WOH SHARAABI---- SAAHIL

by salil2002 on April 25, 2009, 08:05:37 AM
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kal yahan is mod se jab mein gujra tha
toh koi shaks nashe mein dooba mujhse takraaya tha
maine kaha sambhl kar bhai kyun sharaab peete ho
meri baat sunkar woh sirf muskuraaya tha

aaj maine samjha hai kya tha uska dard
aaj maine jaana woh sharaabi kyun muskuraaya tha
oosse bhi bicchhda tha koi apna
jise yaad kar oosne , jaam ko labon se lagaya tha

meri tarah woh bhi hoga toota,
woh bhi sheeshe se oolajh kar chot khaaya tha
Sharaab mein gark li thi zindgi oosne
jabse mohabbat mein dhoka khaya tha

aaj mein bhi hoon behka hua
kadam mere bhi hai ladkhada rahe
koshish toh bahut kii, pa na jaane kab kisse takraaya tha
dekha toh wahi tha, mera dost, jo oos roz muskuraaya tha
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«Reply #1 on: April 25, 2009, 08:21:49 AM »
Waise to main shayari-e-sharaab pe usually comment nahin karti hoon....lekin tumhari peshkash ek dam alag hai.......Bohot hi Khoob Saahil
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sajid_ghayel
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«Reply #2 on: April 25, 2009, 08:52:39 AM »
Bohat khoob Saahil.. dad kabool ho..
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SARVESH RASTOGI
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«Reply #3 on: April 25, 2009, 09:53:50 AM »
Rachna achchhi hai Salil lekin padhne main yellow colour ki vajah se kuchh mushkil aai.  Colour contrast hone se suvidha hoti hai.  Good. 
Abhi 2/3 din pahile maine apni ek kavita post ki thi:
"Nashamukt jeevan jiye jaa raha hun
maje zindagi ke liye jaa raha hun"
All the best
SARVESH RASTOGI
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«Reply #4 on: April 25, 2009, 10:45:33 AM »
Waah Salil ek sharabhi k dard ko bakoobi bayaan kiy ahai tume. every lines of this kalam is realy gud. Usual Smile
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«Reply #5 on: April 25, 2009, 12:44:50 PM »
Hm, Bohat Achche Salil Bhai, as usual,.
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«Reply #6 on: April 25, 2009, 06:35:40 PM »
Wah SALIL Wah.. Lajwab Likha hai dost..!! Bilkul Alag Hatt ke Alag Soch Ke Sath Likha Yeh Qalaam Hai aapka..!!! Behtreen Peshkash Hai.. Daad Kubool Karen.. Applause Applause


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«Reply #7 on: April 26, 2009, 05:10:52 AM »
Quote from: Celmira on April 25, 2009, 08:21:49 AM
Waise to main shayari-e-sharaab pe usually comment nahin karti hoon....lekin tumhari peshkash ek dam alag hai.......Bohot hi Khoob Saahil


thanks a lot sis .......aapke comments hamesha hausla badaate hain
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«Reply #8 on: April 26, 2009, 05:12:30 AM »
Quote from: sajid_ghayel on April 25, 2009, 08:52:39 AM
Bohat khoob Saahil.. dad kabool ho..
Quote from: Sophi on April 25, 2009, 10:45:33 AM
Waah Salil ek sharabhi k dard ko bakoobi bayaan kiy ahai tume. every lines of this kalam is realy gud. Usual Smile
Quote from: Jaanasheen on April 25, 2009, 12:44:50 PM
Hm, Bohat Achche Salil Bhai, as usual,.


thanks sophi , sajid bhai , and azeem bhai..........
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«Reply #9 on: April 26, 2009, 05:13:54 AM »
Quote from: SARVESH RASTOGI on April 25, 2009, 09:53:50 AM
Rachna achchhi hai Salil lekin padhne main yellow colour ki vajah se kuchh mushkil aai.  Colour contrast hone se suvidha hoti hai.  Good. 
Abhi 2/3 din pahile maine apni ek kavita post ki thi:
"Nashamukt jeevan jiye jaa raha hun
maje zindagi ke liye jaa raha hun"
All the best
SARVESH RASTOGI


shukriya sarvesh bhai ..mujhe padne k liye aur aapko jo asuvidha huyi uske liye maafi maangta hoon aur maine colour change kar diya hai..........
aapki kavita bhi jaroor padoonga.........
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«Reply #10 on: April 26, 2009, 05:14:52 AM »
Quote from: Mann on April 25, 2009, 06:35:40 PM
Wah SALIL Wah.. Lajwab Likha hai dost..!! Bilkul Alag Hatt ke Alag Soch Ke Sath Likha Yeh Qalaam Hai aapka..!!! Behtreen Peshkash Hai.. Daad Kubool Karen.. Applause Applause


**~** Mann **~**



shukriya mann bhai...aapki taareef karne ka andaaz aisa hai kii dil baag baag ho jaata hai
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