wo tujse milaana

by Pooja on July 18, 2006, 06:41:53 PM
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Pooja
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wo tujse milaana, zindagi ka ek bahna tha
maksad to mujko tamam umar rulana tha

dikha kar wo sapne sunhare
 mujko thokro mai, tadpana tha
bana kar ashiyana mera
tinka tinka uska urdana tha

wo tujse milaana, zindagi ka ek bahna tha
maksad to mujko tamam umar rulana tha

payaar bhri wo bateein uski,
samjh kar mujko sahlata tha
sambhalna jab bhi lakharai main
ab jaise ek beeta hua jamana tha

 wo tujse milaana, zindagi ka ek bahna tha
maksad to mujko tamam umar rulana tha
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ranjana
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«Reply #1 on: July 18, 2006, 06:51:31 PM »
bahut khoob pooja aur bilkul  sach likh diya ...

yeh waqt bhi kya khel khel jaata hai
jo todata hai dil ko wahi dil ko bhaata hai

unki yaade aa aa ke  yun laut jaati hai
jaise koi samander ki laharo ko sahil per chhor jaata hai

sabhi lagate hai is jahan mein apne apne se
ek wahi hame bheed mein tanaha kyu kar jaata hai

kyu milta hai dil aakhir usi se  A mere khuda
jo dil ko roz naye zakham fir se de jaata hai!!!!!!
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manu1979
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hi
«Reply #2 on: July 18, 2006, 06:52:16 PM »
bahut khoob pooja ji ,maine kaafi samay baad aap ke kalaam ko padha ,mazaa aaya ,ek achhi si nazam ke liye dil se daad kabool kare
is ka jawaab bhi likhta hoo

Apne jakhmo ka ab ham izhaar kya kare
Khud hi nishaana ban gaye vaar kya kare
Mar gaye ham magar khuli rahi nigaahe
Ab is se jyaa ham unka intzaar kya kare

regards
manu
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Pooja
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«Reply #3 on: July 18, 2006, 07:41:12 PM »
Thanks Ranju and Manu... app dono ne bahoot hi acha likha hai...

Rula sakta tha muje kon
Apni hi ichao ne rulaya hai
Jo nahi ho sakta kabhi mera
Kayun ussi se dil lagaya hai

Dil ke her zazbaat ko
Ajj ansoo se nahlaya hai
Jo nahi ho sakta kabhi mera
Kayun ussi se dil lagaya hai
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ranjana
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«Reply #4 on: July 18, 2006, 07:45:26 PM »
bahut khoob pooja .....

woh banate hai apna aur fir hamko yun hi rula jaate hain
is tarah reit ke ghar bana bana ke khud hi maitaate hain

tod ke dil mera puchate hai ki kya hua Huh?Huh?Huh?
woh kyu dil hamse lete hain jo hamara dil khilone sa tod jaate hain!!!
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Pooja
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«Reply #5 on: July 18, 2006, 08:24:25 PM »
nahi uska kasoor, yah to khud se dhoka khaya hai
jaan bujh kar khud ko dard ke hatho rulaya hai
jahan bhi rahe, wo rahe hamesha sukhi
uski hi khushi ka, ab to sapna sajaya hai
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vikas2210
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«Reply #6 on: July 19, 2006, 09:55:57 AM »
ver nice pooja bahut hai khoob......


tere aate jaate khyalo ki tarah
r\meri aankho mai sawan aata rehta hai
kabhi ka khatam hone wale intezaar ke tarah
dil main aarman umadta rehta hai.......

paa lun tujhko yeh ek kwaish baaki hai
jaise abi bhi khuda ki khudai baaki hai....
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ranjana
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«Reply #7 on: July 19, 2006, 10:11:50 AM »
yeh kaisa mukaam aaya hai raaho mein dekhiye
hota hai unka zikar bhi ab aahho mein dekhiye
milte hain sakun ke jo char pal zinadgi ke kabhi
unko apni  khawabo mein jagah toh diijiye....
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Meena is back
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«Reply #8 on: July 19, 2006, 11:52:55 AM »
wah pooja didi...first 2 lines r just mindblowing!

ranjana ji,manu ji aur vikas ji apke jawabs bhi bohot ache lage!

aaj sochte hai unko pa kar humne kya paya hai,
kabhi bheed me to kabhi tanhai me khud ko rulaya hai,
nikal bhi to nahin sakhte usko apni zindagi se Meena,
nas nas me jo ek bewafa humse basaya hai!
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Pooja
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«Reply #9 on: July 19, 2006, 03:19:18 PM »
Thanks Vikas and Meena!!

bahoot acha likha hai apne Viaks, Ranju and Meena....
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Sonu
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«Reply #10 on: July 19, 2006, 03:29:25 PM »
Pooja ji wonderful... Ranjana sis good one... manu ji... vickas ji.. menu... sabney bahut he acha lekha ahi wonderful dosto...
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Sonu
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«Reply #11 on: July 19, 2006, 03:30:08 PM »
Kya Mila Tum ko

Kya Mila Tumhe Socho, Humko Azmaane Mein
Aag Lag Gayi Aakhir, Har Taraf Zamane Mein.

Tum To Chaar Din-May-Hi, Apna Honsla Kho Bethe
Umar Beet Jati Hai, Ruthne-Manane Mein...

Tumne Sab Luta diye Ashq Meri Palko Ke,
Ik Zamaana Lagta Hai, Aainey Sajaane Mein.

Aaj hai Sabhi Masroof, Farak Sirf Itna Hai,
Koi Ghar Banane Mein, To Koi Ghar Jalane Mein.

Aaj Dil Hai Diwana, Uska Rukh Na Pehchana,
Saazishen Bhi Shamil Hain Jiske Muskurane Mein
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Pooja
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«Reply #12 on: July 19, 2006, 03:52:21 PM »
thanks Sonu, kamal ka likha hai apne... ek ek shabd aor usne bani line... dil ko chu rahi hai,.... bahoot khoob...
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Meena is back
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«Reply #13 on: July 19, 2006, 07:17:20 PM »
shukriya ji shukriya!

 :D
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Sonu
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«Reply #14 on: July 19, 2006, 07:38:03 PM »
Pooja sis thanks so much.... bahut bahut shukriya... :oops:

Quote from: "Pooja"
thanks Sonu, kamal ka likha hai apne... ek ek shabd aor usne bani line... dil ko chu rahi hai,.... bahoot khoob...
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