zindagi

by anjani_si on December 31, 2006, 03:30:10 AM
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anjani_si
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zindagi meri, mujhe pariyoon ki kahan si laghti thi
charo taraf sirf hassi meri ghunj thi thi

yeh galiyan bhi abbh meri liye beghani hogayi hain
tanhai ko ansu se mohabbat hogayi hain

woh zuban jo rukhne ka naam nahi thi leti
muskurahat jo meri labhoon se nahi thi haat thi

woh ankhein jin mein meri hassi qaid thi
ansu jinh ko  meri ankhoin ka pata maalum nahi tha

aaj wohi zuban khamosh hai
aaj wohi ankhein samundar hai

dil mein jisko pana di...
jiske naam yeh zindagi kar di...

pechan jispe qurban kar di....
muskurahat jiske liye chor di...

woh khud aaj isse bheerh mein kho gaya hai...
chura ke dil mera,,choroon ki tarha baagh gaya hai....

poochti hoon aaj tumse akh sawal...
karti hoon tujhse roz yehi sawal.....

meri kya khaatha thi...
meri kya ghalati thi...

ekh tujhko he maangha tha....
ekh tujhe he chaha tha.....

kar di hai yeh zindagi naam tumhare...
hogayi fanaa  karte karte intezaar tumhare....

utha tha jis dinh janaza mera
rooh bhi meri tujhe dhoond rahi thi...

daafan hone se pehle...
ekh nazar baar ke dekh lena chahti thi...!!! :D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D
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Talat
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«Reply #1 on: December 31, 2006, 04:55:02 AM »
Wonderful Anjaani..bohot hi achcha likha hai..Very sentimental !! Keep it up...  Usual Smile

Anjaani, this is a very sad poem, and more suitable for Shayari-e-dard section. I am moving the thread to Dard.


Talat
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Naya_Daur
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«Reply #2 on: December 31, 2006, 11:35:00 AM »
very well written anjaani..  bohaat hi gehri feelings nazar aati hain.. ek ek shabd dil se likha hua....


dil ke armaaNo ko,luuta kar bhi tujhe na pa sake
hum apni shab-o-sehar ke badle bhi na tujhe pa sake
zinda hai zindagi meri in dhadkano mein kayun ajj bhi
hum to khoon ka akhri katra bhi,jism mein bacha na sake
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paani
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«Reply #3 on: January 03, 2007, 12:14:38 PM »
woh ankhein jin mein meri hassi qaid thi

ji bahut badiyaa....anjani ji
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Meena is back
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«Reply #4 on: January 03, 2007, 04:29:49 PM »
very nice anjani ji...a very emotional poem....jeet ji...a nice reply!!!

kabhi muskurate te lab, aaj woh muskurate nahin,
ankhen aab humari kushi ke tarane sunate nahin,
ek bewafa pe zindagi luta kar kya paya "Meena",
ke dil ki dadkane aab kisi aur ko bhi apnate nahin!
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Naya_Daur
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«Reply #5 on: January 04, 2007, 12:24:45 AM »
wah wah meena ji.. too gud. last two lines toh ek dum kamal ki likhi aapne...

mehrban hai zindagi,kayun bohjil sanson par
rukhne de dil ki dhadkan ko abb rafta rafta
pehchan na paya jiske liye hum mar mite hain
kya karunga iss duniya mein main tanha tanha...
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anjani_si
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«Reply #6 on: January 06, 2007, 05:31:29 AM »
Quote from: "Meena is back"
very nice anjani ji...a very emotional poem....jeet ji...a nice reply!!!

kabhi muskurate te lab, aaj woh muskurate nahin,
ankhen aab humari kushi ke tarane sunate nahin,
ek bewafa pe zindagi luta kar kya paya "Meena",
ke dil ki dadkane aab kisi aur ko bhi apnate nahin!


teinku teinku talat aapi...jeet ji...and meena ji!!!

vry nice meena ji

labh parh muskurahat thi...muskurahat mein humari zindagi thi
ankhoin mein khwab the....khwaboon mein humara kaal tha...
looth kar legaya woh mujhe,,,,,du ansu bhi na chore usne ankhoin mein
zindagi se saare rangh legaya....inh honthon se meri muskan leghaya :D:D:D
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anjani_si
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«Reply #7 on: January 06, 2007, 05:33:58 AM »
Quote from: "(((JEET)))"
wah wah meena ji.. too gud. last two lines toh ek dum kamal ki likhi aapne...

mehrban hai zindagi,kayun bohjil sanson par
rukhne de dil ki dhadkan ko abb rafta rafta
pehchan na paya jiske liye hum mar mite hain
kya karunga iss duniya mein main tanha tanha...


wowww really nice ji!! :D:D:D:D

muskurahat meri legaya....tanhai isse chehre pe chor gaya
ankhoin se sapne legaya......uske badle ansu de gaya
usse kya mangha tha...jo nahi tha de sakta....
dil se dhadkhan legaya....aur zindagi ke liye do sansein chor gaya :D
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