Zinda hun magar ab jina manzur nahi!

by BeNam on July 03, 2006, 07:51:37 PM
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BeNam
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Ashkon ko chhalakana manzur nahi,
Labon ko muskurana manzur nahi,
Zinda hun magar ab jina manzur nahi!

Narazagi teri sahe is dil ko manzur nahi,
Kisi aur rukh ho tera hume yeh manzur nahi
Zinda hun magar ab jina manzur nahi!

--- BENAM ---
Zindagi se mile kisi mode per ab yeh manzur nahi,
Zinda hun magar ai zindagi is main tera kasur nahi!
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shayar_dildaar
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«Reply #1 on: July 03, 2006, 07:53:22 PM »
Excellent!!!
KAhan they aap bhai sahab...
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BeNam
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«Reply #2 on: July 03, 2006, 10:01:42 PM »
Thanks Shayar Bhai!

Zinda hun yahi hai kya kum,
kyun puchate ho kahan hai hum!

Tute dil se nahi nikalate hai gum,
Bus zinda hun main yahi hai sitam!

---BENAM ---
Mehboob nahi paas na sahi,
Usey hai pata zinda hai hum kahin!
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Rajbir
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«Reply #3 on: July 03, 2006, 10:12:52 PM »
Aree Chote bhai

Itne din baad aaye aur woh bhi itne dard ke saath  sad5

Rajbir
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ranjana
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«Reply #4 on: July 04, 2006, 02:56:13 AM »
bahut khub Benam ji........


khawabo mein aksar dekha unko
na jaane kab se woh mujhe jaante they

dur reh kar bhi dil ke bahut kareeb they mere
pass rahe toh na jaane kitne faasle they
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«Reply #5 on: July 04, 2006, 04:51:34 AM »
wah kaya bat hai Ranju and Benam ji... Tareef karte hui bahoot hi dard ho raha hai.... jitna acha utna hai dard se bhara hua......

mana zindagi ki rahe ajj sunsaan hai
dard se bhari, saanse lahuluhaan hai
Jina phir bhi koi chor sakta nahi
jo bhi mila kismat se, munh mod sakta nahi

na ho udaas ki yah waqat bhi kat jayega
na raha acha waqat to bura bhi dhal jayega
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BeNam
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«Reply #6 on: July 05, 2006, 01:17:45 AM »
Thanks Pankhuri (Pooja) , Ranju, Rajbir bro!

Kisi ko yahan mukamal jahan nahi milta,
Kabhi zamin toh kabhi aasman nahi milta,
(NM)

Mukaddar ko benam rahem na aya,
Jise apana na chaha usey hi bewafa paya!

-- BENAM ---
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Meena is back
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«Reply #7 on: July 05, 2006, 09:19:12 AM »
bohot khoob benam ji, pankhuri aur ranjana ji....

kali ankhon m e udasi basi hai,
honton pe banawat ki hasi saji hai,
jiye ja rahe hai hum to magar,
pure jism me zakhmo ki aag lagi hai!
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«Reply #8 on: July 05, 2006, 04:34:11 PM »
bahut khoob Pooja ,Benam ji and Meena.........

Pucho na ab garo ki mehfil mein haal tum mera
yun ab nasur bane zakhamo per marham lagao
ek udasi jo jam gayi hai ab in aankho mein kahi
ab unko yun kured ke fir se na pighalaao
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«Reply #9 on: July 07, 2006, 09:16:43 AM »
shurkiya ji shukriya and gud one

pattar ki murti kabhi roya nahin karti,
zinda lash sapne kabhi sajoya nahin karti,
mujhe mere hal pe chod do aye dosto,
ke meena ab kabhi apni ankh bigoya nahin karti.
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ranjana
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«Reply #10 on: July 07, 2006, 11:17:25 AM »
bahut khub Meena dear.........

ek udasi ka manjar hai abhi
yahan na koi aata hai na koi jaata hai
ek diye ki tarah mera dil bas yun hi jala jaata hai
sab samjhte hain ki bahut kush hai yeh apni kismat se
per yahan mera dam jaise ghuta sa jaata hai
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«Reply #11 on: July 08, 2006, 08:33:09 AM »
Bahoot Khoob Likha Hai Sab Doston,..

Aye Zindagi Ab Hume Teri Tamanna Kab Hai,..
Jee Rahe Hain Is Aas Mein Ke Marna Kab Hai,..
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«Reply #12 on: July 10, 2006, 09:39:35 AM »
shukriya dosto.... nice ones as well!!

meri muskurahat pe na jao aye dosto,
mere dil me khayi udasi ke diye jalte hai,
woh nahin humare pas to kya hua Meena,
unki ke yaad sahare hi hum sambalte hai!
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«Reply #13 on: July 11, 2006, 10:13:58 AM »
Quote from: "Meena is back"
shukriya dosto.... nice ones as well!!

meri muskurahat pe na jao aye dosto,
mere dil me khayi udasi ke diye jalte hai,
woh nahin humare pas to kya hua Meena,
unki ke yaad sahare hi hum sambalte hai!


Bahoot Acha Likha Hai Meena sis,..
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«Reply #14 on: July 12, 2006, 11:16:22 AM »
thank u

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