Gumshuda aaya koi apke bazm main

by Gumshuda on February 03, 2010, 07:07:56 PM
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Gumshuda
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Tamaam waqt se aapki bazm main ek mehmaan yani Guest ki tarah aata raha per shayad ab waqt aa gaya hai ki main bhi yahan shaamil ho jaun.


Kisi ne naam poocha toh gumshuda bata diya
Kisin ne kaam poocha toh gumshuda bata diya
Na mile kisi ko asia maine logon ko pata diya
Jo poocha kisie ne maine aise hi bata diya


Toh Janaab aapki bazm main  "Gumshuda" ke naam se shaamil hona chah rahe hain. Barahekaram ijaazat dijiye !
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madhuwesh
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«Reply #1 on: February 03, 2010, 07:44:11 PM »
Hmmm nice intro Gumshuda ji.welcome to yo. Welcome Banner hello
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Gumshuda
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«Reply #2 on: March 01, 2010, 07:20:11 PM »
Lagta hai mausam main kaafi masrufiyat hai jo mere "tarruf" ko zyada tavvajo nahi mili. Yahi wajah rahi ki baar-baar main Yoindia pe aaya per fir bhi kuch likhne ki jurrat na kar saka. Agar thora aur garmjoshi se meri aamad ko liya jata toh aur accha lagta hai.

Par, Madhuvesh Sahiba ka shukraguzar hun main!
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SURESH SANGWAN
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«Reply #3 on: March 01, 2010, 07:57:10 PM »
WAAH JI WAAH UMDA GUMSHUDA JI.

KISI NE NAHIN POOCHA TO KHUD HI BATA DIYA.
KOI BHOOLNE KO THA USKO YAAD DILA DIYA.

Tamaam waqt se aapki bazm main ek mehmaan yani Guest ki tarah aata raha per shayad ab waqt aa gaya hai ki main bhi yahan shaamil ho jaun.


Kisi ne naam poocha toh gumshuda bata diya
Kisin ne kaam poocha toh gumshuda bata diya
Na mile kisi ko asia maine logon ko pata diya
Jo poocha kisie ne maine aise hi bata diya


Toh Janaab aapki bazm main  "Gumshuda" ke naam se shaamil hona chah rahe hain. Barahekaram ijaazat dijiye !
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Gumshuda
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«Reply #4 on: March 03, 2010, 06:30:13 PM »

KISI NE NAHIN POOCHA TO KHUD HI BATA DIYA.
KOI BHOOLNE KO THA USKO YAAD DILA DIYA.

Wah.. aapne toh bohot umda kaha..

Aur ji shukriya hozla afzai ka !
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Talat
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«Reply #5 on: March 03, 2010, 06:34:26 PM »
A warm Welcome to Yoindia, Gumshuda Ji....ummeed hai aapke kalam padhne ka mauqa milta rahega hume.....!
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Gumshuda
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«Reply #6 on: March 03, 2010, 06:38:02 PM »
Main khoya hi kab tha per ..
Hum unke paas ja na sake..
Goya, aur aise hue Gumshuda,
Kisi  bhi awaaz pe aa na sake !!
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Gumshuda
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«Reply #7 on: March 03, 2010, 06:38:26 PM »
Shukriya Celmira mohtarma !
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