Ye geet adhuri reh jayegi...

by brokenbyluv on October 20, 2010, 11:40:40 AM
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Bhatkte bhatkte aaj tujhe dhundh hi liya,
hamare milan k bina hamari jeet adhuri reh jayegi,

tujh sang ghar basane ka jo khwab hai merra,
terre bagair chaht ki har reet adhuri reh jayegi,

gar na paa sake ek duje ko iss janam mein,
hum dono k darmiya ki baatcheet adhuri reh jayegi,

koi rishta nhi hai merri jholi mein,
tu laut aa nhi tou merri preet adhuri reh jayegi,

merre RUKHSARo ko sada khilane wale ye jaan le,
bina terre ye GEET adhuri reh jayegi...
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«Reply #1 on: October 20, 2010, 11:55:45 AM »
bahut khoob geet ji aap hamare taraf se dil se daad kabool farmaye,yu hi likhte rahiye or humari duaye aap ke saath hai....... Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #2 on: October 20, 2010, 11:57:52 AM »
Bahut bahut shurkiya baadal ji...
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«Reply #3 on: October 20, 2010, 01:12:12 PM »
Geet ji, Aapki likhi kayi Kavitayon Par aisa hota hai,ke kayi baar  lafz dhoondhne padhte hai ke iss Kavita ki tareef mein aisa Kya likh sakoon, kyonki aapki likhi Kavitayen Padhi Kam, mehsoos zyaada ki jaati Hai..
Aapne bahtttttttttttttttt Khoob Likha Hai
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«Reply #4 on: October 21, 2010, 10:23:56 AM »
Bahut bahut shurkiya khwaish ji n shihab ji..
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«Reply #5 on: October 23, 2010, 09:40:24 AM »
wah Geet ji wah .. bahut khoob likha hai aapne... bahut hi pyaari peshkash hai....

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paaya hai tujhe aaj to na khone dunga kabhi,
baahon me bharke tujhe apna bana lunga abhi,

saanson se teri saanson ko baandh lunga main,
is saanson se duur hoke na jaane dunga kabhi,

tu mujhe chaahti hai, mai tujhe chaahta hoon,
paane ki ek duje ko kaunsi kadi bachi hai abhi,

har 'Geet' ko 'Hriday' me basa ke rakhunga,
teri koi 'Geet' na adhuri reh paayegi kabhi....
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«Reply #6 on: October 23, 2010, 09:51:04 AM »
wah Geet ji wah .. bahut khoob likha hai aapne... bahut hi pyaari peshkash hai....

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paaya hai tujhe aaj to na khone dunga kabhi,
baahon me bharke tujhe apna bana lunga abhi,

saanson se teri saanson ko baandh lunga main,
is saanson se duur hoke na jaane dunga kabhi,

tu mujhe chaahti hai, mai tujhe chaahta hoon,
paane ki ek duje ko kaunsi kadi bachi hai abhi,

har 'Geet' ko 'Hriday' me basa ke rakhunga,
teri koi 'Geet' na adhuri reh paayegi kabhi....

Bahu shukriya kapil ji aur behad khoob likha hai ji...
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«Reply #7 on: October 23, 2010, 09:53:45 AM »
bahut bahut shukriya Geet ji...!!!
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«Reply #8 on: January 23, 2011, 05:35:04 PM »
Welcome ji..
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