Jaanwar

by betukh_ bakbaki on February 22, 2012, 11:13:34 AM

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A poem on humankind:

Paida kiya Bus Ishliye Tu Gunhaegaar Hai
Kya Zurm Hai Ye Poonchna Tera Bekaar Hai

Kuch Bhi Na Jaan Payega Itna Bhi Jaan Le
Toh Yeh Samajh Khuda Ka Bada Upkaar Hai

Tu Kya Samajh Raha Hai Koi Jaanta Nahi?
Tu Jaanwar Hai Aur Tera Mazhab Shikaar Hai

Mil Jaaye Zara Chuut Toh Tu Cheer De Ise
Inshaniyat Ka Khokla Jo Rukh Par Nakaab hai

Aaiinaa e Tareekh[history]Mein Ja Jhaank Dekh Le
Apni Dariindagi Ka Tu Khud Shikaar Hai


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Re: Jaanwar

«Reply #1 on: February 22, 2012, 11:17:37 AM »

betukh ji pahlee line men doosraa lafz liya naheen kiya honaa chahiye plz check karen. vaise tanz achhaa hai.


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Re: Jaanwar

«Reply #2 on: February 22, 2012, 11:22:36 AM »

thank you sir ..maine sudhaar kar diya


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Re: Jaanwar

«Reply #3 on: February 22, 2012, 11:41:01 AM »

Quote from: betukh_ bakbaki on February 22, 2012, 11:13:34 AM

A poem on humankind:

Paida kiya Bus Ishliye Tu Gunhaegaar Hai
Kya Zurm Hai Ye Poonchna Tera Bekaar Hai

Kuch Bhi Na Jaan Payega Itna Bhi Jaan Le
Toh Yeh Samajh Khuda Ka Bada Upkaar Hai

Tu Kya Samajh Raha Hai Koi Jaanta Nahi?
Tu Jaanwar Hai Aur Tera Mazhab Shikaar Hai

Mil Jaaye Zara Chuut Toh Tu Cheer De Ise
aiye insaaniye tujh pe ditkaar hai

Aaiinaa e Tareekh[history]Mein Ja Jhaank Dekh Le
Apni Dariindagi Ka Tu Khud Shikaar Hai

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