Husn

by Safi Yani on May 28, 2009, 05:21:07 PM
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Husn parde ke peechhe chhipaya gaya
Ishk ki justjoo ko barhaya gaya

Bulbulon ko qafas(pinjra)se uraya gaya
Phir unhi ko nishana banaya gaya

Husne jaana pe nazre tikaayi gayi
Daaira yoon nazar ka ghataya gaya

Chahte kya hain woh main ye samjha nahi
Gamzada karke mujhko hasaya gaya

Jab girana tha maqsood(maksad)humko Safi
Tab bulandi pe humko charhaya gaya
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«Reply #1 on: May 28, 2009, 05:33:09 PM »
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Bohot Khoob Safi Sahab...bohot hi achchi ghazal hai...very nice !!
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«Reply #2 on: May 30, 2009, 05:44:08 AM »
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very very nice Safi yani ji. Applause Applause
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«Reply #3 on: June 01, 2009, 12:01:15 PM »
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Bohot Khoob Safi Sahab...bohot hi achchi ghazal hai...very nice !!

Thanks a lot.I will soon submit another composition
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«Reply #4 on: June 07, 2009, 08:14:15 AM »
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Wow bahut khoob  Applause
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«Reply #5 on: June 07, 2009, 01:11:36 PM »
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Bohat Achche Safi Yani Ji,.
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«Reply #6 on: June 10, 2009, 10:05:40 AM »
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Wow bahut khoob  Applause

Thanks again Roja.

Safi Yani
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«Reply #7 on: June 10, 2009, 01:40:02 PM »
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Gamzada karke mujhko hasaya gaya......Wah janab wahhhh bohat bohat khoobsurat peshkash dil se dad kabool ho...

Shehar-e-munsif mujhko banaya gaya

Badle qatil ke mujhko suli pe latkaya gaya..

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«Reply #8 on: June 11, 2009, 10:26:28 AM »
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Gamzada karke mujhko hasaya gaya......Wah janab wahhhh bohat bohat khoobsurat peshkash dil se dad kabool ho...

Shehar-e-munsif mujhko banaya gaya

Badle qatil ke mujhko suli pe latkaya gaya..

-SG-

Thanks a lot.Meri ghazal ki zameen par aapki lines bhi bahut acchi hain.Fikr na karen,majme mein sab jaahil nahin kucch kaabil bhi hain.Aap khaamosh na rahen.Ye do lines bhi behatreen hain.
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