ghazal : aaj kal kuchh khafa khafa rehta .... (zarraa)

by zarraa on July 08, 2012, 05:50:43 PM
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aaj kal kuchh khafa khafa rehta
isliye tum se hooN juda rehta

baat karta hooN dil hi dil tum se
bolne ko n kuchh bacha rehta

har tamanna mujhe hai dhooNdh rahee
aur maiN hooN kaheeN chhupa rehta

khwaahisheiN kar raheeN jawaab talab
sar jhukaye maiN chup khada rehta

noor ban kar jo teergee dekhooN
dood rehta to kya bura rehta
(teergee = darkness, dood = smoke)

roz dekhooN zamane ke jalwe
roz bezaar-o- bemaza rehta

bik chuke hoN zubaan-o-gosh mere
par in aaNkhoN se dekhta rehta
(gosh = ear)

shamma-e-bazm ban bhi jata agar
mehfilioN meiN bujha bujha rehta

dekhta din meiN khwaab maiN kal ke
aur raatoN ko jaagta rehta

kuchh sila tarq-e-wafa ka hota
saNg dil jo pighal gaya rehta

roz dushwaariyaaN badhe jaateeN
waqt ai kaash tu ruka rehta

ishq duniya se kar bhi leta agar
uska aashiq maiN bewafa rehta

hooN maiN badnaam maikade tak meiN
pee ke wo aql baaNt’ta rehta

kaash lagta n shayari se dil
saaree duniya se dil laga rehta

waah kya jaam hai dil-e-zarraa
toot kar bhi bhara bhara rehta


- zarraa
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«Reply #1 on: July 09, 2012, 12:31:34 AM »
bahut he behatreen peshkash is par dili daad mubarak baad aur ek rau
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«Reply #2 on: July 09, 2012, 03:10:17 AM »
Bahut behatreen peshkash
vaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah
vaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah
vaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah
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«Reply #3 on: July 09, 2012, 07:34:28 AM »
Bahut khubsurat ghazal hai zarra saheb .Ye sher to bahut hi kamaal ka hai:

'Shamma-e-bazm  ban bhi jaata agar,
 Mahfilon  mein  bujha  bujha rahta '

  Lekin 10th sher ka doosra misra shaayed nazar e saani chaahta hai . check kar lijyega.

  Aisi hi khubsurat ghazlon ke sath Yoindia Shayariadab per aate rahiye.

                                          Duago , HASAN
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«Reply #4 on: July 09, 2012, 04:04:02 PM »
Zarra Sahaab Aadaab!

Kia baat hai janab waaH badi hi khoobsurat gazal kahi hai...
Sabhi ashaar aik se badhkar aik rahe... gazab ke khayaal
piroye haiN janab... Usual Smile

Is khoobsurat aur umdaa gazal par hazaaroN dili daad O
mubbarakbad kabul kijiye... Usual Smile

Likhate rahiye... aate rahiye...
YO ki mehfil ki ronak badhate rahiye...

Shaad O aabaad rahiye...
Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile                   
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«Reply #5 on: July 09, 2012, 04:12:50 PM »
bahut khoob
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«Reply #6 on: July 11, 2012, 02:52:39 PM »
Quote from: sksaini4 on July 09, 2012, 12:31:34 AM
bahut he behatreen peshkash is par dili daad mubarak baad aur ek rau

Daad aur rau ka shukriya Saini ji
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«Reply #7 on: July 11, 2012, 02:53:56 PM »
Quote from: mkv on July 09, 2012, 03:10:17 AM
Bahut behatreen peshkash
vaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah
vaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah
vaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah
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mkv ji .... itne dil se daad dene ka shukriya
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«Reply #8 on: July 11, 2012, 03:03:30 PM »
Quote from: F.H.SIDDIQUI on July 09, 2012, 07:34:28 AM
Bahut khubsurat ghazal hai zarra saheb .Ye sher to bahut hi kamaal ka hai:

'Shamma-e-bazm  ban bhi jaata agar,
 Mahfilon  mein  bujha  bujha rahta '

  Lekin 10th sher ka doosra misra shaayed nazar e saani chaahta hai . check kar lijyega.

  Aisi hi khubsurat ghazlon ke sath Yoindia Shayariadab per aate rahiye.

                                          Duago , HASAN
Quote from: F.H.SIDDIQUI on July 09, 2012, 07:34:28 AM
Bahut khubsurat ghazal hai zarra saheb .Ye sher to bahut hi kamaal ka hai:

'Shamma-e-bazm  ban bhi jaata agar,
 Mahfilon  mein  bujha  bujha rahta '

  Lekin 10th sher ka doosra misra shaayed nazar e saani chaahta hai . check kar lijyega.

  Aisi hi khubsurat ghazlon ke sath Yoindia Shayariadab per aate rahiye.

                                          Duago , HASAN
shukriya hasan sahab...apke ishare par gaur karoonga
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«Reply #9 on: July 11, 2012, 03:05:01 PM »
Quote from: ParwaaZ on July 09, 2012, 04:04:02 PM
Zarra Sahaab Aadaab!

Kia baat hai janab waaH badi hi khoobsurat gazal kahi hai...
Sabhi ashaar aik se badhkar aik rahe... gazab ke khayaal
piroye haiN janab... Usual Smile

Is khoobsurat aur umdaa gazal par hazaaroN dili daad O
mubbarakbad kabul kijiye... Usual Smile

Likhate rahiye... aate rahiye...
YO ki mehfil ki ronak badhate rahiye...

Shaad O aabaad rahiye...
Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile                   


itni mohabbat se daad dene ka shukriya parwaaz
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«Reply #10 on: July 11, 2012, 03:06:04 PM »
Quote from: ParwaaZ on July 09, 2012, 04:04:02 PM
Zarra Sahaab Aadaab!

Kia baat hai janab waaH badi hi khoobsurat gazal kahi hai...
Sabhi ashaar aik se badhkar aik rahe... gazab ke khayaal
piroye haiN janab... Usual Smile

Is khoobsurat aur umdaa gazal par hazaaroN dili daad O
mubbarakbad kabul kijiye... Usual Smile

Likhate rahiye... aate rahiye...
YO ki mehfil ki ronak badhate rahiye...

Shaad O aabaad rahiye...
Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile                   


itni mohabbat se daad dene Ma shukriya parwaaz
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«Reply #11 on: July 11, 2012, 03:09:33 PM »
Quote from: ParwaaZ on July 09, 2012, 04:04:02 PM
Zarra Sahaab Aadaab!

Kia baat hai janab waaH badi hi khoobsurat gazal kahi hai...
Sabhi ashaar aik se badhkar aik rahe... gazab ke khayaal
piroye haiN janab... Usual Smile

Is khoobsurat aur umdaa gazal par hazaaroN dili daad O
mubbarakbad kabul kijiye... Usual Smile

Likhate rahiye... aate rahiye...
YO ki mehfil ki ronak badhate rahiye...

Shaad O aabaad rahiye...
Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile                   


sorry pichhle do replies adhoore post ho gaye.

Itni mohabbat se daad dene ka shukriya parwaaz ji. koshish rahegee ki aage ki bazm ki khidmat karta rahoon.
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«Reply #12 on: July 11, 2012, 03:10:40 PM »
Quote from: kamlesh.yadav001 on July 09, 2012, 04:12:50 PM
bahut khoob

shukriya kamlesh ji
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