zindagi sa gaye....

by isha_verma7 on May 27, 2005, 06:51:37 AM
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Tum kya zindagi sa gaye
Tabse pholon ne murjhanaa shuru kar diya ,
Humna saaki ke tarah behkana shuru kar diya hai,
Bin pani maachali (fish) ki tarah tadapna shuru kar diya hai
Kismat kya ab to humne rab se bhi ladna shuru kar diya hai
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rohit30002
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«Reply #1 on: May 27, 2005, 07:59:24 AM »
Quote from: "isha_verma7"
Tum kya zindagi sa gaye
Tabse pholon ne murjhanaa shuru kar diya ,
Humna saaki ke tarah behkana shuru kar diya hai,
Bin pani maachali (fish) ki tarah tadapna shuru kar diya hai
Kismat kya ab to humne rab se bhi ladna shuru kar diya hai
Isha Ji Aapne bahut accha likha hai lekin is mein ek kami hai aapne dard ko puri tarah se shabdo mein nahi sawara. Koshish karte rahiye mujh pure ummeed hai kii aap apni is kami ko jaldi dur kar dengi.

Ek dost
     Rohit Miglani
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Meena
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«Reply #2 on: May 27, 2005, 01:44:31 PM »
Quote from: "isha_verma7"
Tum kya zindagi sa gaye
Tabse pholon ne murjhanaa shuru kar diya ,
Humna saaki ke tarah behkana shuru kar diya hai,
Bin pani maachali (fish) ki tarah tadapna shuru kar diya hai
Kismat kya ab to humne rab se bhi ladna shuru kar diya hai


nice!!!!!

tere jane ke baad hume koi kami to nahin,
par zindagi aba hume kuch jami bhi nahin!!
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fakharenaveed
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«Reply #3 on: May 27, 2005, 09:45:26 PM »
Kabhi to ke hogi chand ne suraj se mohabbat,
tabhi to chand par daag hai,
Zahir hai chand ne he ke hoge bewafai....
Tabhi to suraj mein chalakte yeh aag hai...........
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isha_verma7
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«Reply #4 on: May 28, 2005, 06:06:16 AM »
nice naveed but phela kahi sunaa hua hai......well really good tho
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ashishjethwa8717
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«Reply #5 on: May 28, 2005, 06:27:38 AM »
hi isha very nice write

i like it

this is for u

dekh lo Khvaab magar Khvaab kaa charchaa na karo
log jal jaayenge suuraj kii tamannaa na karo

vaqt kaa kyaa hai kisii pal bhii badal sakataa hai
ho sake tum se to tum mujh pe bharosaa na karo

kirchiyaa.N TuuTe hue aks kii chubh jaayengii
aur kuchh roz abhii aa_iinaa dekhaa na karo

ajanabii lagane lage Khud tumhe.n apanaa hii vajuud
apane din raat ko itanaa bhii akelaa na karo

Khvaab bachcho.n ke khilauno.n kii tarah hote hai.n
Khvaab dekhaa na karo Khvaab dikhaayaa na karo

ashish
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ashishjethwa8717
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«Reply #6 on: May 28, 2005, 06:28:03 AM »
hi isha very nice write

i like it

this is for u

dekh lo Khvaab magar Khvaab kaa charchaa na karo
log jal jaayenge suuraj kii tamannaa na karo

vaqt kaa kyaa hai kisii pal bhii badal sakataa hai
ho sake tum se to tum mujh pe bharosaa na karo

kirchiyaa.N TuuTe hue aks kii chubh jaayengii
aur kuchh roz abhii aa_iinaa dekhaa na karo

ajanabii lagane lage Khud tumhe.n apanaa hii vajuud
apane din raat ko itanaa bhii akelaa na karo

Khvaab bachcho.n ke khilauno.n kii tarah hote hai.n
Khvaab dekhaa na karo Khvaab dikhaayaa na karo

ashish
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fakharenaveed
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«Reply #7 on: May 29, 2005, 12:14:35 AM »
Quote from: "isha_verma7"
nice naveed but phela kahi sunaa hua hai......well really good tho
kahan sun liya aap ney yeh
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isha_verma7
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«Reply #8 on: May 29, 2005, 05:42:32 AM »
in some movie  i guess.......but sure heard it before
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tushar_4u_im
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«Reply #9 on: May 29, 2005, 09:22:19 AM »
Quote from: "isha_verma7"
Tum kya zindagi sa gaye
Tabse pholon ne murjhanaa shuru kar diya ,
Humna saaki ke tarah behkana shuru kar diya hai,
Bin pani maachali (fish) ki tarah tadapna shuru kar diya hai
Kismat kya ab to humne rab se bhi ladna shuru kar diya hai


rub se ki ladai ,koi batt nahi ,...

pyar me mili bewafai ,..koi bat nahi,...

di dil ki tarpan dikhai,...koi bat nahi,...

jo kiya tumne zindigi se dhoka hum maff na ker sakenge,...

tere bin to mar jayange teri aankh me aansu dekhker ji na sakenge,....
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fakharenaveed
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«Reply #10 on: May 30, 2005, 02:49:29 AM »
Aap ney kah tu dil ney kha k anhin yeh jhoot hai
baat manun bhi tu kis ki manun mein jnab
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tushar_4u_im
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«Reply #11 on: May 30, 2005, 05:49:46 AM »
Quote from: "fakharenaveed"
Aap ney kah tu dil ney kha k anhin yeh jhoot hai
baat manun bhi tu kis ki manun mein jnab




manne se kisi k rah humari badal nahi sakti,.......

chalange hum unhi raho per manzil ki taraf unke bewafai k bad,.....
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