sheetalta ki aas kyun?

by bekarar on October 17, 2009, 02:48:18 AM
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तपती हुई दुपहरी मे वर्षा का कयास क्यूँ,
उष्णता ही भाग्य है तो शीतलता की आस क्यूँ,

गेरू-आ पहन भी गर राम और अल्लाह हैं दो,
तो लौट आओ समाज मे ये व्यर्थ का सन्यास क्यूँ,

एक -दूजे को देख-कर, हर एक बस ये सोचता है
सभी हैं मगन खुशी मे और में निराश क्यूँ,

मेरा घर रोशनी से हो भले सराबोर मगर,
बगलवाले झोंपडे मे दिए का प्रकाश क्यूँ,

हुए जमाने साथ मे मिल-बैठ के बतियाए हुए
अपनो के लिए कहो अपनत्व का ही नाश क्यूँ,

होते हुए को भूलना आसान है मुश्किल नही,
जो याद आते हैं सदा, होते नही वो पास क्यूँ

सेवा तो तुम कर ना सके, अब चुप तो रहो कपूत मेरे
वृद्धा-वास्ता की अवधि का हास क्यूँ परिहास क्यूँ,


tapti hui dupahri me varsha ka kayas kyun,
ushnata hi bhagy hai to sheetalta ki aas kyun,

geru-aa pahan bhi gar ram aur allah hain do,
to lout aao samaj me ye vyarth ka sanyaas kyun,

ek -duje ko dekh-kar, har ek bas ye sochta hai
sabhi hain magan khushi me aur mai nirash kyun,

mera ghar roshni se ho bhale sarabor magar,
bagalwale jhonpade me diye ka prakash kyun,

hue jamane saath me mil-baith ke batiyaye hue
apno ke liye kaho apanatv ka hi naash kyun,

hote hue ko bhoolna aasan hai mushkil nahi,
jo yaad aate hain sada, hote nahi wo paas kyun

sewa to tum kar na sake, ab chup to raho kaput mere
vriddha-vastha ki avadhi ka haas kyun parihaas kyun,

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«Reply #1 on: October 17, 2009, 09:50:17 AM »
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Bahut Bahut Khooob Sanjeev Bhai... Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Bahut Dil Se Likhi Gayi Kavita Hai Yeh,Kai Panktiyan To Itne Gehre hai Ke kya Kahen!!! bahut Hi khoob Mere Bhai..

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«Reply #2 on: October 17, 2009, 11:09:12 AM »
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bahoot shukriya khwaish bro....aapke najron se ye rachna gujri aapka prtisaad mila...abhar
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«Reply #3 on: October 17, 2009, 12:31:38 PM »
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wah.

bahut bahut khoobsurat likha hia, har ek shabd jaise dilki gehrayi se nikal ke sach ke aqs ko chhu ke machal gaya ho...

Bahut umdaah...

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«Reply #4 on: October 17, 2009, 01:33:05 PM »
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Bahoot Khoob Likha Bekarar ji
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«Reply #5 on: October 17, 2009, 02:41:32 PM »
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वाह ! वाह संजीव जि बहूत बहूत खूब लिखा है।। और बहूत हि खूबसूरति से आपने जो बात कहि है सच मेअ दिल को छु गैइ ।। आपके शबदों कि अक अक दार सच मेअ कबिले तरीफ़ है।। बहूत बहूत उमदा लिखा है ।। बहूत खूब !
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«Reply #6 on: October 17, 2009, 08:55:19 PM »
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wah.

bahut bahut khoobsurat likha hia, har ek shabd jaise dilki gehrayi se nikal ke sach ke aqs ko chhu ke machal gaya ho...

Bahut umdaah...

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bahoot bahoot shukriya angel aapko kavita pasand aayi..
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«Reply #7 on: October 17, 2009, 08:56:26 PM »
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Bahoot Khoob Likha Bekarar ji
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thanks pankshivam ji
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«Reply #8 on: October 17, 2009, 09:01:37 PM »
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वाह ! वाह संजीव जि बहूत बहूत खूब लिखा है।। और बहूत हि खूबसूरति से आपने जो बात कहि है सच मेअ दिल को चो गै।। आपके शबदों कि अक अक दार सच मेअ कबिले तरीफ़ है।। बहूत बहूत उमदा लिखा है ।। बहूत खूब !

बहूत आभार शब्दों की गहराइयों को आपने बखूबी समझा और मेरा लिखना सार्थक हुआ एक बार पुनः पढ़ने और सराहने के लिए धन्यवाद
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«Reply #9 on: October 17, 2009, 09:10:02 PM »
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KYA BAAT HAI BEKARAR JI.....

JAB JAANTA  HAI INSAAN KISI KO PURA MUKAMAL JAHAN NAHIN MILTA,
FIR DOOSRON KI KHUSHI DEKH KAR KHUD DUKHI HOTA KYUN,
KYA KABHI AESE SOCH TA HAI,JO MUJHE HAI WO KISI AUR KO HAI NAHIN KYUN.
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«Reply #10 on: October 18, 2009, 03:31:52 AM »
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Nice and excellent sanjeev ji...... aapki ye kavita dil ko chu gai h bahut hi acche sabdo me sawara h aapne isse  Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #11 on: October 18, 2009, 04:35:52 AM »
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Bahut bahut khoob Bekarar ji dil ko chu gayee ye lines mere ghar roshni se ho saarobar magar bagal wale jhopdee mein prakaas kyun.bahut pasand aayee.marvelous creation.excellent. icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #12 on: October 20, 2009, 08:31:16 AM »
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tapti hui dupahri me varsha ka kayas kyun,
ushnata hi bhagy hai to sheetalta ki aas kyun,

geru-aa pahan bhi gar ram aur allah hain do,
to lout aao samaj me ye vyarth ka sanyaas kyun,

ek -duje ko dekh-kar, har ek bas ye sochta hai
sabhi hain magan khushi me aur mai nirash kyun,

mera ghar roshni se ho bhale sarabor magar,
bagalwale jhonpade me diye ka prakash kyun,

hue jamane saath me mil-baith ke batiyaye hue
apno ke liye kaho apanatv ka hi naash kyun,

hote hue ko bhoolna aasan hai mushkil nahi,
jo yaad aate hain sada, hote nahi wo paas kyun

sewa to tum kar na sake, ab chup to raho kaput mere
vriddha-vastha ki avadhi ka haas kyun parihaas kyun,



Wah bhaiya wah... bahut bahut khoobsurati se likha hai aapne.

last four lines....... Applause Applause Applause Excellant  Thumbs UP
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«Reply #13 on: November 15, 2009, 01:59:28 AM »
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तपती हुई दुपहरी मे वर्षा का कयास क्यूँ,
उष्णता ही भाग्य है तो शीतलता की आस क्यूँ,

गेरू-आ पहन भी गर राम और अल्लाह हैं दो,
तो लौट आओ समाज मे ये व्यर्थ का सन्यास क्यूँ,

एक -दूजे को देख-कर, हर एक बस ये सोचता है
सभी हैं मगन खुशी मे और में निराश क्यूँ,

मेरा घर रोशनी से हो भले सराबोर मगर,
बगलवाले झोंपडे मे दिए का प्रकाश क्यूँ,

हुए जमाने साथ मे मिल-बैठ के बतियाए हुए
अपनो के लिए कहो अपनत्व का ही नाश क्यूँ,

होते हुए को भूलना आसान है मुश्किल नही,
जो याद आते हैं सदा, होते नही वो पास क्यूँ

सेवा तो तुम कर ना सके, अब चुप तो रहो कपूत मेरे
वृद्धा-वास्ता की अवधि का हास क्यूँ परिहास क्यूँ,


tapti hui dupahri me varsha ka kayas kyun,
ushnata hi bhagy hai to sheetalta ki aas kyun,

geru-aa pahan bhi gar ram aur allah hain do,
to lout aao samaj me ye vyarth ka sanyaas kyun,

ek -duje ko dekh-kar, har ek bas ye sochta hai
sabhi hain magan khushi me aur mai nirash kyun,

mera ghar roshni se ho bhale sarabor magar,
bagalwale jhonpade me diye ka prakash kyun,

hue jamane saath me mil-baith ke batiyaye hue
apno ke liye kaho apanatv ka hi naash kyun,

hote hue ko bhoolna aasan hai mushkil nahi,
jo yaad aate hain sada, hote nahi wo paas kyun

sewa to tum kar na sake, ab chup to raho kaput mere
vriddha-vastha ki avadhi ka haas kyun parihaas kyun,




Sanjeev bhai-aapki kavita padhta hu...to yakeenan yaad aata hai ki mehsoos karna kisey kehte hai.Rozmarra ki jujharu zindgi mein amritatva ka bodh hai aapki kavita.aapki hur pankti pur nazre rukti hai-chehre ke bhaav badal jaate hai..aur hriday ki tarange
hilore maar jaati hi.anupam rachna ke liye dil ke hur hisse se badhai!!

Prateek
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«Reply #14 on: November 15, 2009, 02:42:29 AM »
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Cara ji aapne bhi bahut khoob likha hai.lovely lines. Applause Applause Applause Applause Thumbs UP
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