all 4 u

by sam_kapadiya on January 04, 2008, 05:42:13 AM

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sam_kapadiya

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Palkon pe aanso'on ko sajaya na jaa saka
Usko bhi Dil ka haal bataya na jaa saka,

Zakhmon se choor-choor tha yeh Dil mera
Ek zakham bhi us ko dikhaya na jaa saka,

Jab uski yaad aayi to koshish ke ba-wajood
Aankhon main aanso'on ko...


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sam_kapadiya

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Re: all 4 u

«Reply #1 on: January 04, 2008, 05:50:42 AM »

yeh dil har kisi se sambalta to pyar hi kyu karta,
jo wapas ayega nahin uska intezaar hi kyu karta,
milta nahin agar sukon mohabbat ke dard me,
to yeh dil pyar shab pe aitbar hi kyu karta!


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sam_kapadiya

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Re: all 4 u

«Reply #2 on: January 04, 2008, 05:51:12 AM »

yeh dil har kisi se sambalta to pyar hi kyu karta,
jo wapas ayega nahin uska intezaar hi kyu karta,
milta nahin agar sukon mohabbat ke dard me,
to yeh dil pyar shab pe aitbar hi kyu karta!


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sam_kapadiya

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Re: all 4 u

«Reply #3 on: January 04, 2008, 05:56:36 AM »

very good


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natural

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Re: all 4 u

«Reply #4 on: January 04, 2008, 09:34:32 AM »

Nice one's Sam.. Usual Smile


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prmchawla

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Re: all 4 u

«Reply #5 on: January 05, 2008, 03:55:48 AM »

nice one sam bhai,

are dost yeh dosh dil ka nahi kambakat nazaro ka hai,
yeh aakhe na hoti to yeh dil kahi batakta hi nahi,
isi liye to en aakho ke naseeb mai rona likha hai,
warna dil to buraape mai bi jawaan rehta hai.

Prem


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sam_kapadiya

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Re: all 4 u

«Reply #6 on: January 05, 2008, 04:08:46 AM »

Quote from: prmchawla on January 05, 2008, 03:55:48 AM

very good


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Pooja

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Re: all 4 u

«Reply #7 on: January 07, 2008, 05:07:04 AM »

Hello Sam,

Apka yoindia mai sawagat hai.. yah section apki introduction ke liye hai.. yaha apne bare mai kuch bataye.. Poetry ke liye sahi section dekh kar section ke anusar poetry post kijiye!!
Best of Luck!!!