Zabt-e-Wafaa Se Guzarne Waala Tha...

by Aryaan on May 25, 2005, 10:51:01 AM
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Hudood-e-zabt-e-wafaa se guzarne waala tha
Main apne aap ko neelaam karne waala tha

Safar ke shauQ ne majboor kar diya warna
Main tere shehar mein ik din theharne waala tha

Khud apne saaye se ab chaunk utth'ta hai
Woh aadmi jo kissi se na darne waala tha

Teri nazar ne bare pyar se samait liya
Abhi main aur zayada bikharne waala tha

Huwa hai Qtal mera khwahishon ke haathon se
Main itni jald tau hargizz na marrne waala tha

Khalish lahoo na raha mere jism mein warna
Ghazal mein aur bhi main rang bharne waala tha...
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«Reply #1 on: May 25, 2005, 10:59:05 AM »
Quote from: "Aryaan"

Hudood-e-zabt-e-wafaa se guzarne waala tha
Main apne aap ko neelaam karne waala tha

Safar ke shauQ ne majboor kar diya warna
Main tere shehar mein ik din theharne waala tha

Khud apne saaye se ab chaunk utth'ta hai
Woh aadmi jo kissi se na darne waala tha

Teri nazar ne bare pyar se samait liya
Abhi main aur zayada bikharne waala tha

Huwa hai Qtal mera khwahishon ke haathon se
Main itni jald tau hargizz na marrne waala tha

Khalish lahoo na raha mere jism mein warna
Ghazal mein aur bhi main rang bharne waala tha...
wah aryaan,dil khush ho gaya padh ke. Usual Smile
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«Reply #2 on: May 25, 2005, 11:00:30 AM »
sach kaha Nidhi ji aap ne .... Aryaan Bohat hi khoob likha... kya baat hai...
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«Reply #3 on: May 25, 2005, 11:06:36 AM »
Bohat shukriya Nidhi & Jalpari.................
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«Reply #4 on: May 25, 2005, 11:42:09 AM »
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Hudood-e-zabt-e-wafaa se guzarne waala tha
Main apne aap ko neelaam karne waala tha

Safar ke shauQ ne majboor kar diya warna
Main tere shehar mein ik din theharne waala tha

Khud apne saaye se ab chaunk utth'ta hai
Woh aadmi jo kissi se na darne waala tha

Teri nazar ne bare pyar se samait liya
Abhi main aur zayada bikharne waala tha

Huwa hai Qtal mera khwahishon ke haathon se
Main itni jald tau hargizz na marrne waala tha

Khalish lahoo na raha mere jism mein warna
Ghazal mein aur bhi main rang bharne waala tha...


bahut aacha hai yaar its gr8
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«Reply #5 on: May 25, 2005, 09:26:39 PM »
Bohat shukriya Tushar........................
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«Reply #6 on: May 25, 2005, 09:29:14 PM »
"Khud apne saaye se ab chaunk utth'ta hai
Woh aadmi jo kissi se na darne waala tha

Teri nazar ne bare pyar se samait liya
Abhi main aur zayada bikharne waala tha

Huwa hai Qtal mera khwahishon ke haathon se
Main itni jald tau hargizz na marrne waala tha

Khalish lahoo na raha mere jism mein warna
Ghazal mein aur bhi main rang bharne waala tha..."


beautiful lines aryaan ji!!!!!!!!!! simply great!!!!!!

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«Reply #7 on: May 25, 2005, 11:01:19 PM »
Bohat shukriya Meena.....

Jitna tumko chaha tha hum ne
Utna kisi ko chah na sake
Socha tha bhool jaayein ge kabhi na kabhi
Lekin najaane kyun bhulaa na sake
Honton ne tau chupa liye armaan dil ke
Lekin aankhon se chupa na sake..

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«Reply #8 on: May 25, 2005, 11:09:04 PM »
wah aryaan...itni achi shayari kaise likh lete hai aap!!! apke yeh shayari pad ke meri ek post mujhe yaad aa gayi:

Hume bhi arzoo thi tere sang jeevan bitane ki,
Par saath tera humne paya bhi to nahin...

Yuh to zindagi me bohot gum hote hai ansoon bahane ke liye,
Par tere jaise pehle kisi ne rulaya bhi to nahin...

Badakte rahe is duniya me humsafar ki talash me,
Par tujh jaisa yaar phir doobara mila bhi to nahin....

Tere yaadon ki pehedari mere ashk dete hai aye dost,
Koi aur inke pehedari ke kabil bhi to nahin…
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«Reply #9 on: May 25, 2005, 11:24:39 PM »
Ayraan...

Hudood-e-zabt-e-wafaa se guzarne waala tha
Main apne aap ko neelaam karne waala tha...


kiyaa baat hai yaar... sher bohat passand ayaa...
Always Anjli
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«Reply #10 on: May 25, 2005, 11:28:56 PM »
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wah aryaan...itni achi shayari kaise likh lete hai aap!!! apke yeh shayari pad ke meri ek post mujhe yaad aa gayi:

Hume bhi arzoo thi tere sang jeevan bitane ki,
Par saath tera humne paya bhi to nahin...

Yuh to zindagi me bohot gum hote hai ansoon bahane ke liye,
Par tere jaise pehle kisi ne rulaya bhi to nahin...

Badakte rahe is duniya me humsafar ki talash me,
Par tujh jaisa yaar phir doobara mila bhi to nahin....

Tere yaadon ki pehedari mere ashk dete hai aye dost,
Koi aur inke pehedari ke kabil bhi to nahin…

Aap sabko parh parh kar main bhi kuch likh leta hoon Meena..Usual Smile
Bohat khoob Meena... it's beautiful....
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«Reply #11 on: May 25, 2005, 11:30:21 PM »
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Ayraan...

Hudood-e-zabt-e-wafaa se guzarne waala tha
Main apne aap ko neelaam karne waala tha...


kiyaa baat hai yaar... sher bohat passand ayaa...
Always Anjli

Shukriya Anjli...... Aap kahan ghayeb thin itne dinon se?..
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«Reply #12 on: May 25, 2005, 11:30:50 PM »
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Quote from: "Meena"
wah aryaan...itni achi shayari kaise likh lete hai aap!!! apke yeh shayari pad ke meri ek post mujhe yaad aa gayi:

Hume bhi arzoo thi tere sang jeevan bitane ki,
Par saath tera humne paya bhi to nahin...

Yuh to zindagi me bohot gum hote hai ansoon bahane ke liye,
Par tere jaise pehle kisi ne rulaya bhi to nahin...

Badakte rahe is duniya me humsafar ki talash me,
Par tujh jaisa yaar phir doobara mila bhi to nahin....

Tere yaadon ki pehedari mere ashk dete hai aye dost,
Koi aur inke pehedari ke kabil bhi to nahin…

Aap sabko parh parh kar main bhi kuch likh leta hoon Meena..Usual Smile
Bohat khoob Meena... it's beautiful....


thank u ji!!

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«Reply #13 on: May 25, 2005, 11:50:01 PM »
Shukariaa Yaar...

Dill tak lagaa apkaa puchna, vesse chutii kayliye gay thi... Touring North Africa... Tunisia... Morocco... Turkey... ect

'Reth mein jahaan jahaan poun kay nishaan paday,
Wahan wahan dill key kuch tukaray choord diye...'

Always Anjli
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«Reply #14 on: May 26, 2005, 03:19:06 AM »
melte hai phale nazar
ho gaye hum dewane
ab age piyar mei kiya ho
ye to shirf kuda jane.
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