zarraa .... uthaanaa bhool baithe sar bhi hum kuchh -Panna 2:Shayri-E-Dard

zarraa

Yoindian Shayar

Rau: 100

Offline

Waqt Bitaya:
8 days, 7 hours and 21 minutes.
Posts: 2242
Member Since: May 2012

«Reply #15 on: June 08, 2013, 12:45:26 PM »

Quote from: F.H.SIDDIQUI on June 07, 2013, 11:27:29 AM

Zarra sahib , Ek alag radeef o qaqfiye mein achhi ghazal se nawaza hai.
Bahut mubarakbaad pesh hai.

Hassan Sahab ... Apki hauslafzaayee aur rehnumaayee ka tah e dil se shukrguzaar hoon


	Logged

Similar Poetry and Posts (Note: Find replies to above post after the related posts and poetry)
	ghazal : aaj kal kuchh khafa khafa rehta .... (zarraa) by zarraa in Shayri-E-Dard
	hum bhool se usko khuda apna bana baithe.. by aru12 in Shayeri for Dard -e- Bewafai
	zarraa .... khote khote kuchh to paaya ja sakta hai by zarraa in Shairi - E - Zindagi
	zarraa ... chalo kar le kashish zamaana kuchh aur by zarraa in Shairi - E - Zindagi
	zarraa ... jam’a jo kuchh kiya khuddari meiN by zarraa in Shairi - E - Zindagi

nandbahu

Mashhur Shayar

Rau: 122

Offline

Gender: Male

Waqt Bitaya:
20 days, 3 hours and 24 minutes.
Posts: 14552
Member Since: Sep 2011

Re: zarraa .... uthaanaa bhool baithe sar bhi hum kuchh

«Reply #16 on: June 08, 2013, 02:40:02 PM »

bahut khoob


	Logged

zarraa

Yoindian Shayar

Rau: 100

Offline

Waqt Bitaya:
8 days, 7 hours and 21 minutes.
Posts: 2242
Member Since: May 2012

Re: zarraa .... uthaanaa bhool baithe sar bhi hum kuchh

«Reply #17 on: June 08, 2013, 04:21:42 PM »

Quote from: saahill on June 07, 2013, 11:32:16 AM

bohut khub zarra jo bohut umda peshkash

Sahill ji, pasand karne ka bahaut bahaut shukriya


	Logged

zarraa

Yoindian Shayar

Rau: 100

Offline

Waqt Bitaya:
8 days, 7 hours and 21 minutes.
Posts: 2242
Member Since: May 2012

Re: zarraa .... uthaanaa bhool baithe sar bhi hum kuchh

«Reply #18 on: June 08, 2013, 04:55:46 PM »

Quote from: Mohammad Touhid on June 07, 2013, 02:38:23 PM

Na jane kitne sher padhe, nazm padhe...!!

dil ko chhoone wali ye kalaam kaam kar gayi...!!

Touhid ji .... Ye apki zarranawaazee hai ... apki daad sar aankhon pe Janaab !!!

bahut bahut aur bahut umda zarra ji..

beshumaar daad kubul kare..

Applause


	Logged

marhoom bahayaat

Guest

Re: zarraa .... uthaanaa bhool baithe sar bhi hum kuchh

«Reply #19 on: June 08, 2013, 05:00:56 PM »

Quote from: zarraa on June 07, 2013, 01:51:45 AM

dostoN ... aadaab .... ek puraanee ghazal, jo ab tak is bazm meiN haazir naheeN ho saki hai, use pesh kar raha hooN ... kyuNki iska beher thorha sa uncommon hai, isliye zaahir kar raha hooN ... 1222/1222/122...is beher ki ek missal janaab mehdi hassan sahab ki gaayee huwee shayar hafeez ki mashhoor ghazal hai .... mohabbat karne waale kam na hoNge...

khushee ka saaz-o-saamaaN hai na kam kuchh
magar tera bhi hai phir ek gham kuchh

(saaz-o-saamaaN : possessions/a set of material things)

barhe hi ja rahe un ke sitam kuchh
uthaanaa bhool baithe sar bhi hum kuchh

chale hi ja rahe raah-e-junooN par
khule hi ja raha chaaheiN bharam kuchh

na to roka na dekha deed bhar ke
zabaaN thi khushk aur aaNkheN theeN nam kuchh

tere ahed-e-wafaa par naaz karte
tawakko-e-wafaa karte na hum kuchh

(ahed = promise, naaz = pride, tawakko : expectation/hope)

kiya ruswaa mujhe ehsaan tera
sabak the seekh’ne mujh ko aham kuchh

(ruswa = disgraced)

dukaaneiN khol leeN logoN ne kitneeN
unheiN jo mil gaye dair-o-haram kuchh

(dair-o-haram = places of worship)

milee hai koh-e-din ko kaat kar ye
jamaal-e-mayy naheeN sheereeN se kam kuchh

sorry sir ,i could not under stand this sher

(koh = mountain, jamaal = beauty, may = liquor)

meree maano to wo r’sta badalna
mileiN “zarraa” ke jo naqsh-e-qadam kuchh

(naqsh-e-qadam = footprints)

- ZARRAA

nice,sir


	Logged

zarraa

Yoindian Shayar

Rau: 100

Offline

Waqt Bitaya:
8 days, 7 hours and 21 minutes.
Posts: 2242
Member Since: May 2012

Re: zarraa .... uthaanaa bhool baithe sar bhi hum kuchh

«Reply #20 on: June 08, 2013, 06:50:03 PM »

Quote from: Taish on June 07, 2013, 02:49:00 PM

bahut alag aur bahut umda likha hai janaab, is mukammal ghazal pe meri dili daad qubool farmaayeN janaab...

Taish ji ... Ye apki inaayat aur apka sneh hai ... Apka bahaut zyaada shukrguzaar hoon ...


	Logged

soudagar

Guest

Re: zarraa .... uthaanaa bhool baithe sar bhi hum kuchh

«Reply #21 on: June 08, 2013, 06:59:52 PM »


	Logged

zarraa

Yoindian Shayar

Rau: 100

Offline

Waqt Bitaya:
8 days, 7 hours and 21 minutes.
Posts: 2242
Member Since: May 2012

Re: zarraa .... uthaanaa bhool baithe sar bhi hum kuchh

«Reply #22 on: June 09, 2013, 04:52:25 AM »

Quote from: mkv on June 07, 2013, 05:45:55 PM

tere ahed-e-wafaa par naaz karte
tawakko-e-wafaa karte na hum kuchh

kiya ruswaa mujhe ehsaan tera
sabak the seekh’ne mujh ko aham kuchh

dukaaneiN khol leeN logoN ne kitneeN
unheiN jo mil gaye dair-o-haram kuchh

Bahut khoob Zarra saheb

mkv ji...waqt dene ka aur gaur farmaane ka bahaut bahaut shukriya


	Logged

zarraa

Yoindian Shayar

Rau: 100

Offline

Waqt Bitaya:
8 days, 7 hours and 21 minutes.
Posts: 2242
Member Since: May 2012

Re: zarraa .... uthaanaa bhool baithe sar bhi hum kuchh

«Reply #23 on: June 09, 2013, 04:55:11 AM »

Quote from: aqsh on June 07, 2013, 08:22:54 PM

waah zarra ji. bahut hi umda peshkash rahi. hazaron dili daad qubool kare.
[/quote

Aqsh ji ... inaayat apki ... Daad ka tah e dil se shukriya


	Logged

zarraa

Yoindian Shayar

Rau: 100

Offline

Waqt Bitaya:
8 days, 7 hours and 21 minutes.
Posts: 2242
Member Since: May 2012

Re: zarraa .... uthaanaa bhool baithe sar bhi hum kuchh

«Reply #24 on: June 09, 2013, 06:58:51 PM »

Quote from: nandbahu on June 08, 2013, 02:40:02 PM

bahut khoob

Shukriya Nandbahu ji


	Logged

zarraa

Yoindian Shayar

Rau: 100

Offline

Waqt Bitaya:
8 days, 7 hours and 21 minutes.
Posts: 2242
Member Since: May 2012

Re: zarraa .... uthaanaa bhool baithe sar bhi hum kuchh

«Reply #25 on: June 09, 2013, 11:40:53 PM »

Quote from: marhoom bahayaat on June 08, 2013, 05:00:56 PM

nice,sir

MB ji ... waqt dene ka aur pasand karne ka bahaut bahaut shukriya.

Apne is sher ke khayaal ke bare mein poochha tha ...

milee hai koh-e-din ko kaat kar ye
jamaal-e-mayy naheeN sheereeN se kam kuchchh

Ye mayygusaaron ke dil ke jazbaat kehta hai... Jaise farhaad ne SheereeN ko paane ke liye koh (mountain) ko kaata ( tabhi use koh-kan bhi kehte hain.... haalaNki is ke baad bhi wo use pa n saka) ....usee tarah log har roz apni zindagiyon mein pahaarh jaisa din kaatate hai, phir unhein jab sharaab ka deedaar hota hai to us ka husn SheereeN se kam naheen lagta unhein.

Apna khayaal rakhiyega .... Duaon ke saath ....Zarraa


	Logged

zarraa

Yoindian Shayar

Rau: 100

Offline

Waqt Bitaya:
8 days, 7 hours and 21 minutes.
Posts: 2242
Member Since: May 2012

Re: zarraa .... uthaanaa bhool baithe sar bhi hum kuchh

«Reply #26 on: June 10, 2013, 12:36:17 AM »

Quote from: soudagar on June 08, 2013, 06:59:52 PM

Shukriya Saudagar ji


	Logged

Pages: 1 [2] All

Yoindia ShayariAdab > Shayri ( Poetry ) or Shayari > Shayri-E-Dard > Topic: zarraa .... uthaanaa bhool baithe sar bhi hum kuchh