Kutta Kaun ( By Songwriter_123)

by songwriter_123 on February 01, 2010, 04:47:11 PM
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     कुत्ता कौन


लोग कहते है की यह कुत्ता है

गली का यह वोह कुत्ता है


जो भोंके तोह लोग भागे

जो काटे तोह लोग कह दे


कुत्ता है साला

काटेगा नहीं तो क्या करेगा


अरे कोई उस कुत्ते से भी तो पुच्च्हो

जिसने देखे है खुद से बड़े कुत्ते


वोह कुत्ते जो गली में उसके सामने

लूटते है बेटियों की इज़ज़त


वोह कुत्ते जो गली में उसके सामने

करते है बड़े-बुड्धो को बे-इज़ज़त


इतना तो जरुर है की अकेले में वोह भी बोला होगा उस खुदा से

की बता खुदा

कुत्ता कौन , मैं या यह


यह सोच के खुदा भी दो पल चुप हो गया होगा

और फिर बोला होगा ,की शायद यही सोच के इंसान तुझे कुत्ता कहते है

डरते है वे असली कुत्ते से ,इसलिए तुझपे रोब्ब जमाते है


तुझे दो पल मिले तो, उनसे भी पूछ लेना

की बता इंसान

कुत्ता कौन , मैं या यह

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«Reply #1 on: February 01, 2010, 04:58:54 PM »
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अच्छी कविता है अमित जी । 
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«Reply #2 on: February 01, 2010, 06:48:55 PM »
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Nice One Songwriterji
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«Reply #3 on: February 01, 2010, 08:29:23 PM »
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Moved to Tanziyah Section from story section !
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«Reply #4 on: February 02, 2010, 06:06:29 AM »
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Thanks riyaj ji and pankshivan for liking it ........

and special thanks to iadmin who gave their important time and forward the poem to tanziyah section

Thanks a lot

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«Reply #5 on: February 03, 2010, 01:08:06 PM »
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Nice Amit Ji
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«Reply #6 on: February 07, 2010, 10:40:23 AM »
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thanks rishi for liking it .....

this song theme comes to my mind when one person was hitting a dog in the road and was saying "kutta hai saala"...

Thanks friends for liking it
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«Reply #7 on: February 10, 2010, 05:25:09 AM »
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ooh Very very nice.... SW ji
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«Reply #8 on: February 12, 2010, 06:58:17 AM »
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thanks malli for liking it and understanding what i mean to say by this poem...

thank u
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«Reply #9 on: February 12, 2010, 07:13:33 AM »
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Bahut Accche Aamit Ji.. Bahut Sahi Likha Hai aapne.. jis Soch Ke Sath aapne Yeh Rachna Likhi Hai.. Waqai Kaabil-e-Taareef Hai.. Bahut Khoooooooooob...!! Applause Applause

Pahali Baar aaj aapko Padha.. Aur Such Me aapke In Alfaaazon Ko Padh kar Bahut accha laga..  notworthy notworthy

Yunhi Likhte rahiye... Usual Smile



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«Reply #10 on: February 12, 2010, 07:34:58 AM »
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thanks mann ji for such a nice comment

u know ihav thought thrice before posting this creation be there was kutta word in it , but thanks to u and all friend for liking it
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«Reply #11 on: February 12, 2010, 07:39:09 AM »
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Succhaai Se Ru-b-Ru Hone aur karaane ke Liye Kai baar Aise Lafzon Ka Istemaal karna Padhta hai Aamit Ji.. aur Aapki Kavita me Kuch Bhi Galat Nahi laga.. Yehi Lafz Gar Hata Diya Jata to Shayad Is Kavita ki Khubsoorati Kam Padh Jaati..  icon_thumleft icon_thumleft

Ek Baar Phir Daad Kubool Karen..   Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley


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«Reply #12 on: February 12, 2010, 07:48:48 AM »
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thank u mann ji for such a nice words .......
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«Reply #13 on: April 02, 2013, 12:01:47 AM »
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So Nice.
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