Zindagi ko halaaton ka insaan nahi, insaan sa banana

by @kaash on January 15, 2010, 10:11:21 AM
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frnds,i have tried to write an inspirational poem(ghazal)
hope u will like



zindagi ko halaaton ka insaan nahi,insaan sa banana
dil ko pathhar se bachana dil ko pathhar na banana


aasmaan me hain parinde,aasmaan ki apni udaan
parwaaz vo bhi hai udaano ko jise jee sa jana


tarbatar chashm ho to ho kabhi ashk ke lie bhi
inhe sochne ke lie aakhon ko bus yaad sa sajana


andekhe khwaab ansuni sadaon se khamoshiyan hain todte
khwaabon ke anjuman me,har khwaab haqeeqat sa lagana


khilo mahko mahkaoo,hargiz bhi aag se na ghabraao
zindagi me gile rakhlo, zindagi se shikwe na nibhana


Talab khwaab ki mizaajon ki shayri ki khushbu hai
rishta har tu "kaash" ishq se bana,ishq ka na banana




Parwaaz - flight,udaan but here its used for a bird
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«Reply #1 on: January 19, 2010, 08:25:52 AM »
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Bahut achchhi Ghazal Hai Kaash Ji
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«Reply #2 on: January 20, 2010, 07:21:25 AM »
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Nice
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«Reply #3 on: January 24, 2010, 08:48:33 AM »
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Very Well Said Kash Ji
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«Reply #4 on: January 29, 2010, 02:24:19 AM »
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Bahut khoob @kaash ji  Applause Applause
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«Reply #5 on: January 30, 2010, 10:25:25 AM »
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Waah Waah Bahoot Khoob Kaash ji
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«Reply #6 on: February 01, 2010, 12:05:30 PM »
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Very nice ghazal Kaash ji. Excellent.
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«Reply #7 on: February 04, 2010, 02:10:59 PM »
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KYA Baat hai Aakash-ji ati sunder rachna.. Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

frnds,i have tried to write an inspirational poem(ghazal)
hope u will like



zindagi ko halaaton ka insaan nahi,insaan sa banana
dil ko pathhar se bachana dil ko pathhar na banana


aasmaan me hain parinde,aasmaan ki apni udaan
parwaaz vo bhi hai udaano ko jise jee sa jana


tarbatar chashm ho to ho kabhi ashk ke lie bhi
inhe sochne ke lie aakhon ko bus yaad sa sajana


andekhe khwaab ansuni sadaon se khamoshiyan hain todte
khwaabon ke anjuman me,har khwaab haqeeqat sa lagana


khilo mahko mahkaoo,hargiz bhi aag se na ghabraao
zindagi me gile rakhlo, zindagi se shikwe na nibhana


Talab khwaab ki mizaajon ki shayri ki khushbu hai
rishta har tu "kaash" ishq se bana,ishq ka na banana




Parwaaz - flight,udaan but here its used for a bird

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«Reply #8 on: February 26, 2010, 10:45:29 AM »
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WAH WAAH WAAAH Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #9 on: December 30, 2011, 05:35:45 AM »
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Bahut khoob likha hai apne
Applause Applause
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