~*~*ZiNdAgI jItE rEhNa~*~*

by ghayal_shayar on September 05, 2005, 01:06:10 PM
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har milne wale ki zindagi ko mehkate rehna,
kitna hi dard ho jehan me par muskarate rehna.

zindagi ki raat me chahe amavas hi aa jaye,
par tum aasha ke taron ki tarah timtimate rehna.

mushkilen to mehman ban kar aati rahengi,
tum bas un mushkilon me bhi khilkhilate rehna.

jeevan ki ranbhumi ke har mor par tum bas,
aage badhkar apni vijay pataka fahrate rehna.

is paapi kaliyug ke is ghor andhakar men,
tum ahchai ke deepak ban jagmagate rehna.

ye"ghayal" kabhi yahan rahe ya na rahe par,
tum use yaad karne ko humesha aate-jate rehna.



 umeed hai aapko pasand aayi hogi.

aapka ghayal
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«Reply #1 on: September 05, 2005, 02:00:03 PM »
bahut he khoob likha hai ...but aap aate rehna aise he likhte rehna aur hum sab ko sunate rehna ...!!!
 
well said n gr888......!!!
simply amazing... haan asie he rehna ...gum chupa kar haste rehna aur hasate rehna Usual Smile

keep posting...!!!
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Meena
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«Reply #2 on: September 05, 2005, 03:43:32 PM »
ache vichar hai shayar ji... esp these lines:

"zindagi ki raat me chahe amavas hi aa jaye,
par tum aasha ke taron ki tarah timtimate rehna. "


hum bhi chahate te asman me tare ki chamke,
par dukh ke badalon ne hume apne daman me chupa liya,
chupaye apne gum tabassum ke piche,
par ankh se behet ansowon ne mera raaz bata diya!
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isha_verma7
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«Reply #3 on: September 05, 2005, 10:24:33 PM »
WOW....just Amazing.......kya baat kahi chaand lines main.......tum toh puri zindagi ke matalab hee sikhaa gaya........keep it up!!!!

"zindagi ki raat me chahe amavas hi aa jaye,
par tum aasha ke taron ki tarah timtimate rehna".....yeh line toh kamaal hai.....
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ghayal_shayar
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«Reply #4 on: September 06, 2005, 04:09:53 PM »
thank a lot salma for liking it just keep reading.
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ghayal_shayar
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«Reply #5 on: September 06, 2005, 04:11:04 PM »
meena ji humari khush nasibi ki aapko humari lines pasand aayi bas yun hi padhte rahiyega.
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ghayal_shayar
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«Reply #6 on: September 06, 2005, 04:12:32 PM »
isha ji maine to bas ek koshish ki thi ab aap logon se lagta hai ki kuch had tak safal hua hoon.bas yun hi padhte rahiye hume.
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