Ye pal hai ajeeb sa .........!!!!

by Talat on August 08, 2007, 03:10:21 PM

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Talat

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Bheegi palkain, bheege khwaab, dhadkan tham si jaaye kyun
Chalte chalte bandh gaye qadam, koi raah nazar na aaye kyun

Ek aor roshni phailaaye daaman bulaati hai de kar awaaz
Jab bhi chaahen choona usko, wo roshni bujh si jaaye kyun

Kaisi hasrat kaisi chaah hai, sab kuch hai aur kuch bhi nahin
Kaisi hai yeh haalat apni, yeh aankhain bhar bhar aaye kyun

Jo bhi hai, hai phir bhi aas, koi to hai har dam aas paas
Giren jab, thaam le wo haath, magar phir chup jaaye kyun !!


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Re: Ye pal hai ajeeb sa .........!!!!

«Reply #1 on: August 08, 2007, 03:14:54 PM »

Quote from: "Talat"

Ek aor roshni phailaaye daaman bulaati hai de kar awaaz
Jab bhi chaahen choona usko, wo roshni bujh si jaaye kyun

Talat kuddiye...i really admire ur poems and ur writting styel!!! its just amazing aur is poem ke apki yeh do lines mujhe bohot hi achi lagi!!!!


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Ye pal hai ajeeb sa .........!!!!

«Reply #2 on: August 08, 2007, 03:33:39 PM »

beautiful, talat.. bohot hi acha likha hai!


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Ye pal hai ajeeb sa .........!!!!

«Reply #3 on: August 08, 2007, 07:34:01 PM »

Good words Talat ! ! !


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Ye pal hai ajeeb sa .........!!!!

«Reply #4 on: August 08, 2007, 08:31:55 PM »

Just wonderful talat ji Usual Smile


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Ye pal hai ajeeb sa .........!!!!

«Reply #5 on: August 09, 2007, 07:04:33 PM »

Thanks Meena...... your comments made my day...especially when you yourself write so well !! Usual Smile

Thanks a lot Sanya Usual Smile

Thanks Ricky....... and Angel Usual Smile


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Ye pal hai ajeeb sa .........!!!!

«Reply #6 on: August 10, 2007, 09:20:44 AM »

Nice one Talat ji ...

Yahi andaaz hai iska aur yhi hai dastoor
Halat ke aage insaan ho jata hai majboor

Kismat pe jab padte hai waqt ke tapede tab
Hua karte the paas jo, woh ho jate hai door

Sath chod jata hai kabhi, apna hi saya bhi
Kabhi dhoke apno se hi milte hai bharpoor !!

HumTum


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Ye pal hai ajeeb sa .........!!!!

«Reply #7 on: August 10, 2007, 10:21:39 AM »

wah humtum ji... yuh to aap bohot acha likhte hai par yeh sabse best lagi mujhe apki poem!! aur regular aya karo :evil:

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Talat

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Ye pal hai ajeeb sa .........!!!!

«Reply #8 on: August 10, 2007, 01:28:50 PM »

Thanks Humtum...aur bohot achcha likha hai.....saw you after months...!! Good to see you Usual Smile


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Ye pal hai ajeeb sa .........!!!!

«Reply #9 on: August 10, 2007, 02:22:09 PM »

wah wah wah bahoot khoob Talat, bahoot hi acha likha hai.. ek ek line kamal ki likhi hai apne...

Too good Reply Humtum ji!!!


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Talat

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Ye pal hai ajeeb sa .........!!!!

«Reply #10 on: August 11, 2007, 03:32:30 PM »

Thanks a lot Pooja Usual Smile


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Talat

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Ye pal hai ajeeb sa .........!!!!

«Reply #11 on: August 11, 2007, 03:44:42 PM »

Quote from: "HumTum is back"

Insaan kyun majboor hai waqt ke haathon pe
Guzre palon ka kaisa ye karz hai saanson pe

Hote hain qareeb, wo bichad kyun jaate hain
Kho jaati hai raah purani, chale jo nayi raahon pe

Aati hain yaadain, de jaati hain chand aansoo
Wo saamne hon, bharam rehta hai nigahon pe !!!


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Ye pal hai ajeeb sa .........!!!!

«Reply #12 on: August 11, 2007, 07:20:33 PM »

Raahein wahin rehti hai chalte chalte raahi kho jaate hai,
Safar khatam ho jaye to manzil ke sapne bikhar jaate hai,
Paa to Lete hai shayad sab kuch mohabbat mein kuchh log,
Kabhi Mohabbat paake apni zindagi ganwa jaate hai...
sad5


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Ye pal hai ajeeb sa .........!!!!

«Reply #13 on: August 12, 2007, 08:07:18 PM »

BAHUT KHOOB TALATJI..HUMTUM..ANGEL..SABNE BAHUT ACHA LIKHA HAI..EK KOSHISH HAMARE TARAF SE BI

ITNA KUCH KHOYE KE
HUMEIN KUCH PAANA NA AAYA...
MOHABBAT TO KI
DIL-O-JAAN SE
PAR JATAANA NA AAYA...
KHUD KO LUTA DIYA
UNKI EK MUSKAAN KE LIYE
ZAKHM TO ITNE MILE HUMEIN
KE PHIR KABHI MUSKURANA NA AAYA...
ROYE BI BAHUT
PAR EK AANSU BI
UNKE DAAMAN TAK NA AAYA...
DIL MEIN BAS GAYE
PEHLI NAZAR MEIN WOH
KASOOR HAMARA HI THA
JO HUME NAZARE JHUKANA NA AAYA...
UNPE AITBAAR KAISE
KAR LETE "KHWAISH"
JAB UNHE EK WAADA BI
NIBHAANA NA AAYA...