~*~ Yunhi shayar nahin banjate ~*~ by Rahim

by dead heart on January 26, 2011, 01:30:16 PM
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«Reply #15 on: January 26, 2011, 09:12:25 PM »
Quote from: Intezar on January 26, 2011, 07:20:28 PM
Shurkiya Rahim bhai mere dost...

kadra kisko thi zamaane mein mere dard ki Rahim
wo to kagazon ne sahaara diya jo alfaaz utarne diye... !

Intezar !
Kya baat hai jee..
Applause Applause

Mana kay kagaz aur kalam ne tera khoob saath diya hai Intezar,
Mager unhe na bhoolna dost jo tujhe parrne kay liye waqt nikalte hai..
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«Reply #16 on: January 26, 2011, 09:16:00 PM »
Quote from: Shihab on January 26, 2011, 07:56:03 PM
Sabse Pahle To Bahut Shukariya Rahim Bhai Izzat Afzaii Ke Liye
Par Sach Kahun To Main Is Kabil Nahi Bhai. Kyon Ki Mujhse Kahin
Behtar Likhne Waale Hain Yahaan Par,Bhai Jahaan Tak Main Janta Hun
Shayar Hazraat Ki Soch Ki Koi Bhi Had Nahi Hoti Hai Magar Jahaan Tak Mera Sawaal Hai Main Ek Had Mein Bandha Hua Hun Jiske Aage Gar
Main Chaun To Bhi Nahi Nikal Sakta Hun. So Plz Mujhe Shayar Na Bulayen.
Aur Dusri Baat Bhai Main To Anpad Hun Na Mujhe Eng Aati Hai
Na Hindi Na Urdu Yahan Tak K Mujhe To Apni Gujrati Bhi Thikse Nahi Aati.Bas Aap Sabki Sohbat Mein Thoda Bahut Likh Leta Hun
Yeh To Aap Sab Ki Farakh Dili Hai Ki Aap Sab Muhabbaton Ke
Saath Parhte Hain Aur Nakaam Si Koshishon Ko Kabul Farmate Hain
Khair Aur To Kya Kahun Ab, Bas Itna Kehna Chaunga Ki Khwasih Bhai
Ne Jo Kaha Hai Main Une Sehmat Hun..Baaki Raha Aapke Likhne Ka Sawal
To Ek Baat Kehna Chaunga Aap Bahut Achha Likhte Hain
Gar Aapka Dil Mutmain Nahi Aapki Likhawat Pe To Thoda
Sabar Kare Aur Sochke LIKHE Insha ALLAH Aur Nikhar Aa Jayega
Khair Aur Kya Kahun Ab Gar Meri Na Samjhi Mein Maine Koi Aisi
Waisi Baat Kahin Ho To Maafi Chahta Hun....Bahut Shukariya Aapka

ALLAH Pak Aapko Shad o Aabad Rakhe...

Khush Rahiye...

~Shihab~
Anpad woh honge jinhe tumhe parrna nahin ata mere dost..
Zuban na ate hue ap itna acha likhte ho kay kya kahun..
Mujhe wakei bahaut seekhne mila hai apki likhayi se..
Aur aj jana yeh baat aur yaad rakhunga kay ap misal ho Yo ki
mehfil main..
main apka teh dil se shukriya ada karta hoon saath dene
kay liye..
Khush rahiye..!
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«Reply #17 on: January 26, 2011, 09:26:44 PM »
Quote from: brokenbyluv on January 26, 2011, 02:58:40 PM
Bahut khoob rahim,tou kya hua agar tum sirf dard pe likhte ho shayari hi ek zariya hai jisse hame apni feelings express karsakte hai tum bahut ache shayar ho aur hamesha kuch alag likhte ho..i like ur posts...Usual Smile
Apka teh dil se shukriya meri Geet di..
Yunhi saath dete rahiye..
Khush rahiye..!
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Intezar
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«Reply #18 on: January 26, 2011, 09:29:15 PM »
ji rahim bhai...

beshak main shukriya bhi ada nahin kar sakta un dosto ka
phir bhul kaise paunga unhe jo har pal mujh par meherbaan rahe... !

Intezar !

Quote from: -Rahim- on January 26, 2011, 09:12:25 PM
Kya baat hai jee..
Applause Applause

Mana kay kagaz aur kalam ne tera khoob saath diya hai Intezar,
Mager unhe na bhoolna dost jo tujhe parrne kay liye waqt nikalte hai..
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«Reply #19 on: January 26, 2011, 11:08:42 PM »
Quote from: Intezar on January 26, 2011, 09:29:15 PM
ji rahim bhai...

beshak main shukriya bhi ada nahin kar sakta un dosto ka
phir bhul kaise paunga unhe jo har pal mujh par meherbaan rahe... !

Intezar !

Bahaut bahaut khoob..!
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«Reply #20 on: January 27, 2011, 03:53:11 AM »
Bahut Khub Rahim JI Bahut Khubsurat Likha Hai Aapne Applause Applause
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manjum
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«Reply #21 on: January 27, 2011, 04:07:20 AM »
bahut hi dard hai is peshkash main RAhimji...

bahut achha laga... dil se daad

aur han aap bahut ache shayar hai.... jahan tak bat hai line lambi ya chhoti hone ki baat dil ki ho to sab achha lagta hai...
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«Reply #22 on: January 27, 2011, 03:37:56 PM »
Quote from: Rishi Agarwal on January 27, 2011, 03:53:11 AM
Bahut Khub Rahim JI Bahut Khubsurat Likha Hai Aapne Applause Applause

Teh teh dil se shukriya Rishi bhai..
Khush rahiye..!
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«Reply #23 on: January 27, 2011, 03:39:24 PM »
Quote from: manjum on January 27, 2011, 04:07:20 AM
bahut hi dard hai is peshkash main RAhimji...

bahut achha laga... dil se daad

aur han aap bahut ache shayar hai.... jahan tak bat hai line lambi ya chhoti hone ki baat dil ki ho to sab achha lagta hai...
Main apka teh dil se shukriya ada karta hoon Manjum jee..
Apne bilkul sahi kaha..
Khush rahiye..!
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«Reply #24 on: January 27, 2011, 03:43:44 PM »
Dost--bahut hi khubsurat alfaz aor ehsaas hain aapke.
aur Dost mujhe aap jesa banna hai--
coz i love ur poetry and ofcourse I love You dost Usual Smile
meri har dua me aap ho
khus rahen
sukriya
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«Reply #25 on: January 27, 2011, 04:26:43 PM »
Quote from: killbill on January 27, 2011, 03:43:44 PM
Dost--bahut hi khubsurat alfaz aor ehsaas hain aapke.
aur Dost mujhe aap jesa banna hai--
coz i love ur poetry and ofcourse I love You dost Usual Smile
meri har dua me aap ho
khus rahen
sukriya
Haaye mere dost..
muskaan la di chehre pe..
Mujh jaisa nahin, mujse behtar baniyega..
Dua hai meri..
Teh teh dil se shukriya dost..
Khush rahiye..!
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