*Jhoot Hazam Hone Lagi*

by Roja on December 30, 2007, 10:32:00 AM
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Aadmi ko jhoot ab sari hazam hone lagi
Yani ab sach ki zarurat sab ko kam hone lagi

Jhoot ke bin aaj apne shehar main rehkar dekha
Be-emaan ki zarurat her kadam hone lagi

Surkiyan mushkilse pad payee mai agbaar ki
Aur sihran mere tan main ekdam hone lagi

Ab himalay pattaron ka ek parvat reh gaya
ye hawayen aur gataye beshram hone lagi

Jhoot ko swikaar karna jab sikhaya jata ho
Fir sach ka ehmiyat kam hone lagi

Kis tarah koyi pade-kavita, gazal ko ab "Roja"
Khoon se lath-path jo kaviyon ki kalam hone lagi
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«Reply #1 on: January 01, 2008, 01:10:43 AM »
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Roja

Wah ! Ek baar phir se zara hat kar likha hai tumne !

Very good !
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«Reply #2 on: January 01, 2008, 03:45:00 AM »
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HAPPY NEW YEAR DEAR ALL.

LOVE/PREM CHAWLA
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«Reply #3 on: January 05, 2008, 09:57:02 AM »
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wah kaya baat hai Roja.. bahoot khoob.. bahoot hi acha likha hai...

jhooth ban chuka hai such
such ki pehchan tak khatam hone lagi
ajj ki dunia main insaan ko
badi se badi be-imani bhi hazam hone lagi

kon kahe kisko ajj ki dunia main kaya
her ek ki apni hi alag dunia hone lagi
dikhaye kon kisko kaya ainaa
her ek ke aine mai, jhooth hai sajne lagi

chup dekh raha her koi her kisi ka tamsha
ek chup so sukh, kahawat charitarth hone lagi
jhooth ban chuka hai such
such ki pehchan tak khatam hone lagi......
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«Reply #4 on: January 13, 2008, 03:27:30 PM »
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wah kaya baat hai Roja.. bahoot khoob.. bahoot hi acha likha hai...

jhooth ban chuka hai such
such ki pehchan tak khatam hone lagi
ajj ki dunia main insaan ko
badi se badi be-imani bhi hazam hone lagi

kon kahe kisko ajj ki dunia main kaya
her ek ki apni hi alag dunia hone lagi
dikhaye kon kisko kaya ainaa
her ek ke aine mai, jhooth hai sajne lagi

chup dekh raha her koi her kisi ka tamsha
ek chup so sukh, kahawat charitarth hone lagi
jhooth ban chuka hai such
such ki pehchan tak khatam hone lagi......

Bahut khoob ... really very nice reply pooja di
thanks for coming
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«Reply #5 on: January 13, 2008, 05:50:19 PM »
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Aadmi ko jhoot ab sari hazam hone lagi
Yani ab sach ki zarurat sab ko kam hone lagi

Jhoot ke bin aaj apne shehar main rehkar dekha
Be-emaan ki zarurat her kadam hone lagi

Surkiyan mushkilse pad payee mai agbaar ki
Aur sihran mere tan main ekdam hone lagi

Ab himalay pattaron ka ek parvat reh gaya
ye hawayen aur gataye beshram hone lagi

Jhoot ko swikaar karna jab sikhaya jata ho
Fir sach ka ehmiyat kam hone lagi

Kis tarah koyi pade-kavita, gazal ko ab "Roja"
Khoon se lath-path jo kaviyon ki kalam hone lagi


BAHUT KHOOB ROJA....AAPNE  ZINDAGI KI SACHAI KO SAAMNE RAKH KAR LIKHA...BAHUT ACHA LIKHA...
NICE ONE POOJA...
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«Reply #6 on: January 14, 2008, 08:46:32 PM »
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Thanks Roja!!!!
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«Reply #7 on: February 24, 2008, 12:53:11 PM »
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Aadmi ko jhoot ab sari hazam hone lagi
Yani ab sach ki zarurat sab ko kam hone lagi

Jhoot ke bin aaj apne shehar main rehkar dekha
Be-emaan ki zarurat her kadam hone lagi

Surkiyan mushkilse pad payee mai agbaar ki
Aur sihran mere tan main ekdam hone lagi

Ab himalay pattaron ka ek parvat reh gaya
ye hawayen aur gataye beshram hone lagi

Jhoot ko swikaar karna jab sikhaya jata ho
Fir sach ka ehmiyat kam hone lagi

Kis tarah koyi pade-kavita, gazal ko ab "Roja"
Khoon se lath-path jo kaviyon ki kalam hone lagi


BAHUT KHOOB ROJA....AAPNE  ZINDAGI KI SACHAI KO SAAMNE RAKH KAR LIKHA...BAHUT ACHA LIKHA...
NICE ONE POOJA...

Bahut bahut shukhriya kitu brother
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