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by Jiya on February 09, 2009, 12:13:05 PM
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Jiya
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Haan!! JIYA nahin jaata yun Kisi ke Jaane ke baad,
Tab Bheed mein bhi Koi aksar kyun Tanhaa  sa lagta hai ??

Aise hi Zindagi mein Harpal jab Saath ho Kisi ka,
Tanhaai hote huye bhi kyun Mela sa lagta hai ??

Kyun koi Yaad na aaye har Waqt Door reh kar bhi JIYA ko,
Kisi ko Bhulaane ke liye har akhri Jaam bhi kyun Pehela sa lagta hai ??

Agar har Gum se Rishta hai sirf is JIYA ka,
To Duniya mein har Tanhaa Dil kyun Diljala sa lagta hai Huh?

Jab Seene mein hi Dafn reh jaaye Jazbaat kisi ke,
Apna aks bhi Sheeshe mein kaala Saaya sa lagta hai.

Yun to Taraasha bhi jaata hai Pattharon ko Haathon se,
Kabhi rah mein Taraasha-Patthar bhi Thukraya sa  lagta hai.

Koi muskurate huye Chhipata hai apni Bheegi Palken,
Use har Khilta Chanam bhi Ujada (murjhaya) sa  lagta hai

daman chhalakta hai kisi ka, duniya ki har khushi se,
sab ke mil jaane par bhi, koi kisi se bichhda sa  lagta hai.

Koi Gila, Shikva aur Shikayat hai hi nahin,
Par kisi ka diya hua Zakhm aaj bhi Gehera sa lagta hai.

................................................. ........Jiya ...



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deepika_divya
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«Reply #1 on: February 09, 2009, 12:20:51 PM »
wah wah bahoot khoob jiya.. bahoot dino baad baad tumari poetry padne ko mili.. i really liked it.yuhin likhti raha karo.. i like ur poetries..
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sajid_ghayel
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«Reply #2 on: February 09, 2009, 12:50:42 PM »
Bohat khoob Jiya toooooo good  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Dard tujme jo chipa hain, woh q apna sa lagta
Aasoo GHAYEL ka, teri aakh me tehra sa lagta hain

                        -Sajid Ghayel-
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rawattanha
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«Reply #3 on: February 09, 2009, 12:59:18 PM »
wah jiya ji good one but title also very fine.


              Zakhm aaj bhi gehra sa lagta hai
              jaise waqt thehra sa lagta hai.
              jee raha hain "TANHA" teri yaad
              mgar jaise yaadon mein pehra sa lagta hai
              aandhi kuch yun chali sare aam zindagi.
              ab har chehra tera sa lagta hai
         zakhm gehra sa..............
             
               nahin raha kuch pass mere teri yaad ke siwa
               kyun har aansoo aankh mein thehra sa lagta hai
               zakhm-zakhm hun dhekhe toh kuch ho
               sunta nahin khuda woh bhi bhehra sa lagta hai
         Zakhm gehra sa............


tanha-----
 
           
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Pooja
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«Reply #4 on: February 09, 2009, 05:41:17 PM »
Nice to see you back Jiya.... Good work..

Good work all!!!!
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pankshivam
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«Reply #5 on: February 09, 2009, 08:15:31 PM »
Haan!! JIYA nahin jaata yun Kisi ke Jaane ke baad,
Tab Bheed mein bhi Koi aksar kyun Tanhaa  sa lagta hai ??

Aise hi Zindagi mein Harpal jab Saath ho Kisi ka,
Tanhaai hote huye bhi kyun Mela sa lagta hai ??

Kyun koi Yaad na aaye har Waqt Door reh kar bhi JIYA ko,
Kisi ko Bhulaane ke liye har akhri Jaam bhi kyun Pehela sa lagta hai ??

Agar har Gum se Rishta hai sirf is JIYA ka,
To Duniya mein har Tanhaa Dil kyun Diljala sa lagta hai Huh?

Jab Seene mein hi Dafn reh jaaye Jazbaat kisi ke,
Apna aks bhi Sheeshe mein kaala Saaya sa lagta hai.

Yun to Taraasha bhi jaata hai Pattharon ko Haathon se,
Kabhi rah mein Taraasha-Patthar bhi Thukraya sa  lagta hai.

Koi muskurate huye Chhipata hai apni Bheegi Palken,
Use har Khilta Chanam bhi Ujada (murjhaya) sa  lagta hai

daman chhalakta hai kisi ka, duniya ki har khushi se,
sab ke mil jaane par bhi, koi kisi se bichhda sa  lagta hai.

Koi Gila, Shikva aur Shikayat hai hi nahin,
Par kisi ka diya hua Zakhm aaj bhi Gehera sa lagta hai.
................................................. ........Jiya ...
Bahoot Khoob Likha Jiyaji
Bahoot Khoob  Applause Applause Applause
Bohat khoob Jiya toooooo good  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Dard tujme jo chipa hain, woh q apna sa lagta
Aasoo GHAYEL ka, teri aakh me tehra sa lagta hain

                        -Sajid Ghayel-

Bahoot Khoob Ghayal Sahab  Applause Applause Applause
wah jiya ji good one but title also very fine.


              Zakhm aaj bhi gehra sa lagta hai
              jaise waqt thehra sa lagta hai.
              jee raha hain "TANHA" teri yaad
              mgar jaise yaadon mein pehra sa lagta hai
              aandhi kuch yun chali sare aam zindagi.
              ab har chehra tera sa lagta hai
         zakhm gehra sa..............
             
               nahin raha kuch pass mere teri yaad ke siwa
               kyun har aansoo aankh mein thehra sa lagta hai
               zakhm-zakhm hun dhekhe toh kuch ho
               sunta nahin khuda woh bhi bhehra sa lagta hai
         Zakhm gehra sa............


tanha-----
 
           
Tanha ji Bahoot Khoob Likha Aapne bhi  Applause Applause Applause
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rawattanha
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«Reply #6 on: February 10, 2009, 06:36:19 AM »
shukriya shivam
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Talat
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«Reply #7 on: February 10, 2009, 11:01:16 AM »
Bohot Khoob Jiya...Nice to see you after long time...!!

Bohot Khoob Rawat Ji...Nice sher Sajid Ji..!
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sajid_ghayel
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«Reply #8 on: February 10, 2009, 12:48:45 PM »
Bohat shukriyaan Talat. Main ek choti si guzarish karna chahuga apne dosto se ke jab aap ko logh dad de ya appriciate kare to please aap unki is koshish ko acknowledge kare. Warna aisa mehsoos hota hain ke hamari dad ya hamara likha hua koi sher waste ho gaya. Yeh galti kaiee martaba mujh se bhi hui hain aur main puri koshish karuga ke apni is galti me sudhar laoo aur jab jab mere dost muje izzat bakshe ya meri thread me koi sher likhe main tahe dil se unka shukriya ada karu.
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Jiya
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«Reply #9 on: February 11, 2009, 11:36:12 AM »
ohh really,,,,,  thanks a lot, U all  happy3  mujhe bhi bohot achha laga  kaafi dino ke baad aap sabhi se is tarah milna,,,  icon_flower...  tanha ji aapne bohot hi achha likha hai ,,,, really good ...
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rawattanha
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«Reply #10 on: February 11, 2009, 11:50:04 AM »
aap sabhi ka dhanya waad. bas aap log daad dete rahiye aur hum yun hi likhte rahengey.
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«Reply #11 on: February 11, 2009, 11:52:50 AM »
Nice One Jiya Ji,.
Bohat Achche,.
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«Reply #12 on: August 08, 2013, 08:12:59 PM »
Thanks a lot all of you.... Usual Smile
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«Reply #13 on: August 08, 2013, 08:26:27 PM »
ehsaash ahche haiN aur kosish ahchi lagi mohtarma, bas aage bhi aap yuNhi likhti raheN...!!
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