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by Ghanshyam Yadav on April 18, 2012, 01:22:33 AM
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Hello friends and the senior poets,
Main Ghanshyam Yadav, Alwar, Rajasthan se hun. Likhne ka mujhe bhi shouk hai, main kafi kavitayein likh chuka hun lekin ab tak share nahi kiya thaa. Mere friend Iftakhar jee, jo ki Yoindia shayar hain, unho.n ne mujhe Yoindia k baare mein bataya, aur aaj main Yoindia pe apni shayari ki shuruat karne jaa raha hun.  Aap logo.n ka samarthan aur aashirwad chahunga. To pesh hai Yoindia pe meri pehli rachna-

Jisne apni zindagi mein khoya hai paya nahi
Dard mein bhi raag jisne gham bhara gaaya nahi
Jiski saansei.n chal rahi hai.n kewal tere naam se
Dar  usse lagta  nahi  hai  kisi  bhi anjaam se
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«Reply #1 on: April 18, 2012, 02:12:42 AM »
Hello friends and the senior poets,
Main Ghanshyam Yadav, Alwar, Rajasthan se hun. Likhne ka mujhe bhi shouk hai, main kafi kavitayein likh chuka hun lekin ab tak share nahi kiya thaa. Mere friend Iftakhar jee, jo ki Yoindia shayar hain, unho.n ne mujhe Yoindia k baare mein bataya, aur aaj main Yoindia pe apni shayari ki shuruat karne jaa raha hun.  Aap logo.n ka samarthan aur aashirwad chahunga. To pesh hai Yoindia pe meri pehli rachna-

Jisne apni zindagi mein khoya hai paya nahi
Dard mein bhi raag jisne gham bhara gaaya nahi
Jiski saansei.n chal rahi hai.n kewal tere naam se
Dar  usse lagta  nahi  hai  kisi  bhi anjaam se

aap ka swaagat hai yadav ji.
aur aapki ye chaar lines aap ke personality ko reflect karti hai. bahut khoob kahaa hai aapne.

  keep writing..........!


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«Reply #2 on: April 18, 2012, 09:04:27 AM »
welcome to Yoindia Shayariadab Yadav ji--

aapka iss meffil me dil dil se swagat hai Usual Smile
aapki pehli rachna bht hi khoob hai janaab
mubarak ho aapko--
issi tarah se apni shayri/kavitayen humare saath share karte rahie

aate rahie
muskurate rahie
likhte rahie
khus rahie
--
fir milte hain Usual Smile
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«Reply #3 on: April 18, 2012, 09:09:59 AM »
most welcome achhee peshkash ke saath hardik badhaai
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