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Usko yaqee.n mujh par nahi hai
Isme bhi shayad meri kami hai
Mein isme bhi fayeda sochata hu.n
Jo hui aasnuo.n se tar meri zami hai
akela mein hi to gunehgaar nahi hun
Ghaltii to farishtey ne bhi ki hai
Tumhe ab kis baat ki fikr hai
Tumhari aankho mai ye kaisi nami hai
Jo tum chaho, us laqab se pukarun
Ab kahin jake mujhpe qismat hasi hai
Kabhi sochoge akele mai agar tum
To samajh jaoge ke aslam sahi hai |
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«Reply #1 on: August 29, 2009, 08:17:49 AM » |
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Usko yaqee.n mujh par nahi hai
Isme bhi shayad meri kami hai
bahut zabardast agaaz hai
har sher umda likha hai
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«Reply #2 on: August 29, 2009, 08:56:17 AM » |
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Waah Kya baat hai Aslam ji.. Bahoot hi Jazbaato.N se bari ak anhokhi peshkash ... Bhaoot Khoob!
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«Reply #3 on: August 29, 2009, 04:00:51 PM » |
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Akela main hi to gunehgaar nahi hoon,
Galtiyaan to farishto ne bhi ki hai...
...subhanallah...kya line likhi hai Aslam bhai...good work...
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«Reply #4 on: August 29, 2009, 04:47:13 PM » |
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Bohot Khoob Aslam Ji ! Shayad aap hi ne kahin likha tha, aapki ghazal pe yaad aa gaya mujhe.....
Wohi Purani Si Chahatain Hain
Wohi Purani Rafaqatain Hain
Lakeer Paani Pe Khinch Gayi Ho
Abhi To Aisa Hua Nahin Hai !! (NM)
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«Reply #5 on: August 29, 2009, 05:30:46 PM » |
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Aslamji mubarak ho..dil ko chhoone wale sher hain aapke.....  Etbaar hota nahi ab unko mere vaado pe Khara utar nahi saka mai unke erado pe Usko yaqee.n mujh par nahi hai
Isme bhi shayad meri kami hai
Mein isme bhi fayeda sochata hu.n
Jo hui aasnuo.n se tar meri zami hai
akela mein hi to gunehgaar nahi hun
Ghaltii to farishtey ne bhi ki hai
Tumhe ab kis baat ki fikr hai
Tumhari aankho mai ye kaisi nami hai
Jo tum chaho, us laqab se pukarun
Ab kahin jake mujhpe qismat hasi hai
Kabhi sochoge akele mai agar tum
To samajh jaoge ke aslam sahi hai |
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«Reply #6 on: August 29, 2009, 06:31:10 PM » |
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Usko yaqee.n mujh par nahi hai
Isme bhi shayad meri kami hai
Mein isme bhi fayeda sochata hu.n
Jo hui aasnuo.n se tar meri zami hai
akela mein hi to gunehgaar nahi hun
Ghaltii to farishtey ne bhi ki hai
Tumhe ab kis baat ki fikr hai
Tumhari aankho mai ye kaisi nami hai
Jo tum chaho, us laqab se pukarun
Ab kahin jake mujhpe qismat hasi hai
Kabhi sochoge akele mai agar tum
To samajh jaoge ke aslam sahi hai bahut khoob aslam bhai har ek sher apni pehchaan khud karata hai khoob likha hai bhai kya kehna mere iraado la ilm unko hua hi nahin shayad ya aankehn oonki maine padi nahin shayad jane kya hua dil ro pada apni kismat par hothon par hansi phir bhi jami rahi shayad |
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«Reply #7 on: August 29, 2009, 06:42:06 PM » |
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Usko yaqee.n mujh par nahi hai
Isme bhi shayad meri kami hai
Mein isme bhi fayeda sochata hu.n
Jo hui aasnuo.n se tar meri zami hai
akela mein hi to gunehgaar nahi hun
Ghaltii to farishtey ne bhi ki hai
Tumhe ab kis baat ki fikr hai
Tumhari aankho mai ye kaisi nami hai
Jo tum chaho, us laqab se pukarun
Ab kahin jake mujhpe qismat hasi hai
Kabhi sochoge akele mai agar tum
To samajh jaoge ke aslam sahi hai Beautifully written Aslam Ji.. Bahut khoobsurti se har lafz ko piroya hia aapne...  |
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«Reply #8 on: August 30, 2009, 06:41:24 AM » |
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Usko yaqee.n mujh par nahi hai
Isme bhi shayad meri kami hai
bahut zabardast agaaz hai
har sher umda likha hai
thnxxx so much nira ji ek aapne pasnd ki................ |
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«Reply #9 on: August 30, 2009, 06:42:09 AM » |
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Waah Kya baat hai Aslam ji.. Bahoot hi Jazbaato.N se bari ak anhokhi peshkash ... Bhaoot Khoob!
bhut bhut shukriya sophi........................ |
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«Reply #10 on: August 30, 2009, 06:43:13 AM » |
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Akela main hi to gunehgaar nahi hoon,
Galtiyaan to farishto ne bhi ki hai...
...subhanallah...kya line likhi hai Aslam bhai...good work...
thnxxxxx so much JHL thnxxx alot |
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«Reply #11 on: August 30, 2009, 06:44:59 AM » |
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Aslamji mubarak ho..dil ko chhoone wale sher hain aapke..... Etbaar hota nahi ab unko mere vaado pe Khara utar nahi saka mai unke erado pe bhut shukriya smardia ji youn hi saath daite rahiye...... nice one |
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«Reply #12 on: August 30, 2009, 06:46:04 AM » |
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bahut khoob aslam bhai har ek sher apni pehchaan khud karata hai
khoob likha hai bhai kya kehna
mere iraado la ilm unko hua hi nahin shayad
ya aankehn oonki maine padi nahin shayad
jane kya hua dil ro pada apni kismat par
hothon par hansi phir bhi jami rahi shayad
thnxxx so much saahil thnxx dear aur kya khoob likha hai tumne bhi good work keep it up |
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«Reply #13 on: August 30, 2009, 06:47:10 AM » |
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Beautifully written Aslam Ji.. Bahut khoobsurti se har lafz ko piroya hia aapne... bhut bhut skhuriya angel is hosla afzaaii ka............ |
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«Reply #14 on: August 30, 2009, 06:53:51 AM » |
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Bohot Khoob Aslam Ji ! Shayad aap hi ne kahin likha tha, aapki ghazal pe yaad aa gaya mujhe.....
Wohi Purani Si Chahatain Hain
Wohi Purani Rafaqatain Hain
Lakeer Paani Pe Khinch Gayi Ho
Abhi To Aisa Hua Nahin Hai !! (NM)
thnxxx talat thnxxx so much.....ji sahi kaha hai aapne ki maine hi likha tha, is silsile mai kya keh sakta hun bas itna hi ke khyaal hain bandisho.n ke hado.n se kahin aage, ehsaas hawa ka ek jhoka jo kabhi to you.n chu kar nikal jaata hai ke maano ek aisa sukoo.n jo aaj se pehle kabhi nahi mila aur kabhi you.n bhi hota hai ki tishnagi ki hado.n ko paar kar jaata hai to isse rok paana bas ki baat nhi, aap mashallah se itni tawajjo se meri post ko padti hain iske liyn aapko tahe dil se mamnoo hu.n aur umeed karta hun ki aap you.n hi nazar e karm karti rahengi, Allah aapko hamesha khush rakhe aameen |
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