Bazaar sa lagu.....( Ghayel ):Tanziya aur Tehreekbaksh Shayariyan

Sajid_Ghayel

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Bazaar me khada bazaar sa lagu
Aadmi hu lekin vyopaar sa lagu

Koi gunah nahi ek muflisi to hai
Aaino me q sharm_saar sa lagu

Nafratein badhi aur is kadar badhi
Har nazar ko main hath_yaar sa lagu

Haal_e_watan sa mera haal ab hua
Beemar to nahi par beemar sa lagu

Khamoshiyo ke bhi apne kamaal hai
Main Dosto me ab hoshiyaar sa lagu

Zinda mazaar mera bana gaya budhapa
Ghar me pada akayla bekaar sa lagu

Ek aarzoo ne teri yeh haal kar diya
Koi aarzoo nahi aur talab_gaar sa lagu

Uchaieeya meri aur tanha kar gayee
Main Qutub nahi koi par minaar sa lagu

Kaha qaid kare Ghayel khwaisho ko apni
Khud me kahi khud hi se faraar sa lagu

Sajid Ghayel


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Ravi_Dave

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Re: Bazaar sa lagu.....( Ghayel )

«Reply #1 on: May 26, 2010, 08:14:27 PM »

"Zinda mazaar ban gaya mera budhapa,
Ghar mein pada akayla bekaar sa lagu"

Bohat khoob bayaan kiya, very realistic and thoughtful


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Sajid_Ghayel

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Re: Bazaar sa lagu.....( Ghayel )

«Reply #2 on: May 26, 2010, 08:36:30 PM »

Quote from: Ravi_Dave on May 26, 2010, 08:14:27 PM

"Zinda mazaar ban gaya mera budhapa,
Ghar mein pada akayla bekaar sa lagu"

Bohat khoob bayaan kiya, very realistic and thoughtful

Badi meharbani Ravi Saheb jo aapne mere sher ko pasand kiya.........waise sahi sher kuch is tarah hai...

Zinda mazaar mera bana gaya budhapa
Ghar me pada akayla bekaar sa lagu

Once again thank u very much.......ek tip dooga agar kabhi aap koi sher copy karke daad dena chahe to kar sakte hai, bas aap print option par click kare waha se sher copy kare aur reply section me paste kar de.

Take care


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Ravi_Dave

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Re: Bazaar sa lagu.....( Ghayel )

«Reply #3 on: May 26, 2010, 08:38:52 PM »

Shukriya, I have been a member for long but never actually knew...and your always welcome


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tamanna.pt

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Re: Bazaar sa lagu.....( Ghayel )

«Reply #4 on: May 27, 2010, 05:10:54 AM »

Ohoh ji kamaal kar dita tussi to,har ek sher lajawaab or 3rd sher se to bas kya utthaya hai kalaam ko k maza hi aagaya. 3rd or 6th sher to bas ji fav. hi hogay hamare. Dhero kya 40-50quntal daad hai aapko.


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khamosh_aawaaz

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Re: Bazaar sa lagu.....( Ghayel )

«Reply #5 on: May 27, 2010, 10:05:46 AM »

bahut khoob...

aisi shaksiyat hai meri kahtey hai sabhi,
pathjad mein bhi main bahaar saa lagu.........!! Applause


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Re: Bazaar sa lagu.....( Ghayel )

«Reply #6 on: May 27, 2010, 12:34:17 PM »

buhat khoob Sajid Ghayel jee


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nazar ghouri

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Re: Bazaar sa lagu.....( Ghayel )

«Reply #7 on: May 27, 2010, 10:10:56 PM »

lafz mile to kuch likhoo'n,,kuch na likhna bhi to adaab e mehfil nahi..bahot umda hai sajid saheb aap ka kalaam .hazaroo daad hamari taraf se iss ghazal ke liye.


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mamta bajpai

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Re: Bazaar sa lagu.....( Ghayel )

«Reply #8 on: May 28, 2010, 01:27:46 AM »

WAAAAAAAAAAAAH !!!

LAFZ KAHIN KHO JATE HAIN JAB DAAD KI BAAT AATI HAI
HAR SHAIR BEMISAAL HAI WALLAH!DIL SE BAAT AATI HAI


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Sajid_Ghayel

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Re: Bazaar sa lagu.....( Ghayel )

«Reply #9 on: May 29, 2010, 01:49:01 PM »

Quote from: Ravi_Dave on May 26, 2010, 08:14:27 PM

"Zinda mazaar ban gaya mera budhapa,
Ghar mein pada akayla bekaar sa lagu"

Bohat khoob bayaan kiya, very realistic and thoughtful

Badi Meharbani Ravi Saheb jo aapne apna waqt diya.....


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Rajesh Harish

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Re: Bazaar sa lagu.....( Ghayel )

«Reply #10 on: May 29, 2010, 04:27:05 PM »

Bahut khoob Ghayel Ji


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Re: Bazaar sa lagu.....( Ghayel )

«Reply #11 on: May 30, 2010, 05:15:11 PM »

guru ji kahena padega abb sajid saheb ko ,, yaar 4th aur 6th sher , wah kahen ya aah ,, zara ye bhi bata den mere bhai ,, wah karen to bhi qamit wasool nahi aur aah karen to bhi nahi ,, kya kahene .. Rahath sahab padenge to khush ho jayenge unhi ka labo laheja hai .. hazaro dad bade hi inkesaari ke saath ..

allah apko khush rakhe ..

dost

qadeertoopchi


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Sajid_Ghayel

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Re: Bazaar sa lagu.....( Ghayel )

«Reply #12 on: May 31, 2010, 08:02:39 AM »

Quote from: tamanna.pt on May 27, 2010, 05:10:54 AM

Aapki cute si aur pyari si daad pane ke liye hi to itni mehnat karte hai Tamanna jee warna shayri me kya rak_kha hai.

Aap aayee meri apna waqt diya aapka bohat bohat shukriyaa.N.....aapki Quntol Quntol daad ka bhoj hamesha mere upar bana rahe Rab se yahi dua hai.


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Re: Bazaar sa lagu.....( Ghayel )

«Reply #13 on: May 31, 2010, 08:10:42 AM »

Waah Waah Waah..

Kya kehne Sajid Bhai..Lajaawab!!!

Bahut Bahut Khoob


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madhuwesh

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Re: Bazaar sa lagu.....( Ghayel )

«Reply #14 on: May 31, 2010, 08:14:51 AM »

Wah bahut khoob Sajid ji,kamaal ke likha aapne.great work.excellent Hats off to you!


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