wo nahi aaya laut kar lekin

by kaushikbhawna008 on July 03, 2008, 05:34:45 AM
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Bachpan kabhi gujra tha mera
gam k saaye se dur kahin
        aaj unhi meethe palo ki yaadein
        bhar laayein hai neer abhi

kitni khush thi mei sang uske
na bichadne ka tha khauf kahin
        kabhi ruth.ti kabhi manaati thi use
        ujad gayi kyu wo duniya meri

kuch kasmei thi kuch vaade the
aur kuch khel suhaane the
        beete palon ki yaadein sanjone mei
        yu beet gayi zindgani meri

wo to bhul gaya hai sab kuch
aur mujhe uski har baat yaad rahi
         keh gaya tha jis mod par laut aane ko
         usi mod par khade meri umra beet gayi

wo nahi aaya laut kar lekin
uski yaadein mere saath rahi
          keh na saki jo "bhawna" usse lab se kabhi
          meri shayri ne dard ki meri har kahaani kahi
             
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Muhammed
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«Reply #1 on: July 03, 2008, 07:22:43 AM »
wo nahi aaya laut kar lekin
uski yaadein mere saath rahi
          keh na saki jo "bhawna" usse lab se kabhi
          meri shayri ne dard ki meri har kahaani kahi
   

Waah Kaushik Ji..
Is Baat K Liye Ki Bachpan Se Yahaan Tak Ka Safar.,
Bade Hi Khoob Andaj Me Likha Hai..

Beshak Aapki Shayri Aap K Dard Ki Kahani Kehati Hai..
Aur Aap 100% Shayar Ho,
Aap Ki Shayri Me Muje Bahot Kuch Dekne Ko Mila Hai..

Wo Na aaye Par Unki Yaad Aa K Wafaa karr Gayi.,
Saanse Tutate Hi Fir Aas Aa K Jindaa Karr Gayi.
                           
                                   -- Raza
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kaushikbhawna008
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«Reply #2 on: July 03, 2008, 07:49:10 AM »
muhammed ji ham ye to jaante ki ham
ek mukammal shayar hai ya nahi
par ye sach hai ki jo bhi dil mei jazbaat umadtei hain ham to unhe bas shabdo mei dhalne ki koshish hi karte hain
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kaushikbhawna008
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«Reply #3 on: July 03, 2008, 07:50:38 AM »
nazm ko padhne aur sarahne k liye bohut bohut shukriya
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Talat
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«Reply #4 on: July 03, 2008, 11:50:06 AM »
Bohot khoob Bhawna Applause
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Shikha12
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«Reply #5 on: July 03, 2008, 12:03:31 PM »
Really Nice...  Thumbs UP Applause
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Pooja
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«Reply #6 on: July 03, 2008, 02:23:47 PM »
Good one bhawna
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Sammual
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«Reply #7 on: July 05, 2008, 10:28:41 AM »
Good Job Bhawna Ji.
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baadal102
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«Reply #8 on: July 05, 2008, 04:22:43 PM »
good one bhawana ji





Baadal
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Sonia01
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«Reply #9 on: July 05, 2008, 04:27:50 PM »
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wo to bhul gaya hai sab kuch
aur mujhe uski har baat yaad rahi
         keh gaya tha jis mod par laut aane ko
         usi mod par khade meri umra beet gayi

Bahut accha likha hai aapne Bhavna Jee  Applause
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kaushikbhawna008
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«Reply #10 on: July 08, 2008, 05:24:45 AM »
shukriya maahiya ji,baadal ji,sammual ji, pooja ji,sonia ji and celmira ji
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Satya.patel
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«Reply #11 on: December 20, 2008, 06:49:44 PM »

       



wo to bhul gaya hai sab kuch
aur mujhe uski har baat yaad rahi
         keh gaya tha jis mod par laut aane ko
         usi mod par khade meri umra beet gayi

wo nahi aaya laut kar lekin
uski yaadein mere saath rahi
          keh na saki jo "bhawna" usse lab se kabhi
          meri shayri ne dard ki meri har kahaani kahi
               


taarif ke liye alfaaz nahi mil rahe bhawna ji,

"charagh e zindagi ko aik jhonkay ki zaroorat hai
tumhain meri qasam phir zara damin ko lehrana"
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kaushikbhawna008
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«Reply #12 on: December 22, 2008, 06:15:35 AM »

taarif ke liye alfaaz nahi mil rahe bhawna ji,

"charagh e zindagi ko aik jhonkay ki zaroorat hai
tumhain meri qasam phir zara damin ko lehrana"


ji shukriya satya ji
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Rajesh Harish
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«Reply #13 on: August 10, 2009, 08:32:34 AM »
Bahut Khoob Bhawna Ji
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