saans leti zindagi

by Tuhina on January 25, 2013, 01:58:40 PM

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Tuhina

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The poem describes about the condition of children , we see, at different places around us ..
GAANV KI PAGDANDIYON PAR NANGE PAIR DAUDATI ,
DHOOP SI JALI HUI , PUSHPA SI KHILI HUI ,
KHILKHILATI ZINDAGI..
SAANS LETI ZINDAGI......
KANDHE PAR BOJH TANGKAR ,
PEHNE TOOTE HUE BATAN KI SHIRT ,
KUDE KE DHER ME KISMAT TATOLATI ZINDAGI , SAANS LETI....
AANKHON ME ANSU ROK KAR DER TAK ROTI HUI ,
DUTKAAR KA HAR GHHOONT PANI KE SANG ,
PEETI HUI ,
SIKKON KE BADALE SABKO
SALAM KARTI ZINDAGI ,
SAANS ...


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suman59

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Re: saans leti zindagi

«Reply #1 on: January 25, 2013, 02:02:38 PM »

Quote from: Tuhina on January 25, 2013, 01:58:40 PM

The poem describes about the condition of children , we see, at different places around us ..

GAANV KI PAGDANDIYON PAR NANGE PAIR DAUDATI ,
DHOOP SI JALI HUI , PUSHPA SI KHILI HUI ,
KHILKHILATI ZINDAGI.. SAANS LETI ZINDAGI......

KANDHE PAR BOJH TANGKAR , PEHNE TOOTE HUE BATAN KI SHIRT ,
KUDE KE DHER ME KISMAT TATOLATI ZINDAGI , SAANS LETI....
AANKHON ME ANSU ROK KAR DER TAK ROTI HUI ,
DUTKAAR KA HAR GHHOONT PANI KE SANG , PEETI HUI ,
SIKKON KE BADALE SABKO SALAM KARTI ZINDAGI , SAANS ...

wah wah bahut acha likha hai aapne...Tuhina jee


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vimmi singh

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Re: saans leti zindagi

«Reply #2 on: January 25, 2013, 02:14:39 PM »

nice composition... heart touching..
Applause


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Re: saans leti zindagi

«Reply #4 on: January 25, 2013, 03:12:54 PM »

beautiful composition tuhina jee


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Tuhina

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Re: saans leti zindagi

«Reply #5 on: January 25, 2013, 05:57:04 PM »

aap sabhi ko aneko anek dhanyavaad


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Tuhina

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Re: saans leti zindagi

«Reply #6 on: January 25, 2013, 05:57:42 PM »

aap sabhi ko aneko anek dhanyavaad


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ParwaaZ

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Re: saans leti zindagi

«Reply #7 on: January 25, 2013, 07:59:40 PM »

Tuhina Jee Aadaab!

Behad gehre khayaal ki manzar kashi ki hai aapne.. jee waqai
aaj bhi aise haal meiN bachche paaye jaate haiN... Jinki aNkhoN
meiN kai khawaaboN ki taabeere hoti toH hai par haathoN ki lakeeroN
meiN woH taqdeereN nahi hoti...

Aap ne achche topic se introduce kiya hai... Humari daad kabul kijiye..

Likhate rahiye.. aate rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...

Khuda Hafez...