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Soheb_Khan

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Waiting for the beloved....

« on: November 24, 2004, 04:46:13 PM »

Hi guys ... this is among my favourites ... from tamanna
hardcore urdu wordings ... but really nice
The situtaion is - a lover waiting for his beloved ... but she doesnt turn up

Here it goes:

Raat bhar deedaye namnaak mein lehraate rahe...
Saans ki tarah se aap aate rahe jaate rahe.

Shab ke jaage hue taaron ko bhi neend aane lagi...
Aapke aane ki ek aans bhi ab jaane lagi.

Khush the hum apni tamannaon ka khwab ayega...
Nazrein neechi kiye sharmaye hue ayega....
Kakule chehre pe bikhraye hue ayega.
Pattiyaan khadki to hum samjhe ki aap aa hi gaye...
Sajde masjood ke mabood ko hum pa hi gaye.

Subhe ne se jise uthte hue li angdai...
Aye subha tu bhi aayi to akeli aayi...
Meri mehboob mere hosh udaane wali...
Meri masjood meri rooh pe chhane wali.
Aa bhi ja taaki mere sajdon ka armaan nikle...
Aa bhi ja taaki tere kadmon pe meri jaan nikle.


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« Reply #1 on: November 24, 2004, 04:49:21 PM »

wah!!! Nice One!!!!


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« Reply #2 on: November 30, 2004, 01:43:59 PM »

wooaaaaaaah nice words Usual Smile

heavy urdu Shocked

1st line sirr ke upar se gayi tongue3


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« Reply #3 on: November 30, 2004, 03:22:31 PM »

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yeah right nedura...nice words, par 1st line sar ke upar se gayi.... :lol:
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« Reply #4 on: November 30, 2004, 04:05:38 PM »

i think hes talking abt his eyes in that sentence tongue3


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Soheb_Khan

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« Reply #5 on: December 01, 2004, 12:18:30 AM »

"Deedaye" means aansoo
"Namnaak" means bheegi palkein

correct me if im wrong


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« Reply #6 on: December 02, 2004, 05:21:43 AM »

wow thts so good soheb.


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« Reply #7 on: December 06, 2004, 12:03:25 AM »

waiting for my beloved
the days went by
winter changed to summer
and spring came not nigh

moon circled the earth
and earth circled the sun
winds travelled around
and the monsoons went by

then came a time
the heavens stood still
everything fell apart
only time went by


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« Reply #8 on: December 06, 2004, 04:31:50 AM »

Quote from: "Beena Jain"

every word is very nice!! spectecular!!! wonderful work!!

very nice beena ji!!!

:hug:


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« Reply #9 on: December 06, 2004, 11:26:59 AM »

Thanks ursonly ji!


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Soheb_Khan

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« Reply #10 on: December 07, 2004, 02:49:20 AM »

Thank u guys ... I dunno how many of u have really heard this song ... if u have heard im sure u'll agree with me ... if not, go n chk out this one ... u may not like it reading it ... but beautifully sung (i think by kumar sanu)

By the way... Nice one Beena ... tht was really gud :D


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« Reply #11 on: December 07, 2004, 06:17:15 AM »

nice soheb and Beena ji Usual Smile


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« Reply #12 on: December 11, 2004, 03:13:13 AM »

:D :D


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« Reply #13 on: May 04, 2005, 04:14:02 AM »

Hi Soheb... Salaam... Great job on the lyrics thing. But there's a slight mistake on one of the stanzas. Well, it's a common mistake when listening to this Ghazal. I have quoted it here...

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Subhe ne se jise uthte hue li angdai...

It's actually Subhe ne sej se...

Sej means bed in Urdu/Hindi....

Take care :D


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