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Umda Shayar
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<>*Yaad kabhi bhi na aaye*<> Chot kai hain jo humne kaleje pe khai
Lub lekin hamare harpal muskuraye
Jitney julm chupchap sehte rahe hum
Utne hi unhone humpe khanjar chalaye
Ashkon k moti dhundha kiye hum
Jab tanhai me humne aansu bahaye
Moti to na mile ashkon me kabhi magar
Lahu hi aksar aankhon se baras aaye
Ilzaam unke sare rahe mere sir par
Na koi bhi unpar kabhi ungli uthaaye
Maine to sab kuch kiya unki khatir
Na jane kyun wohi ye kabhi samjh na paye
Mahobbat k chiragon ko kiya dil me roshan
Fir unhi ne dil k diye ko diya bujhaay
Nahin mere bas me unhe ek pal bhul pana
Bhale unko hum yaad kabhi bhi na aaye…!!!
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ParwaaZ
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«Reply #1 on: January 25, 2011, 06:32:37 PM » |
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Kasak Jee Aadaab!
aapke AhsaasoN ke kia kahne...
Aap anpe tamaam jazbaa lafzoN meiN khoob bayaaN karti hai..
Par shayad hi aapko jaanne wale aapko kabhi bhul paye..
Think always positive coz... One plus symbol is created from to minus sytmbols .....
Keep smiling...
keep writting..
Khuda Hafez.... 
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madhuwesh
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«Reply #3 on: January 25, 2011, 10:57:05 PM » |
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Anshumali
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«Reply #4 on: January 26, 2011, 07:34:06 AM » |
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<>*Yaad kabhi bhi na aaye*<> Chot kai hain jo humne kaleje pe khai
Lub lekin hamare harpal muskuraye
Jitney julm chupchap sehte rahe hum
Utne hi unhone humpe khanjar chalaye
Ashkon k moti dhundha kiye hum
Jab tanhai me humne aansu bahaye
Moti to na mile ashkon me kabhi magar
Lahu hi aksar aankhon se baras aaye
Ilzaam unke sare rahe mere sir par
Na koi bhi unpar kabhi ungli uthaaye
Maine to sab kuch kiya unki khatir
Na jane kyun wohi ye kabhi samjh na paye
Mahobbat k chiragon ko kiya dil me roshan
Fir unhi ne dil k diye ko diya bujhaay
Nahin mere bas me unhe ek pal bhul pana
Bhale unko hum yaad kabhi bhi na aaye…!!!
Very Nice Poetry ... Kasak Ji ! Good Expression ... ! dil se daad ... ! |
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Matrix Guy
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«Reply #5 on: January 26, 2011, 08:11:12 AM » |
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kya baat hi anamika ji.........aajkal sab shikayat wali post hi rahi he sab taraf se...akhir majra kya he ji ?.........
bahot hi sundar likha he ji apne kamaal ka lkiha he ekdam dum dum damru wala mast.....
well aap likhti he to aacha apne aap ho hi jata he isme kuch naya nahi..........
few lines from my side.....Khamosh Rahe He Khamosh Hi Rahenge
Dard He Par Batane Se Kya Fayda
Is Aag Ke Dariya Me Khud Hi Baheynge
Kadam Kadam Sambhala He Tumhe
Raah Me Bichaye Phool
Kante Khud Ke Liye Chunenege
Kabhi Na Kaha Tumse Jo Humne Kiya Pyar Ke Khatir
Isme Kahna Kya Aur Sunna Kya
Fir Bhi Tere Gile Shikwe Chup Chap Sunenge
Kah Do Hume Nasamaj Ya Kah Do Bewafa
Hum To Kabhi Uff Bhi Na Karenge
Har Janm Me Pyar Ke Khatir Hum Tumko Hi Chunenge
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brokenbyluv
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«Reply #6 on: January 26, 2011, 11:58:14 AM » |
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Bahut khoob kasak ji...bahut khoob utkarsh ji...
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Rishi Agarwal
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«Reply #7 on: January 26, 2011, 06:23:18 PM » |
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Nice Creation Anamika Ji And Nice Reply Matrik JI
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ANAAM
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«Reply #8 on: January 27, 2011, 04:59:53 PM » |
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«Reply #9 on: January 27, 2011, 06:19:07 PM » |
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ufff Kas akkkkkkkk---
no comnts---
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sbechain
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«Reply #10 on: January 27, 2011, 07:16:35 PM » |
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<>*Yaad kabhi bhi na aaye*<> Chot kai hain jo humne kaleje pe khai
Lub lekin hamare harpal muskuraye
Jitney julm chupchap sehte rahe hum
Utne hi unhone humpe khanjar chalaye
Ashkon k moti dhundha kiye hum
Jab tanhai me humne aansu bahaye
Moti to na mile ashkon me kabhi magar
Lahu hi aksar aankhon se baras aaye
Ilzaam unke sare rahe mere sir par
Na koi bhi unpar kabhi ungli uthaaye
Maine to sab kuch kiya unki khatir
Na jane kyun wohi ye kabhi samjh na paye
Mahobbat k chiragon ko kiya dil me roshan
Fir unhi ne dil k diye ko diya bujhaay
Nahin mere bas me unhe ek pal bhul pana
Bhale unko hum yaad kabhi bhi na aaye…!!!
good one kasak ji |
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*KasaK*....Dil Ki
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Umda Shayar
Rau: 19
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Waqt Bitaya:67 days, 9 hours and 25 minutes.
"I hv a prsnality wch evrybdy cn't handle
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«Reply #11 on: September 14, 2013, 02:40:24 AM » |
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Kasak Jee Aadaab!
aapke AhsaasoN ke kia kahne...
Aap anpe tamaam jazbaa lafzoN meiN khoob bayaaN karti hai..
Par shayad hi aapko jaanne wale aapko kabhi bhul paye..
Think always positive coz... One plus symbol is created from to minus sytmbols .....
Keep smiling...
keep writting..
Khuda Hafez.... thnx parwaz ji....... aapki tareef ka hamesha intezar hota hai |
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*KasaK*....Dil Ki
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Umda Shayar
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Waqt Bitaya:67 days, 9 hours and 25 minutes.
"I hv a prsnality wch evrybdy cn't handle
Posts: 5603 Member Since: Jun 2010
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«Reply #12 on: September 14, 2013, 02:41:09 AM » |
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thnx madhu rishi ji naresh ji geet sheeba ji meri poetry pasand karne ka.......
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*KasaK*....Dil Ki
Poetic Patrol
Umda Shayar
Rau: 19
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Waqt Bitaya:67 days, 9 hours and 25 minutes.
"I hv a prsnality wch evrybdy cn't handle
Posts: 5603 Member Since: Jun 2010
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«Reply #13 on: September 14, 2013, 02:42:41 AM » |
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kya baat hi anamika ji.........aajkal sab shikayat wali post hi rahi he sab taraf se...akhir majra kya he ji ?.........
bahot hi sundar likha he ji apne kamaal ka lkiha he ekdam dum dum damru wala mast.....
well aap likhti he to aacha apne aap ho hi jata he isme kuch naya nahi..........
few lines from my side.....Khamosh Rahe He Khamosh Hi Rahenge
Dard He Par Batane Se Kya Fayda
Is Aag Ke Dariya Me Khud Hi Baheynge
Kadam Kadam Sambhala He Tumhe
Raah Me Bichaye Phool
Kante Khud Ke Liye Chunenege
Kabhi Na Kaha Tumse Jo Humne Kiya Pyar Ke Khatir
Isme Kahna Kya Aur Sunna Kya
Fir Bhi Tere Gile Shikwe Chup Chap Sunenge
Kah Do Hume Nasamaj Ya Kah Do Bewafa
Hum To Kabhi Uff Bhi Na Karenge
Har Janm Me Pyar Ke Khatir Hum Tumko Hi Chunenge
fir se sab padhna aur unhe jeena kitna acha lagta hai........ bht khubsurat jawab MG....... thnxxxxxx for such a beautiful reply |
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