KI MERE IS KALAAM KO QAAFIYE KE AITBAAR SE ISLAAH KARNE KI TAKLEEF FARMAEN  KOI AUR BHI KAMI HO TO JANAAB DURUST KARNE KI MEHARBAANI ZAROOR KAREN  .AAPKA REHAN MUBARAK "TANHAA" ,.
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«Reply #1 on: November 05, 2010, 04:31:24 PM »
WO HUMKO YE SAZA DETA HAI !
JAB MILTA HAI RULA DETA HAI !!
MAIN MAANTA HOON TU MERA NAHIN  !
BAR BAR KAYUN JATA DETA HAI !!
TU MAJBOOR HAI HALAAT KE HAATHON !
JO NAZREN ABB CHURA LETA HAI !!
KAYUN AATE HO BAATON ME USKI !
MERA MUKHALIF TUMHE BAHKA DETA HAI !!
YE KAUN KHWAABON KI DEHLEEZ PE !
RAAT PICHHLE PAHER SADA DETA HAI !!
TU NAHIN TO KAUN HAI WO !
JO SOOTE SE JAGA DETA HAI !!
DHOOND LETE HAIN YE GHUM HUMKO !
KAUN INKO MERA PATAA DETA HAI !!
ROOZ JALATA HOON UMMEEDON KE CHIRAGH !
JHONKA HAWA KA BUJHA DETA HAI !!
DAANISTA KAB HUI KOI KHATA HUMSE !
JO KHUDA HUMKO YE SAZA DETA HAI !!
REHAN MUBARAK "TANHAA"
MIAN USTAAD SHAYRON SE DARKHWAST KARTA HOON KI MERE IS KALAAM KO QAAFIYE KE AITBAAR SE ISLAAH KARNE KI TAKLEEF FARMAEN  KOI AUR BHI KAMI HO TO JANAAB DURUST KARNE KI MEHARBAANI ZAROOR KAREN  .AAPKA REHAN MUBARAK "TANHAA" ,.
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«Reply #2 on: November 05, 2010, 05:55:22 PM »
wahhhhhhhhh rehaannnnnnn..tumhare likhe me alag hi baat hai..bht khub sply

WO HUMKO YE SAZA DETA HAI !
JAB MILTA HAI RULA DETA HAI !!

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MAIN MAANTA HOON TU MERA NAHIN  !
BAR BAR KAYUN JATA DETA HAI !!


ye lines to mujhe bht hi pasand aai.......
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«Reply #3 on: November 05, 2010, 10:50:08 PM »
"Main manta hoon tu mera nahin,
Baar baar kyun jata deta hai.."

Rehan jee bahaut khubsoorat likha hai..

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«Reply #4 on: November 06, 2010, 09:10:52 AM »
    Janab Rehaan Sahab Aadaab O tasleemat!

    Aapki kalaam nazar nawaaz huyi .... Behad khoob ashaar kahe hai aapne..
    Daad kabool kijiye..

    Hum koi ustaad shayar to nahi hai... par Aapne kafiye ke itebaar se islaaH
    maNgi hai to hum aapki islaah kar dete hai....

    Aapke sabhi kafiye to sahiN hai par is qouted sher meiN aapka kafiyaa
    Galat hua hai...


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    KAYUN AATE HO BAATON ME USKI !
    MERA MUKHALIF TUMHE BAHKA DETA HAI !!


    Aawaaz ke itebaar se to yeH kafiyaa bhi sahiN hai per
    wazn ke itebar se aapka yeH kafiyaa kharij hota hai...

    Aapne sabhi kafiye 1/2 wazn ke istemaal kiye hai par is kafiye ka wazn 2/2 hai
    Yeh humari zati rai hai... Hum galat bhi ho sakte hai..

    Baki aapki kalaam ke tamaam ashaar behad khoob hai daad..

    Likhate rahiye....
    Khush O aabad rahiye....
    Khuda Hafez.... Usual Smile


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    «Reply #5 on: November 06, 2010, 10:15:03 AM »
    ass-salaam -o-alekum....    janaab parwaaz sahab shukriya ...aapne islah ki ..iske liye tahe dil se shukriya ...ummeed hai aap hamari tuk bandiyon  pe nazre saani karte rahenge ................................................. .....KHUDA HAFIZZZZZ
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    «Reply #6 on: November 06, 2010, 05:48:32 PM »
    Rehan Bhai.. Aapki yeh Lajawab Peshkash Padh kar Dil Khush Ho Gaya... Behad Khubsoorati Se Apne Ehasaason Ko Yahan Pesh kiya hai aapne..  icon_thumleft icon_thumleft

    Har ek Sher Apne Aap Me Khubsoorati Liye Hue hai.. Ehasaason Se Saja hai.. Aur Ehasaason Me Kami Kaise Nikaali Jaye Dost.. Umda Peshkash.. Bahut Khooooob.. Applause

    Daad hi Daad..
     Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley



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    «Reply #7 on: November 06, 2010, 05:51:34 PM »
    SHUKRIYA MANN JI AAPKO HAMARA KALAAM PASAND AAYA ..REHAN
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