Chaa Raha Hai Dhuaan....!!!

by Talat on February 26, 2010, 12:00:43 PM

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Ek koshish ki hai, aap ke suggestions/comments ka intezar rahega.

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Re: Chaa Raha Hai Dhuaan....!!!

«Reply #1 on: February 26, 2010, 12:22:13 PM »

Talat ji, shayad aapne apni creation image file ki form mein post ki hai. Mere PC mein show nahi ho rahi hai. Pata nahi kya baat hai. Shayad baad mein nazar aa jaye.


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Re: Chaa Raha Hai Dhuaan....!!!

«Reply #2 on: February 26, 2010, 12:27:31 PM »

Riyaz Ji, main to apni sabhi shayari image format main post karti hoon, pata nahin aapko ye waali poetry kyun nahin dikh rahi. Agar kisi aur ko bhi na dikh rahi ho to please let me know.


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Re: Chaa Raha Hai Dhuaan....!!!

«Reply #3 on: February 26, 2010, 01:02:46 PM »

Mashallah Bohat Achcha LIkha Hai talat Sis,.

Nice One,.
Great Work


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Re: Chaa Raha Hai Dhuaan....!!!

«Reply #4 on: February 26, 2010, 01:12:51 PM »

Thanks a lot Azeem


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«Reply #5 on: February 26, 2010, 01:21:40 PM »

Talat Di.. Humesha Ki Tarah Lajawab Alfaazon, aur Behtreen Soch Ke sath Likhi Hui Kavita hai aapne.. Bahut Khoooooooooooob..

**~** Mann **~**


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Re: Chaa Raha Hai Dhuaan....!!!

«Reply #6 on: February 26, 2010, 02:19:24 PM »

WAH KYA BAAT HAI CELMIRA JI...

"CHAA RAHA HAI DHUAAN"
NA JAANE KAB KYUN HUAAN
HAR EK DIL ME JALAN PALAA
DOST BHI DUSHMAN BANA
YE CHINGAARI RAAKH KAR DENGI
ROKO YE MULK KO BARBAAD KAR DENGI...


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SURESH SANGWAN

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Re: Chaa Raha Hai Dhuaan....!!!

«Reply #7 on: February 26, 2010, 02:28:33 PM »

WAAH WAAH CARA JI, AND TALAT JI

FIKRA NA KAR ISSKI TAASEER HALKI HAI.
NA RAHEGA ZAMEEN PE UUD JAYEGA DHUAN

KALA HO SAFIAD HO KUCH PAL KA MEHMAAN HAI
AASMAANO SE AAGE KHUD CHALA JAYEGA DHUAN

Quote from: cara on February 26, 2010, 02:19:24 PM

WAH KYA BAAT HAI CELMIRA JI...

"CHAA RAHA HAI DHUAAN"
NA JAANE KAB KYUN HUAAN
HAR EK DIL ME JALAN PALAA
DOST BHI DUSHMAN BANA
YE CHINGAARI RAAKH KAR DENGI
ROKO YE MULK KO BARBAAD KAR DENGI...


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deepika_divya

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«Reply #8 on: February 26, 2010, 02:40:16 PM »

Talat di .. Main Bhi Puri creation Nahi dekh pa rahi hun.. its showing half of the creation !


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Re: Chaa Raha Hai Dhuaan....!!!

«Reply #9 on: February 26, 2010, 02:54:27 PM »

Bahut Bahut Khoob Talat Dost!!!

Bahut Acha Likha Hai Aapne


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SARVESH RASTOGI

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«Reply #10 on: February 26, 2010, 02:54:32 PM »

Behatarin ghazal hai Celmira Ji, wah
SARVESH RASTOGI


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Talat

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Re: Chaa Raha Hai Dhuaan....!!!

«Reply #11 on: February 26, 2010, 03:35:08 PM »

Quote from: Mann on February 26, 2010, 01:21:40 PM

Talat Di.. Humesha Ki Tarah Lajawab Alfaazon, aur Behtreen Soch Ke sath Likhi Hui Kavita hai aapne.. Bahut Khoooooooooooob..

**~** Mann **~**

Thanks a lot Vicky for the appreciation...


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Talat

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Re: Chaa Raha Hai Dhuaan....!!!

«Reply #12 on: February 26, 2010, 03:35:41 PM »

Quote from: cara on February 26, 2010, 02:19:24 PM

WAH KYA BAAT HAI CELMIRA JI...

"CHAA RAHA HAI DHUAAN"
NA JAANE KAB KYUN HUAAN
HAR EK DIL ME JALAN PALAA
DOST BHI DUSHMAN BANA
YE CHINGAARI RAAKH KAR DENGI
ROKO YE MULK KO BARBAAD KAR DENGI...

Thanks Cara Ji...and nice lines from you....


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Talat

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Re: Chaa Raha Hai Dhuaan....!!!

«Reply #13 on: February 26, 2010, 03:36:18 PM »

Quote from: SURESH SANGWAN on February 26, 2010, 02:28:33 PM

WAAH WAAH CARA JI, AND TALAT JI

FIKRA NA KAR ISSKI TAASEER HALKI HAI.
NA RAHEGA ZAMEEN PE UUD JAYEGA DHUAN

KALA HO SAFIAD HO KUCH PAL KA MEHMAAN HAI
AASMAANO SE AAGE KHUD CHALA JAYEGA DHUAN

Thanks Suresh Ji...Nice lines...


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Talat

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Re: Chaa Raha Hai Dhuaan....!!!

«Reply #14 on: February 26, 2010, 03:39:23 PM »

Quote from: Sophi on February 26, 2010, 02:40:16 PM

Talat di .. Main Bhi Puri creation Nahi dekh pa rahi hun.. its showing half of the creation !

I don't know Divs what's the problem..Maine phir se upload kiya hai image....Maine 3 different PCs se dekha, mujhe to dikh rahi hai aur kuch aur members ko bhi dikh rahi hai...I can't say aapko aur Riyaz ji ko kyun nahin dikh rahi.