@ YAKEEN @

by baadal102 on August 25, 2008, 08:21:57 AM

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diya786

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«Reply #15 on: August 27, 2008, 02:22:23 AM »

bahut accha likha hai baadal ji
bahut dard hai
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kaushik ji aapne bhi accha likha hai Applause

shally ji aapne bhi kamaal ka likha hai Clapping Smiley


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Re: @ YAKEEN @

«Reply #16 on: August 27, 2008, 03:04:39 AM »

kya khoob dard ki mahfil sajai hai...badal, bhawna aur shally ne.....ek se bsdh kar ek sher ki baarish si ho rahi hai......


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«Reply #17 on: August 27, 2008, 03:35:48 AM »

Bahut bahut accha likha hai aapne Baadal ji..

Aakhri do line bahut accha laga padkar..

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Lakh koshish karte hai unhe yakeen dilane ki,
Lakin na jaane kyo hum pe unhe yakeen nahi!!!!


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Roja

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«Reply #18 on: August 27, 2008, 03:39:22 AM »

Shael sis and Bhawna done ne bahut umda likha hai... Very good going.


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angel4u

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Re: @ YAKEEN @

«Reply #19 on: August 30, 2008, 07:37:45 AM »

Good one..
some lines on yakeen..

Teri mohabbat pe yaqeen hamein khudse zyada hai,
teri takdeer ka asar aaj bhi meri lakeeron se gehra hia,
Ek baar waapasi ka iraada to kar sanam,
Khudki hasti ko mazaar banne tak ke intezaar ka waada hai...


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baadal102

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Re: @ YAKEEN @

«Reply #20 on: September 05, 2008, 03:25:05 PM »

thanx a lot all of u. aap ne
mari lines ko pasand kiya us ke liye
tahe dil se sukriya.

Baadal


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Pooja

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«Reply #21 on: September 05, 2008, 03:54:17 PM »

wah wah wah kaya baat hai, bahoot khoob baadal ji and bhawna!! bahoot he acha likha hai app dono ne...

apne yakin per bhi ab yakin nahi
kis aor per yah dil yakin kaise kare
badi jafa se nibhai usne humari wafa
koi samjhaye ab kaise hum kisi se wafa kare../