बारीश

by sapana on June 02, 2009, 02:07:33 AM
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बारीश
आसमानके सिनेको हल्का कर गई,
मेरे दिलके बोज़को दुगना कर गई।
पत्तोकी आंखोको गीला गीला कर गई,
फुलोके सिनेके छेद्को गहेरा कर गई।
मेरे दिलके ज़ख्मोको ताज़ा कर गई।
यह बारिश सबकुछ तबाह कर गई।
सपना




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Roja
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«Reply #1 on: June 02, 2009, 02:16:38 AM »

बारीश
आसमानके सिनेको हल्का कर गई,
मेरे दिलके बोज़को दुगना कर गई।
पत्तोकी आंखोको गीला गीला कर गई,
फुलोके सिनेके छेद्को गहेरा कर गई।
मेरे दिलके ज़ख्मोको ताज़ा कर गई।
यह बारिश सबकुछ तबाह कर गई।
सपना


Wah Sapana sis bahut accha likha hai aapne.
" Yeh Barish Sabkuch Tabah Kar Gayi"..... Wah Wah  Applause
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sapana
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«Reply #2 on: June 02, 2009, 03:24:33 AM »
Thanks Roja!! Usual Smile
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madhuwesh
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«Reply #3 on: June 02, 2009, 06:58:17 AM »
very very nice sapna ji, Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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sapana
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«Reply #4 on: June 02, 2009, 11:56:04 AM »
Thanks Madhuveshji Usual Smile
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sapana
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«Reply #5 on: June 02, 2009, 02:18:40 PM »
Thanks Kaashji Usual Smile
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sanjaytiwari
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«Reply #6 on: June 03, 2009, 02:49:32 PM »
 
 Applause

Very Nice
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_Vicky_
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«Reply #7 on: June 03, 2009, 06:05:32 PM »
Wah Sapna Ji Bahut Khoooooooob.. Aapke Likhne Ka Andaas Bilkul alag Hatt ke Hai.. Jo Bhi Behad Khubsoorat hai.. Bahut Khoooooooob.. Applause Applause


**~** Mann **~**
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sapana
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«Reply #8 on: June 03, 2009, 08:55:25 PM »
Thanks Mannji,
aapki zarra nawaji hai. Usual Smile
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sapana
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«Reply #9 on: June 03, 2009, 08:56:19 PM »
Thanks Sanjayji
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sapana
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«Reply #10 on: June 03, 2009, 08:56:53 PM »
 :hello:Sanjayji
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