Safar Zindagi Ka Chalta Gaya........

by khwaish on June 08, 2009, 06:24:53 PM
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«Reply #30 on: June 14, 2009, 07:40:27 AM »
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sahi kaha Angel ji bohot achhe.
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«Reply #31 on: June 14, 2009, 07:43:36 AM »
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  VERY HEART TOUCHING ANGEL JI
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«Reply #32 on: June 14, 2009, 08:22:53 AM »
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Bahut bahut shukriya Sayyid ji and Shab Usual Smile
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«Reply #33 on: June 15, 2009, 06:58:15 AM »
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thanx, baut achcha,

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Bahut Bahut Shukriya Aseemji..
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«Reply #34 on: June 24, 2009, 05:33:44 AM »
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:icon_salut:Khwaish ji,very sad and touching,aankh bhar aayee.
bahut acha likha aapne.samaj mein nahi aati kya kanhu. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Bahut Bahut Shukriya Madhuji..

Jo Aapne Iss Nazm ko Apna waqt Diya..Teh Dil Se Shukriya Aapka.. Usual Smile
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«Reply #35 on: June 27, 2009, 02:41:52 AM »
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Boat KHoob KHwaish Bhai,.

Bahut Bahut Shukriya Azeem..
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«Reply #36 on: December 17, 2009, 04:07:10 AM »
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bahut bahut khoob Khwaish ji Applause Applause Applause
kamaal likha hai aapne

aur Rahim Bhai aapne bhi khooob likha hai  Applause Applause Applause

Salil ji aapne bhi kamaal likha hai
Applause Applause Applause


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«Reply #37 on: December 22, 2009, 05:59:54 AM »
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Kuch Din pehle ek Aise Shaks Se Meri Mulakaat Hui thi,Jo Ek Waqt Par Bahut Khush Raha karta tha,Phir Kahin Woh Kuch Aise Bure Halaat Ka Shikaar hua Ke Aaj Muskurane Ke Liye Bhi Usse Himmat Jodni Padti Hai..Aaj Woh Apni Zindagi Sirf Jeene Ke Liye Jeeta Hai..Uske Lab par Yeh Shikayat Si rehti Hai Ke "khuda Ne Meri Dua(Ardaas) Kubool Hi Naa Ki",yeh Nazm Woh Shaks To Kabhi nahi padh paayega,Par Yeh nazm Ek Koshish Hai,Ke Chaahe Kuch Bhi Ho,Khuda Par Woh Vishwaas Hamesha Zaroori Hai Aur Safar Zindagi ka Kabhi Nahi thamta..Guzaarish Hai Aap Sab Se Ke Iss Nazm Ko Zaroor Padhe..Shukriya..

Safar Zindagi Ka Yuh Chalta Gaya,
Waqt Ke Haath Se Sarakta Gaya,
Abhi Door Hai Mujhse Saari Manzil-e-Mukaam,
Har Pehar Ke Saath main Ulajhta Gaya...

Safar Zindagi Ka Chalta Gaya....

Aaj Ke Daur Mein Gareebi Ek Saza Hai,
Aur Ameeri Ek Ada!!!
Duniya Ke Iss Jhoote Rasm-O-Riwaaz Mein,
Main Dhalta Gaya...

Safar Zindagi Ka Chalta Gaya....

Woh Baap Jiska Koi Sahara Naa Tha!!
Woh Maa Jiske Paas, Uski Aankh Ka Taara Naa Tha!!
Woh Bache Jiske Mooh Mein Ek Niwaala Tha..
Uss Basti Mein Baashinde To Bahut The,
Par Koi Dilwala Na Tha!!

Zindagi Ke iss Kadwe Sach Ko Dekh Kar Main Darta Gaya..
Safar Zindagi ka Chalta Gaya...

Insaan Yaha Insaan Ka Hi Dushman Hai!!
To "Khwaish" Phir Dost Kaun Hai???
Dil Mein Apne Sawaalo Ka Ek Ghar Sa Banta Gaya..

Safar Zindagi Ka Chalta Gaya...

Eh Khuda,Mujhe Phool Naa De,Koi Gham Nahi, Par Khaar Bhi Naa De!!
Mujhe Jeet Naa De,Naa Sahi Par Haar Bhi Naa De!!
Apna Sar Tere Dar Par Main Malta Gaya..

Safar Zindagi Ka Chalta Gaya...

Khwaab Mere Bhi Toothte Hai Par Main Toothe Khwaab Ke Anjaam Par Rota Nahi!!
Kabhi Nahi Suuni Jaati Hai Fariyaad Meri Bhi Uske Darbaar Mein,
Par Main Apne Khuda Se To Door Hota Nahi!!

Phir Naye Sapne Ko Sanjokar,
Main Aage Badhta Gaya..

Safar Zindagi Ka Chalta Gaya... 

        ~~~~~Khwaish~~~~~


 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause wow kaya baat hai..... bahoot bahoot khoob Khwaish ji.... ek ek shabd kamaal ka likha hai apne... bahoot khoob....
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«Reply #38 on: February 26, 2010, 04:13:25 PM »
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Bahut bahut bahut achha likha hia aapne Khwaish Ji...

har ek lafz dilko chhu sa jaata hai... Sahi hai zindagi ka safar kisi ke liye rukta nahi hia. Hamein ise har haal mein khushi ya dukh ke saath jeena hi padta hai..

ek Koshish karna chahungi...



Is zindagi ke safar pe yunhi chalte rehna hai,
thokar mile ya manzil apnaate jaana hai,

kabhi kabhi mil bhi jaaye raahon mein phool,
unke saath kaanto ko bhi daaman mein sajaate jaana hai,

khatm karna koi kitna hi chahe is safar-e-zindagi ko,
khuda ke is nayaab tohfe ko sar-aankohon pe lagana hai...

Bahut Bahut shukriya Dear Angel!!!!

Aur AAPNE Bhi Bahut Khoob Likha Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #39 on: March 03, 2010, 01:26:28 PM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause wow kaya baat hai..... bahoot bahoot khoob Khwaish ji.... ek ek shabd kamaal ka likha hai apne... bahoot khoob....

Thankyou soooooooooooooooo Much Dear Pooja..

Par Aakhir Kaha Ho Aap?Huh? Shocked Even More
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«Reply #40 on: July 31, 2010, 12:32:57 PM »
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bahut Bahut Shukriya Shab ji..
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«Reply #41 on: July 31, 2010, 12:40:12 PM »
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bht hi pyari nazm khwaish ji...aur aaj ka sach bhi yehi hai..hum chahen na chahen hume chalte rehna hai..har sukh dukh sehna hi hai...fir shikayat kyun aur wo bhi use jisen hume ye sehne ki shakti di hai...
aapki nazm ne mere vishwas ko aur kada kar diya hai ji....
yunhi likhte rahen aur muskurate rahen....

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«Reply #42 on: July 31, 2010, 04:40:14 PM »
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bht hi pyari nazm khwaish ji...aur aaj ka sach bhi yehi hai..hum chahen na chahen hume chalte rehna hai..har sukh dukh sehna hi hai...fir shikayat kyun aur wo bhi use jisen hume ye sehne ki shakti di hai...
aapki nazm ne mere vishwas ko aur kada kar diya hai ji....
yunhi likhte rahen aur muskurate rahen....



Tehhhhhhhhhh Dil Se Shukriya Anamika Ji..

Aapne Iss Nazm Ko padha Aur iske Ehsaas Ko bakhoobi Samjha,Humein Aur Kya Chaahiye

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