Zindagi Kabhi Raas Na Aayee..dolly

by dolly on April 24, 2012, 12:38:24 PM
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«Reply #15 on: April 25, 2012, 05:14:00 AM »
bahut hi khoob kaha Dolly Ji, kamaal ke aashar hain, dili mubaarkbaad
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«Reply #16 on: April 25, 2012, 08:43:57 AM »

Dolly Ji,

Waah waah bahut khoob kaha hai...

Dili mubaarrakbaad kubool farmaayen.

G B 'Tarz' sahab ka ek she'r yaad
aa gaya...

"too hi jab bejaar hai mujhse to fir
 jaa tujhe maine bhi chhoda zindagee"

                       --- Tarz 

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«Reply #17 on: April 26, 2012, 10:11:52 AM »
Bahut Bahut Khoooooob Dolly Ji.. Har ek Lafz dil Pe Asar Chod Gaya.. Applause Applause



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«Reply #18 on: April 26, 2012, 02:33:28 PM »
Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause bahut bahut khoob likha hai aapne dolly ji... bahut khoobsurat ehsaas... bahut sundar peshkash.....!!!

Thank uu very much hridayjii...Usual Smile
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«Reply #19 on: April 26, 2012, 02:34:44 PM »
Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause bahut bahut khoob likha hai aapne dolly ji... bahut khoobsurat ehsaas... bahut sundar peshkash.....!!!

Thank uu very much hridayjii...Usual Smile
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«Reply #20 on: April 27, 2012, 06:32:27 AM »
Jindagi me kis trah jaan dalkar saari khata ao ka jimmedar use bna diya aapne.
Wese likha bhut jabardast h sister.
Ese read karke dil khush ho gaya.
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Thankuuu masoom...:)khoob kaha...gud observatn...Usual Smile..
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«Reply #21 on: May 01, 2012, 07:39:30 AM »
aah aah nikal rahi hai. Itna dard.. Har ashaar kuch bayaan kar raha hai. Sacchaai se ekdam rubaroo.n . Bahut sanjeedgi bhari is creation ka javaab nahi.. Duaayen dil se aapke liye.. Likhte rahiye.. Bas. Yahi kahunga mai aapse dolly jee.

Shukriyaa mkvjii...:)bahut bahut thnku..for appreciating...Usual Smile
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«Reply #22 on: May 04, 2012, 11:09:50 AM »
bahut hi khoobsurat

Thank u soul shaker ji...Usual Smile
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«Reply #23 on: May 04, 2012, 11:57:31 AM »


Ae Zindagi Tu Kabhi Raas Na Aayee
Yun To Har Shaam Intezaar Mein Nikli
Par Umeedein Kabhi Hamaare paas Na Aayee

Saawan Kee Ghataayein Guzarti Raheen
Jo Pyaas Bujhaaye Aisi Barsaat Na Aayee

Baar Baar Nayee Chot Padee Zakhmon Par
Par Zakhm Sukhaane Kee Koi Baat Na Aayee

Dikhe Meri Aankhon Ko Bhi Aisa Manzar
Deewali Kee Vo Ek Roshan Raat Na Aayee

Zindagi Aur Maut Ka Khel Chalta Raha
Kafan Odey Maut Kee Saugaat Na Aayee..

Ae Zindagi Tu kabhi Raas Na Aayee
Yun To Har Shaam Intezaar Mein Nikli
Par Umeedein Kabhi Hamaare paas Naa Aayee
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bahut hi khubsoorat nazm dolly ji .......... nice creation
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«Reply #24 on: May 06, 2012, 07:26:55 PM »

bahut khoob likhaa hai......! dolly mere comments ek genneral note hain. tumhaare kalaam se koi lena dena nahin inka. just dont mind.. you are nice dear


As usual beautiful commnts sheba...:)ur suggestions also shud b followed...Usual Smile
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«Reply #25 on: May 07, 2012, 06:03:22 AM »
Bahut achha likha hai Dolly Jee aapne. Khuda aapki saari pareshaniya.n dur kare.

Shukriya iftikharji...Usual Smile
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«Reply #26 on: May 07, 2012, 06:14:48 AM »
bahut hi khoob kaha Dolly Ji, kamaal ke aashar hain, dili mubaarkbaad
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Thanku amitjii...Usual Smile
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«Reply #27 on: May 07, 2012, 06:22:37 AM »
Dolly Ji,

Waah waah bahut khoob kaha hai...

Dili mubaarrakbaad kubool farmaayen.

G B 'Tarz' sahab ka ek she'r yaad
aa gaya...

"too hi jab bejaar hai mujhse to fir
 jaa tujhe maine bhi chhoda zindagee"

                       --- Tarz 

Satish Shukla 'Raqeeb'
 

Shukriya satishji...khoob kaha....ApplauseApplause
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«Reply #28 on: May 07, 2012, 06:24:34 AM »
Dolly Ji,

Waah waah bahut khoob kaha hai...

Dili mubaarrakbaad kubool farmaayen.

G B 'Tarz' sahab ka ek she'r yaad
aa gaya...

"too hi jab bejaar hai mujhse to fir
 jaa tujhe maine bhi chhoda zindagee"

                       --- Tarz 

Satish Shukla 'Raqeeb'
 

Shukriya satishji...khoob kaha....ApplauseApplause
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«Reply #29 on: May 07, 2012, 06:27:50 AM »
bohut achi peshkash hai doly ji
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