Tanz me likhen

by @kaash on June 08, 2009, 01:35:33 PM
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«Reply #15 on: June 09, 2009, 02:26:43 PM »
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PP, dekho ab sayed ka 'S' kha gayi...
Giggle Giggle DOH DOH DOH
phr se maafi chahugi sayed ji.......maaf karna mjhe bahut hansi aa rhi apne upar....khuch jyada hi gadbad ho rhi h
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«Reply #16 on: June 09, 2009, 02:29:32 PM »
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Chalo hansi to ayi kisi bahane se... dekho hamare sath rahogi to yunhi hansti rahogi...
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«Reply #17 on: June 09, 2009, 02:35:27 PM »
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Shukria PP ji n nice description Syed ji, hum aapke topic pe likh rahe hai asha hai aapka bhi mukammal jawaab aayega                                                    Aukaat ke mayne yun to alag alag hain par hum ise tehzeeb se jodte hain,khud pe bharosa kar namumkin si safalta  ko mumkin hi dekhte hain,aukaat hamari zuba se zindagi ko dekhne ke nazarie se pata chalti hai,ye vo hasiyat hai jisme Khuda toufeeq ata karte hain
Kyu aukaat dikhata h insaan insaan ko
kya hoti h aaukat,shukriyaan "kaash" ji ka jo smjhaya mujh anjaan ko
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«Reply #18 on: June 09, 2009, 02:42:32 PM »
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Chalo hansi to ayi kisi bahane se... dekho hamare sath rahogi to yunhi hansti rahogi...
ji syeed ji.....ab thk h.hansi nai bahut hansi aai apni gadbad par
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«Reply #19 on: June 09, 2009, 08:08:01 PM »
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Bohot Khoob Kaash Ji, PP...!!

Is lafz pe likhna mere liye thoda mushkil hai...koshish karti hoon Usual Smile

Insaan Ki Baatain Uski Aukaat Ki Pehchaan Hain
Shayad Iss Raaz Se Kuch Log Bohot Anjaan Hain !!
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«Reply #20 on: June 09, 2009, 08:21:45 PM »
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ummm.....ok new topic is Ghuroor ....ek chota sa verse likh raho hoon....achcha na lage, to sorry tongue3

Ghuroor Bura Hota Hai,
Ye Bhi Ek Nasha Hota Hai,
Ye Bhi Jaan Len, Ki Isse
Na-khush Khuda Hota Hai !!

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«Reply #21 on: June 09, 2009, 08:48:16 PM »
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Very nice Kaash Ji..Thanks Usual Smile

Ghuroor Pe Banda Kyun Itna Itraata Hai
Ghuroor Ek Din Mitti Main Mil Jaata Hai
Bande Hain Khuda Ke, Koi Chota Na Bada
Kyun Koi Khud Ko Sab Se Behtar Hi Paata Hai
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«Reply #22 on: June 09, 2009, 09:22:25 PM »
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Waah...Bohot Khoob Kaash Ji......!!

Ghuroor Se Khuda Har Dil Ko Bachaaye,
Har Dil Main Shama Mohabbat Ki Jalaye,
Kyun Karta Hai Insaan Ghuroor Itna,
Insaan Bhi To Aakhir Mitti Main Mil Jaaye !!
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«Reply #23 on: June 09, 2009, 09:48:05 PM »
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Interesting thread Mr. @kaash, Critique is my fave subject.

Maghrur dil sar hay uncha
Sharir zahen nazar hay dhoka
Khak jisim kia zeest ka bharosa
Hay sab se behtar nidamat ka chogha

'Ramz'
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«Reply #24 on: June 09, 2009, 11:09:04 PM »
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Are you the one to start the topic or the person who writes 4th poetry?

Aye chand tu khoob chamakta hay
aftab ki badolat damakta hay
husn tera chodveen ko khilta hay
daghdar ho ke bhi rat ko husn bakhshta hay

'Ramz'
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«Reply #25 on: June 10, 2009, 02:46:04 AM »
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ji syeed ji.....ab thk h.hansi nai bahut hansi aai apni gadbad par
PP, yunhi hanso pareshan mat ho...
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«Reply #26 on: June 10, 2009, 02:36:20 PM »
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@kaash sahib,

Woh fiza men aur zameen pe hum,
Tanz kaise karen chand pe hum,
Saaf shaffaaf ujala bheje hamen,
Fakhr karenge Khuda ki is naemat pe hum...


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«Reply #27 on: June 10, 2009, 03:55:48 PM »
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Chaand samjhata hai hamen zindagi ka usool,
Chandini chand din phir nahin roshni ka husool,
Utaar charhao ka sabaq samjhata hai is tarah,
Jhoote ujaalon men khoke paigham yeh na jana bhool...


Syed
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«Reply #28 on: June 10, 2009, 03:57:49 PM »
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Ab main naya topic shuroo karta hun dosto...
"Sharab" "Madira" "Maye" par tanz karen...

Shukriya...
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«Reply #29 on: June 10, 2009, 10:05:42 PM »
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Bahut umda Akaash sahib...

Aqal se pedal kar deti hai sharab,
Aankhon pe parda dal deti hai sharab,
Aadmi ko janwar bana kar rakh de aur,
Havas ki aag men jhol deti hai sharab...


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