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« on: January 13, 2009, 04:17:21 AM » |
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ye Ghazal maine Ghazals section me bhi post ki thi magar missi ki rquest per yahan bhi post kar raha hon agar gal kiya hon to maafi haqdar hon !!
Us pathar ko bhi zara pighalne do !!
Na do pani mujhe tishnagi se tadapne do !!
Mere angan me charag na jalao abhi !!
zara Mujh ko meri tanha-e-yon se ladne do !!
Na milega pyasa koi is duniya me tumhe !!
Zara is dariya ko bhi samandar banne do !!
Raath bhar meri mazi ke viraniyon me ghumate rahe mujhe !!
Ab zara thairo “waqath –a- saher hai mujhe sajda karne do !!
Hoga insaaf har wo zulamka jo howa hai hum per Qadeer !!
Karo sabar zara sa uski rahemat ko machalne do !!
Qadeer Toopchi
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sub han allah... kya baat kahee hai... title is mind blowing!
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wah kaya baat hai Qadeer ji.. bahoot khoob. Ek ek line kamaal ki likhi hai ,..... magae such main jaise ki khwaish ji ne kaha.. last ki do line... bahoot khoob lagi...Good work!!
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« Reply #5 on: January 13, 2009, 12:29:32 PM » |
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Bahut Khoob Qadeer Ji
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« Reply #6 on: January 13, 2009, 02:19:07 PM » |
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behtareen,kaabel-e-taareef ghazal hai aapki.dumdaar panktiyaan milti rehti hai aapki kalam se padhne ko.Shukriya qadeer ji.
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« Reply #7 on: January 13, 2009, 10:11:01 PM » |
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sub han allah... kya baat kahee hai... title is mind blowing!
Shukriya mere bhai apne izzath di mujhe !! Qadeer Toopchi |
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« Reply #8 on: January 13, 2009, 10:11:42 PM » |
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Bahut khoob Toopchi ji Thank you roja Ji !! Qadeer Toopchi |
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« Reply #9 on: January 13, 2009, 10:14:15 PM » |
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Bahut Bahut Khoob Qadeer Bhai..Aap Lajawaab Likhte Hai..
Akhri Sher Bahut hi khoobsurat Hai.. Bahoth Bahoth Shukriya Bhaijaan Is nachiz ko apni itni izzath kabshi ke aur likh ne ko mann karta hai !! Allah apko hamesha khush rakhe !! Qadeer Toopchi |
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« Reply #10 on: January 13, 2009, 10:15:41 PM » |
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wah kaya baat hai Qadeer ji.. bahoot khoob. Ek ek line kamaal ki likhi hai ,..... magae such main jaise ki khwaish ji ne kaha.. last ki do line... bahoot khoob lagi...Good work!!
Thank you Pooja Ji bus Ap logoon ki hausla Afza-e- hai jo kalam ko masboot bana deti hai !! bahot bahoth shukriya ke apne meri ghazal ko apna waqath diya !! Qadeer Toopchi |
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« Reply #11 on: January 13, 2009, 10:16:55 PM » |
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Bahut Khoob Qadeer Ji
Thanks A lot Rajesh Ji aur pratik Ji ap dono mere kalam izzath bakshi apka ahesan mand hon bhaijaan !! Qadeer Toopchi |
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« Reply #12 on: January 14, 2009, 03:55:04 AM » |
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bahut khoob.............claps
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« Reply #13 on: January 14, 2009, 04:15:49 AM » |
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bahut khoob.............claps
Thanks You very Much Zoya Ji !! Qadeer Toopchi |
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« Reply #14 on: January 14, 2009, 04:41:29 AM » |
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ye Ghazal maine Ghazals section me bhi post ki thi magar missi ki rquest per yahan bhi post kar raha hon agar gal kiya hon to maafi haqdar hon !!
Us pathar ko bhi zara pighalne do !!
Na do pani mujhe tishnagi se tadapne do !!
Mere angan me charag na jalao abhi !!
zara Mujh ko meri tanha-e-yon se ladne do !!
Na milega pyasa koi is duniya me tumhe !!
Zara is dariya ko bhi samandar banne do !!
Raath bhar meri mazi ke viraniyon me ghumate rahe mujhe !!
Ab zara thairo “waqath –a- saher hai mujhe sajda karne do !!
Hoga insaaf har wo zulamka jo howa hai hum per Qadeer !!
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