Woh chaahtaa hai, minnateyn karoon, “Sataa naheen!”

by abdbundeli on April 28, 2009, 07:16:21 AM
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Ho to rahaa hai dard, par kahaan, patah naheen!
Woh chaahtaa hai, minnateyn karoon, “Sataa naheen!”
Paiwast hain guloun mein sang, gul-afshaan#! Magar,
Chaahuungaa unhain, go ki, ‘abd’, mein qataa* naheen!!

#  Some-body who throws flowers to honor or welcome some one else;
*  The name of a bird that is said to adore stones (being a part of its cherished diet).
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«Reply #1 on: April 28, 2009, 08:03:31 AM »
Wah Abdj . yea tho mashallaha bahoot khoob likha hai.
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«Reply #2 on: April 28, 2009, 08:13:30 AM »
Mashallah Boaht Bohat Achcha Likha Hai Abd Bhaiya,.
Aapki Shayari Aur Ghazlon Se Hum Inspired Hain,.

Yunhi Likhte rahiye,.
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«Reply #3 on: April 28, 2009, 08:27:11 AM »
Wah Abdj . yea tho mashallaha bahoot khoob likha hai.

Bahut-bahut shukriyah Sophi ji! Meinkhush huun, yah jaan kar, ki, aap ko yah qatah pasand aayaa!
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«Reply #4 on: April 28, 2009, 08:30:31 AM »
Mashallah Boaht Bohat Achcha Likha Hai Abd Bhaiya,.
Aapki Shayari Aur Ghazlon Se Hum Inspired Hain,.

Yunhi Likhte rahiye,.

Bahut-bahut shukriyah Azeem ji! Yah jaan kar, ki, aap ko yah qatah pasand aayaa, mujhey khushee huyee!
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