zindagi ek..

by @kaash on February 18, 2009, 06:48:28 AM
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zindagi ek adhoora khwaab hoke rah gayi
kuch nahi bus tanhaayi ki qitaab hoke rah gayi



raat bhar barish me unke saath hum rahe
subah ashqon ki barsaat hoke rah gayi



mujhse poochna mera haal unhe gawara na raha
yaaden bhi isi baat se udaas hoke rah gayi


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Roja
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«Reply #1 on: February 18, 2009, 07:07:55 AM »
zindagi ek adhoora khwaab hoke rah gayi
kuch nahi bus tanhaayi ki qitaab hoke rah gayi

raat bhar barish me unke saath hum rahe
subah ashqon ki barsaat hoke rah gayi

mujhse poochna mera haal unhe gawara na raha
yaaden bhi isi baat se udaas hoke rah gayi

Bahut khoob  Applause Akaash ji
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rawattanha
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«Reply #2 on: February 18, 2009, 07:33:30 AM »
wah akash ji bahut sahi baat hai. aisa hi hota hai.
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rawattanha
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«Reply #3 on: February 18, 2009, 07:37:31 AM »
zindagi ek adhoora khwaab hoke rah gayi
kuch nahi bus tanhaayi ki qitaab hoke rah gayi



raat bhar barish me unke saath hum rahe
subah ashqon ki barsaat hoke rah gayi



mujhse poochna mera haal unhe gawara na raha
yaaden bhi isi baat se udaas hoke rah gayi





zindagi ek zakhm hoke rah gayi
bandagi ab bazm hoke rah gayi

raha nahin kuch dill mein
mohabbat ab anzaam hoke rah gayi

deta hum payaam hawa ko
hawa ruka hua paigaam hoke rah gayi

khush raho aakash bhai
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sajid_ghayel
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«Reply #4 on: February 18, 2009, 09:43:30 AM »
Bohat Khoob Aakash and Tanha.. Applause
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Talat
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«Reply #5 on: February 18, 2009, 09:45:30 AM »
zindagi ek adhoora khwaab hoke rah gayi
kuch nahi bus tanhaayi ki qitaab hoke rah gayi



raat bhar barish me unke saath hum rahe
subah ashqon ki barsaat hoke rah gayi



mujhse poochna mera haal unhe gawara na raha
yaaden bhi isi baat se udaas hoke rah gayi




Bohot Khoob Akaash Ji
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Talat
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«Reply #6 on: February 18, 2009, 09:46:06 AM »

zindagi ek zakhm hoke rah gayi
bandagi ab bazm hoke rah gayi

raha nahin kuch dill mein
mohabbat ab anzaam hoke rah gayi

deta hum payaam hawa ko
hawa ruka hua paigaam hoke rah gayi

khush raho aakash bhai

Nice reply Nitin Ji
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«Reply #7 on: February 18, 2009, 09:52:44 AM »
Nice One Aakaash And Rawat Bhai,.
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