Tanz me likhen

by @kaash on June 08, 2009, 01:35:33 PM
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Frnds, isme hum kisi bhi important mudde pe likhenge jo man kare aur uska  jawab SHAYRI me likhenge jo hame sahi lage aisa jawaab likhenge, isme mudda chaar round ke baad(us topic ke mutallik 4 jawab ke baad)change hoga..panchwa round jispe aayega vo naya  topic likhega                                                         1st topic is SHAYARI KYA HAI?( i mean is it a art or a instruement for peace)
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«Reply #1 on: June 08, 2009, 07:36:12 PM »
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Topic tha Tanz me likhe, tumhari koshish achchi thi Kaash, bas kisi ne kuch kaha nahi isiliye main bas itna kahuga..........

Ya to majma hain jahilo ka ya meri shayri buri hain

Yeh to mumkin nahi hain Ghayel koi bevajah khamosh rahe...

Main tumko janta nahi kaash lekin agar smajhne ki himmat aur salahiyat hain to gaur karna bohat badi baat kahi hain maine.......
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«Reply #2 on: June 08, 2009, 08:03:24 PM »
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Bohot Khoobb Kaash Ji achcha thread start kiya hai aapne......!!


Aur Sajid Bhai..Sach kaha aapne, Khamoshiyon ki wajah hoti hain...par zaroori nahin ki har khamoshi ki wajah kisi ka na-samajh hona ho, ya kisi ki shayari ka bura hona ho ! Usual Smile

Kai baar achche threads se kuch der nazar se bache reh jaate hain....par der tak nahin !

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«Reply #3 on: June 08, 2009, 08:21:05 PM »
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Sukoon Bhi Deti Hai Shayari,
Ranj Bhi Deti Hai Shayari,
Jazbaat Ka Pairahan Hai Ye
Haal-e-Dil Kehti Hai Shayari
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«Reply #4 on: June 08, 2009, 10:26:44 PM »
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Nice thread Kaash bhai and well written...Applause

Nice one by Talat do too...Applause

Ghayel saheb wakei bahaut gheri baat kehdi apne...Applause
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«Reply #5 on: June 09, 2009, 12:56:10 AM »
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Nice thread shuru kiya aape Kaash ji,shayad humein bhi kuch sikhne ko mille
Sajid ji and Celmira ji very nice lines,
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«Reply #6 on: June 09, 2009, 12:48:16 PM »
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Shukriya Rahim, Madhu, Kaash Ji

Shayari Dil Ki Zubaan Hai
Ehsaas Ka Hota Bayaan Hai
Shayari Ke Rang Main Ab
Chala Chale Jo Kaaravan Hai
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«Reply #7 on: June 09, 2009, 01:34:24 PM »
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Kaash ji....aapke thread k mutabik 4jwabon k baad topic change hoga. SHAYRI par 4 jwab ho chuke h aur ye rha nya topic...shayad thoda ajeeb lage...nya topic h
  AUKAAT
     
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«Reply #8 on: June 09, 2009, 01:40:00 PM »
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PP sahiba, 'auqaat' ke do maane hain 1. waqt ka plural aur 2. haisiyat.
Hum konsa auqaat samjhen... bataiye maherbaani hogi...
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«Reply #9 on: June 09, 2009, 01:51:46 PM »
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PP sahiba, 'auqaat' ke do maane hain 1. waqt ka plural aur 2. haisiyat.
Hum konsa auqaat samjhen... bataiye maherbaani hogi...
haisiyat........rahim ji
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«Reply #10 on: June 09, 2009, 01:53:06 PM »
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PP ji u r rite magar agar aap pehle topic pe shayri likhke naya topic deti to acha hota coz jo participate kar rahe hain vohi to topic change karenge na,pls write a shayri n give the topic 
aapne pahle btaya nai tha na kash ji isliye gadbad ho gyi
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«Reply #11 on: June 09, 2009, 01:56:38 PM »
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PP, Ab Rahim ji kaise ho gaya main...
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«Reply #12 on: June 09, 2009, 01:57:41 PM »
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Khamoshi ko lafj deti shayri
Bhavnao ko jajbaat deti shayari
shayari ki khubiyaan kya btau dost
banjar ko gulsitaan karti shayri

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«Reply #13 on: June 09, 2009, 02:03:44 PM »
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PP, Ab Rahim ji kaise ho gaya main...
maaf kijiyenga ayed ji....... DOH DOH DOH

aaj mjhse bahut gadbad ho rhi h......mjhe is waqt khud par hansi b aa rhi h aur gussa b aa rha h......maafi chahti hu

nya topic h-----AUKAAT(haisiyat)
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«Reply #14 on: June 09, 2009, 02:05:38 PM »
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PP, dekho ab sayed ka 'S' kha gayi...
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