MASLAA.!!

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                       dil na de saath dimaag kya kare.          
                       balla na chale sahwaag kya kare.

                       oonche loag oonchi pasand manikchund.
                       sunn kar slogan paan paraag kya kare.

                       kaamyaabi dekh doosro.n ki jalte ho aap.
                       abb bechari bolo ye aag kya kare.

                       dost ne milaya zahar zindagi mein.
                       bhalaa isme shesh-naag kya kare.

                       hua tail iss qadar mahngaa ,mat poocho.
                       bujhtaa hua chiraag kya kare.

                       aata nahin mehmaan ghar pe aaj.
                       moonder mein baitha kaag kya kare.

                       hain aur bhi tere chahne waale qalb,
                       ek adadd phir tera suhaag kya kare.




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«Reply #1 on: September 06, 2011, 11:31:40 AM »
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bahot mast hai
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«Reply #2 on: September 06, 2011, 12:25:16 PM »
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«Reply #3 on: September 06, 2011, 01:49:56 PM »
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                       dil na de saath dimaag kya kare.          
                       balla na chale sahwaag kya kare.

                       oonche loag oonchi pasand manikchund.
                       sunn kar slogan paan paraag kya kare.

                       kaamyaabi dekh doosro.n ki jalte ho aap.
                       abb bechari bolo ye aag kya kare.

                       dost ne milaya zahar zindagi mein.
                       bhalaa isme shesh-naag kya kare.

                       hua tail iss qadar mahngaa ,mat poocho.
                       bujhtaa hua chiraag kya kare.

                       aata nahin mehmaan ghar pe aaj.
                       moonder mein baitha kaag kya kare.

                       hain aur bhi tere chahne waale qalb,
                       ek adadd phir tera suhaag kya kare.




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bahut bahut Khooob..Dilchasp Aur Ek Alag Andaz Wali Yeh Ghazal Achi Lagi..bahut Ache.bas Maqta Kuch Samaj Nahi Aaya..

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«Reply #4 on: September 06, 2011, 02:12:20 PM »
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bahut bahut Khooob..Dilchasp Aur Ek Alag Andaz Wali Yeh Ghazal Achi Lagi..bahut Ache.bas Maqta Kuch Samaj Nahi Aaya..

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maqta ek burning mudde per based hai. aap kaafi kaabil hain iss ki gehraai mein jakar khud ek matlab ko ijaad karein apne nokhte nazar se...!!!
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«Reply #5 on: September 06, 2011, 05:00:51 PM »
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Qalb Sahaab Aadaab1

Waah janab waah kia kahne aapke ...
behad gazab ke taNz kahe hai.. sabhi ashaar kafi
umdaa rahe... Aap kafi umdaa khayaaloN ki malik hai..

Sade se lafzoN meiN kafi khoob gehri baateN kah gaye
aap...

 Hats off to you!

Humari dili daad O mubarakbad kabul kijiye ....

Likhate rahiye... Shaad O aabaad rahiye..
Khuda Hafez          

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«Reply #6 on: September 07, 2011, 01:12:37 AM »
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qalb ji,behad purlutf,behtareen.
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«Reply #7 on: September 07, 2011, 11:14:19 AM »
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bahot mast hai

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«Reply #8 on: September 08, 2011, 12:49:33 AM »
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Bahut Bahut mast likha hai qalb ji aapne....!!!
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«Reply #9 on: September 08, 2011, 12:29:07 PM »
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very nice


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«Reply #10 on: September 08, 2011, 12:41:53 PM »
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                       dil na de saath dimaag kya kare.         
                       balla na chale sahwaag kya kare.

                       oonche loag oonchi pasand manikchund.
                       sunn kar slogan paan paraag kya kare.

                       kaamyaabi dekh doosro.n ki jalte ho aap.
                       abb bechari bolo ye aag kya kare.

                       dost ne milaya zahar zindagi mein.
                       bhalaa isme shesh-naag kya kare.

                       hua tail iss qadar mahngaa ,mat poocho.
                       bujhtaa hua chiraag kya kare.

                       aata nahin mehmaan ghar pe aaj.
                       moonder mein baitha kaag kya kare.

                       hain aur bhi tere chahne waale qalb,
                       ek adadd phir tera suhaag kya kare.




                                                   qalb(HEART)
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«Reply #11 on: September 13, 2011, 03:23:29 PM »
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«Reply #12 on: September 14, 2011, 01:54:57 PM »
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Bahut Bahut mast likha hai qalb ji aapne....!!!


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«Reply #13 on: September 23, 2011, 12:07:39 AM »
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Extremely heuplfl article, please write more.
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«Reply #14 on: September 29, 2011, 01:10:24 PM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Qalb Sahaab Aadaab1

Waah janab waah kia kahne aapke ...
behad gazab ke taNz kahe hai.. sabhi ashaar kafi
umdaa rahe... Aap kafi umdaa khayaaloN ki malik hai..

Sade se lafzoN meiN kafi khoob gehri baateN kah gaye
aap...

 Hats off to you!

Humari dili daad O mubarakbad kabul kijiye ....

Likhate rahiye... Shaad O aabaad rahiye..
Khuda Hafez           




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